Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
18 Nov 2017, 9:02pm
Esma continued her lackadaisical wandering through Citi's Entertainment disctrict.

Is it too much to ask for a kick-ass place to grab a pint?

And then she walked past the Olive Grove. She popped open her PDA and tried to find out info on the place, as it did look quite fancy. As she tried to find out if the place had a menu, she dropped onto a bench across the corridor and eyed the other pedestrians suspiciously.
18 Nov 2017, 11:21pm
Ah screw it, I'm not going to find anything on this place on this thing that I won't from just walking in.

She slid the PDA into her orange cargo pocket and walked across the corridor to the Olive Grove's front door. She opened the door to a fragrance, quite inviting and permeating, but she couldn't put her finger on it.

She looked around at the rather lavish interior decorations. Yeah, this place is probably outta my price range.

She clumsily bumped into the front desk of what she thought was a restaurant hostess. "Could I get a table?"
18 Nov 2017, 11:26pm
Kyla shrugs, "But people do kill each other over the crap that does get smuggled. I guess that's not my issue in the end though is it?"
18 Nov 2017, 11:38pm
"No," says Jemine. "I suppose it isn't."

Jemine yawns suddenly.

"Oh! I'm so sorry, Kyla!" she says, an embarrassed look on her face. "I'm afraid the last couple of days are finally catching up with me. I didn't sleep at all for the opening day yesterday, and I only managed a few hours nap before coming in today. I really need to have a lie down."
19 Nov 2017, 9:38am
Kyla stands up, nodding. "Yeah you should probably get some rest. I'm sure the place can handle itself for a few hours. Need anything else picked up by any chance?"
19 Nov 2017, 10:16am
"No, thank you, honey" replies Jemine, "There's nothing in particular I need... other than some shut eye. I don't think I'll finish the coffee."

She stands and crosses to the desk, then taps the display top a few times. The holofac image of Suki appears.

"Suki," Jemine says, "I'm going to take a break for an hour or so. Watch my comms, and give me a call if anything urgent comes in. OK?"

"Yes, Miss Jemine," comes the reply. Jemine breaks the contact, and then turns to Kyla.

"Thank you for coming over with the linen. And for listening to me ranting. And I'm very glad that you like what I'm doing here. It means a lot to me. Keep in touch, hmm?"
19 Nov 2017, 12:46pm
"Konbanwa," says Suki to the silver-haired woman approaching the reception podium. "Welcome to The Olive Grove. Your pleasure is our pleasure."

Suki blinks in mild surprise when the silver-haired woman bumps into the podium, but continues to smile.

"A... table, you say?"


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19 Nov 2017, 7:36pm
"Kobayashi to you too." Esma continues to look around at the grandeur of the lobby.

"Yeah, a table would do lovely. I don't really like sitting at bars because I can never see what's going on around me." She smiled at the receptionist. "This place looks pretty swanky."
19 Nov 2017, 8:27pm
Suki continues to smile politely at the silver-haired woman.

"Arigatou gozaimasu," she begins, then quickly adds, "Thank you very much. Miss Jemine has worked very hard to make The Olive Grove into an attractive and convivial venue. I will be sure to pass on your compliments to her."

She surreptitiously looks the woman up and down, her smile not fading for an instant.

"So," she continues, "you request a... table. Forgive me for asking, but..." her voice drops to a whisper; "what do you intend to do with it?"
19 Nov 2017, 9:03pm
Esma blinks and stares at Suki for a moment.

What do I intend to do with it? How far outta the bubble did I go this time?

"Well I would suppose I'd sit at the table, maybe enjoy a drink and some food. Take in the scenery?"
19 Nov 2017, 10:11pm
Suki's smile does not falter.

"Ah! The scenery! I understand. You wish to see what The Olive Grove has to offer, no? We have much beautiful... scenery. You will see for yourself. Please, may I take your name...?"
19 Nov 2017, 10:28pm
"Esma."

Does she always smile this much?
19 Nov 2017, 10:56pm
Suki's smile broadens a little.

"Esma," she repeats, tapping the name into her dataslate. "Esma san, would you like a drink first, or would you rather inspect the... the scenery?"
19 Nov 2017, 11:27pm
I thought she'd never ask!

"A drink would be amazing, thanks." She smiled back at Suki. "Lead the way!"
20 Nov 2017, 9:01am
Suki, still smiling, gives Esma a polite blow.

"Of course. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu, follow me."

Suki leads Esma along the short, olive blossom perfumed corridor towards the bar room. She opens the door to the bar, and stands aside.

"Here we serve many most popular drinks. You may order at the bar counter, or take a seat and use the menu on the tabletop 'slate. The olives are complimentary. Someone will be along soon to ask your further pleasure."

The bar is occupied by around a dozen men, all seated drinking at tables. There are three empty tables in the centre of the room, and a vacant booth set to one side. Music is playing. A flame-haired woman of about 25 is standing behind the counter.

"Enjoy your visit, Esma san," says Suki. Giving another polite bow to Esma, she leaves the bar.


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