Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
09 Nov 2017, 12:14am
Kyla lends a nod to Penelope as she walks off. "I'm sure she'll keep the clients happy. Lead the way."

"I got your package, by the way," she says as they head toward Jem's office. "The dock scrubs should have it delivered here soon. The look on the guy's face after you had a word with him was priceless."


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09 Nov 2017, 9:27am
Jemine leads Kyla along the scented, door-lined corridor towards her private office at the far end.

"Thank you for collecting it for me. That's another drink I owe you."

Jemine opens the office door and ushers Kyla inside, closing the door behind them. Gesturing for Kyla to take a seat on the cream fabric sofa in the corner, Jemine briskly steps across to her desk and taps the surface once or twice. Then she turns to Kyla, smiles and raises her arms, indicating the room in general.

"Well?" she asks. "What do you think?"
09 Nov 2017, 9:35am
Kyla looks around, admiring the picture window of the planetary landscape before taking a seat on the sofa.

"Well, first, I think I need to start keeping tally of the drinks you owe me. Second, you have really expensive taste." She inhales deeply through her nose. "Third, what's that scent in the air? It's kind of familiar."
09 Nov 2017, 10:53am
There is a mischievous gleam in Jemine's eye.

"The scent is olive blossom... though in the bar and the bedrooms we mix in a little sex pheromone to help our clients raise their, ah, enthusiasm. It's subtle, but it works."

She turns to gaze at the holographic picture window of the planetary landscape, and sighs softly.

"I noticed you were admiring this. It's my homeworld, in LHS 3447. So realistic, it's like looking out of a window onto the actual plain itself. From time to time you can even see the trees moving in the wind. That's the spot where I gave birth to my daughter, Bekka."
09 Nov 2017, 7:31pm
"It's pretty," Kyla says. "Whenever I go home, I get tempted to just stay there." She turns to Jem. "Have you been back?"
09 Nov 2017, 8:38pm
Jemine nods, her smile turning into a frown.

"Yes, I've been back several times. The last time was shortly before--"

She is interrupted by a beeping from her desktop. She taps the display, and Suki's holofac appears.

"Miss Jemine, the consignment of bedding has arrived. It's all in order. I've arranged for it to be taken to the linen room, as you requested."

"That's wonderful, Suki. Thank you."

Jemine dismisses the holofac and then turns to Kyla. "Suki is my senior receptionist. She's very efficient. Worth her weight in low temperature diamonds. So, what are your plans, Kyla? I can offer you a position here, if you're looking for a job!"
09 Nov 2017, 9:44pm
Kyla chuckes. "Please, I'd scare your clientele off with my personality alone. Besides, this isn't my kind of gig." She goes back to admiring the picture window. "But if you need someone reliable and sassy to pick stuff up for you, you know where to find me."
10 Nov 2017, 8:16am
"Thanks," says Jemine. "I appreciate your friendship."

She gazes at the holo-image of her homeworld for several moments, lost in her memories. Then, with a sharp tilt of her head, she shakes herself out of her reverie and back to the present. She turns to Kyla.

"So, how about I give you that guided tour I promised? You can see all the delights of The Olive Grove."
10 Nov 2017, 8:49am
Kyla nods. "That was the plan wasn't it? I want to see what's changed since we last drank together."
10 Nov 2017, 11:20am
"What's changed?" repeats Jemine, leading Kyla out of the office and into the green-carpeted corridor. "Well, I'm no longer a spacer for a start. I sold my Vulture and sank virtually every credit into The Olive Grove.  You should have seen the place before I bought it; filthy bedrooms, stinking washrooms, dingy lighting and dismal decor."

Jemine opens one of the doors on the left side of the corridor, revealing a bedroom. The walls are a pleasant shade of peach, softened with loosely tied-back chiffon curtains. The room is bathed in a soothing glow of amber light. Against one wall is a large bed, covered in polysatinester sheets. The air carries the light perfume of olive blossom.

"The other standard bedrooms are almost identical," says Jemine, "though there are variations in the colour schemes; dusky pink, deep lilac, and so on."


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10 Nov 2017, 9:21pm
Kyla glances around the room, admiring the work that went into setting the place up. "I can see a lot of work went into this. You've done well Jem Jem, although..."

She pokes Jem in the shoulder. "Do you think you'll miss being a spacer?"
10 Nov 2017, 9:59pm
Jemine's eyes become misty.

"No. No, I don't think I'll miss it at all. I feel happy here, Kyla. I'm finally facing up to my past, and embracing it instead of pushing it away. I may be just a brothel madam, one more nobody in a galaxy full of nobodies. But, in my own small way, I like to think I'm making a difference..."

Jemine pauses, shakes her head, and then laughs.

"You must think I'm talking a complete load of crap. Come on, let's continue the tour."
10 Nov 2017, 10:06pm
Kyla shrugs. "I dunno Jem. I was almost ready to pack it in and stay planet side after that silly attempt at Colonia. I'm sure you remember what a mess I was after all that."

She smiles and gestures Jem forward. "Lead the way."
10 Nov 2017, 11:14pm
Jemine shrugs as she leads Kyla out of the bedroom and back into the corridor.

"I do remember," she says. "And I suppose one should never say never. But I truly feel that this is where I belong. This is who I am now. I don't see myself ever piloting a ship again. It would take something really serious to make me change my mind."

Jemine takes Kyla along the corridor and into the spacious, low-lit bar. The air is scented with olive blossom, and Hangar music plays over the speakers. At one end of the room is the bar counter, on which are bowls of complimentary olives and peanuts. A man with grey hair and optical enhancers stands chatting to the young blonde barmaid. Several other men of various ages sit at the tables, drinking and watching a scantily-clad pole dancer performing in a cage.

Jemine takes a sideways look at Kyla, and raises an eyebrow.

"You want a drink?" she asks.
11 Nov 2017, 1:21am
"You know me so well." Kyla smirks. "If you ever miss Space, there's an extra seat on my Cobra if you want a ride, even if it's just for the hell of it."

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