Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
01 Dec 2024, 1:30am
Maul nodded in response to Willow as he followed the cables from Odin's head to it's body. While he didn't fully agree with Seraphine and her use of Oceane, he did see the usefulness of such an AI but it needed some sort of guardrails in place to keep it from being utilized in a harmful way. This could prove to be an excellent opportunity to test that theory.

"Well, since I'm gonna have some downtime, I could hangout here and see about making Odie play nice with Oceane...Odiane? while I touch base with some old mutual contacts. The newer OS's from Achilles have a lot of baked in safety features in their public releases so that might be hindering the whole thing. Been wanting to look into this sorta thing anyhow. Back on the Anansi, Oceane took some initiative and used AVA, an AI project of mine, without my direction, so it clearly CAN work. I just don't know exactly how or why."

He picked up Odin's head and looked into its eye, then back to Willow.

"Can make sure to keep Odie's original programing intact, flaws and all if ya like. If Oceane don't take without needing to alter Odie, I can just ditch the project entirely. Up to you though. S'ides, y'all got shopping to do and it beats just sitting here twiddling my thumbs."


Last edit: 01 Dec 2024, 1:39am
01 Dec 2024, 1:51am
"Er, Ocean? Nar-nar-nar. Ocean was a special gift for her Little Treasure" said Willow trying out a French accent. "I got an assistant, learning, program, thing" muddled Willow trying to remember what the Doctor had said it was.

"I don't want a super-smart AI droid, okay? Like I just want a helpful one. I mean, right now he's fine, you know? Works perfectly, but like he's not too good with words"

It was time for a demonstration.

"Odie, get the the micro-motors container would ya, please?"

The droids one good eye regarded its body sitting beside it for a moment, and then it said.

"Reception is closed until the next daylight cycle"

Pushing her hands towards the vocally challenged head in a You See motion, Willow felt Odie made her point for her.


Last edit: 01 Dec 2024, 2:28am
01 Dec 2024, 2:31am
Odin's head still in hand, Maul looked between it and Willow before simply replying "...Oh..." He gently placed the head back down on the surface. "...That's...odd..."

"I can still take a crack at sorting it out if you'd like." He said, using his sleeve to polish off some of his fingerprints from Odin's head. "Where'd you even get this thing?"
01 Dec 2024, 2:54am
"Yeah so, I've had everything from the hips below for like, ever, you know? Um, I got an arm off Oak, but it didn't have a hand. Umm, Oh, the head I like, picked the best one from a pile of them I found in a container on a reboot'n'loot job. I mean, I say best one. Like, it was the only one with an eye, you know?

"Oh wow, like I can't remember where the rest come from. Its like, every time a droid is thrown out, some one uses it for target practice. Like, So many torsos are totally burned out by lasers, or like, smashed by bullets, you know? and thats where the computer is. Like, the head is just sensors and secondary gyros. So yeah. Finding a good mother board and the rest of the core was like, the hardest part"

"Er, yeah, whatever. See what you can do. I'll put you guys on the security clearance and like, get you both a card made before we go shopping for bad guy bribes. Okay?"
01 Dec 2024, 3:20am
Seeing that things were about to get highly technical with regards to Odie, and Vasil not having enough technical knowledge to be of use, he rolled his shoulders and stood up. “I’ll leave you two to tinker with the metal all-father. No rush. I’ll get the reward notice published and start sourcing bulk suppliers for the parts Willow thinks might be needed for the interdictor.”

He started to leave but stopped at the door to the front of the shop as a realization came to him, and looked back.. “Now that I think about it, most of your shopping list is probably on the Emerald Dawn, intended to support ERS efforts to repair damaged stations. However, with Cocijo headed toward the core systems, the carrier’s mission focus has shifted to the expected influx of core system refugees. Cargo space needs to be freed up for food and medicine.”

“I’ll send you a cargo inventory, Willow. Tell me what you think you’ll need and I’ll have it tagged for transfer.” Leaving the shop, he called out, joking “Careful, Maul. Odie needs an eye, you have two good ones, and there are lots of sharp objects in Willow’s workroom.”
01 Dec 2024, 4:34am
Thanks to Vasil, he had suddenly become very aware of his own optics. Optics which very quickly glanced around his immediate area for any sharp objects before settling again on Willow. He did recall her being oddly fascinated by them when he first visited this very shop.

"Vasil can be a real hoot, huh?." He laughed semi-nervously, thinking of a way to quickly change the subject and shake the thoughts of having an eye removed...again.

"With all this Goid business about to go down in Sol, I sure hope the doc gets outta there." He said as he turned the monitor connected to Odin towards him to see the lines of code that had previously ran. "Shit, it's honestly impressive that you managed to get this thing to run at all with it being cobbled together from secondhand parts like this. Most hardware is proprietary bullshit, especially Achilles hardware, but it looks like you managed to get it all running nicely together.

"Was this all you or did you have some Network techno-sage assist with breaking through that wall?" He asked without looking away from the monitor as he began swiping up through the lines of code of the screen.
01 Dec 2024, 9:29am
"What? like that was all me. You know, orbital evisceration uses a spoon-like tool with a sharp edge, but like, thats for getting rid of a bad eye, you know? So, in Enucleation, you need something that isn't sharp. It's more like a loop that you use to extract the eyeball and pull it clear of the orbit, or eye socket. Once you got there eye raised a bit, you do need to cut the muscles. Can't beat a good old scalpel for that"

Willows matter of fact voice was genuine. She had preformed both producers a lot, but only on corpses that needed plenty of reconstruction before being laid to rest.

"But whatever Em, you can relax. Cyber implants aint compatible with Achilles droids. Like, I think" said Willow picking up her pad to look up something totally not related to eye implant compatibility.


Last edit: 01 Dec 2024, 9:47am
01 Dec 2024, 8:15pm
Once back on the long road, Vasil created the reward notice to be used as a smokescreen for getting in contact with the pirates that had marooned Creamy, and set it for broad distribution across the major news feeds for the next three weeks. In spite of the notice being a ruse, Vasil knew that people would submit tips.

They’d claim to have seen him working under another name in Colonia, or that he had surgery to change his appearance, or that a fat Johnny Bright was working at a KrumbleMunch Donut. Vasil informed ERS public relations, who would be handling any tips, to ignore all tips except those claiming Johnny was abandoned on an uninhabited world. Anything else would be rubbish.

As for the parts Willow thought would be in demand for bringing the interdictor online, Vasil contacted the Emerald Dawn and had them forward her an inventory of parts they had  for station and ship repair. In all, roughly 5000 metric tons of parts were on the list, ranging from simple computer components to station-grade shock mounts.

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