Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
09 Dec 2017, 9:57am
Datura looked down at his gloved hand and clenched it into a fist, then looked back up to Phisto. "I take it by now you heard about the commotion at Clair Dock?" He said.

A bar worker strutted toward the pair, handing Simon a freshly opened beer. He nodded as thanks, handing a tip to the worker before she returned to the bar.
09 Dec 2017, 10:43am
Nathalie looks at Jemine, before powering off, and holster her taser gun.

"Idris, huh? Well, welcome to my hunting list, I guess. C'mon, let's get you back into your building."

She takes a look at the street where Jemine came from, before frowning and following Jemine.
09 Dec 2017, 11:22am
For a moment, Phisto eyes Simon's gloved hand.

"Yeah.  Nasty business."  He frowns slightly then smiles as the waitress delivers Simon's order.  "Hope you didn't lose anyone close."
09 Dec 2017, 11:33am
"I don't know if I'd consider myself close to anyone in Pegasi." Simon takes a long swig of his beer. "I was there for a relative short time. I sent the only person I could truly call myself close to away to get her pilot's license when I first arrived there a while ago... But that's a long story."

Last edit: 09 Dec 2017, 11:39am
09 Dec 2017, 11:36am
Sam had meanwhile taken it on himself to calm any panic that had occurred within the Olive Grove caused by the mysterious man who only minutes before had been brandishing a rifle within the confines of the establishment. By now, he was calling the security company who usually supplied services to the Grove, asking where in Gaia's name they'd been.
09 Dec 2017, 11:36am
"Idris is just a bodyguard," says Jemine. "He's no more than a puppet for Morgan to control. I don't care about Idris."

Jemine falls silent. She and Nathalie walk into the Entertainment District and back along the crowded concourse towards The Olive Grove.

"Come in for a coffee," she says to her friend, "and I'll tell you everything that's happened to me since we last met."
09 Dec 2017, 11:50am
Phisto shrugs and takes a sip of his beer.

"Hey, there's a backward kinda virtue in never getting close to anyone. Anyway... who was she? Girlfriend or something?"
09 Dec 2017, 2:40pm
Nahtalie looks at Jemine while they are walking through the Olive Grove.

"Order several ones, I'd need all details you have."
09 Dec 2017, 4:48pm
Sam spotted them within the Olive Grove and headed towards them "Business as usual now, forgot how thick skinned Inarans are. Seeing the expression on Jem's face, his response was instant. "The usual with no sugar?"
09 Dec 2017, 7:09pm
"Yes please, Sam," replies Jemine. "Lattes for Nath and me, and whatever you want for yourself. Nath and I are going to have a bit of a catch-up chat."

Nodding to Suki as she passes through the reception area, Jemine waits for Sam to order the drinks, and then leads the way along the central corridor to her private office.

"Well now," Jemine says to Nathalie, "the last time we saw each other was over a year ago. You came to see me on Clair Dock in Tjakiri, remember? I'd been tricked into going there by Elian Thiessen to work for Black Omega..."




(OOC footnote - readers will be pleased to know that I don't intend to recount the events of the past year all over again here! It's all in my logs, so if you haven't read them, now's a good time to do some catching up of your own.)


Last edit: 09 Dec 2017, 8:47pm
09 Dec 2017, 7:20pm
Sam ordered the drinks without delay, taking no shame in flirting with the barmaid in the meantime. He eventually entered the private office following a brief knock, bearing two lattes and a tea for himself, placing them onto the desk. "Don't mind me hanging around I hope?"
09 Dec 2017, 9:18pm
Simon chuckles. "I guess you could say that... In a way. She also crewed with me for a while until I got pursued by a bunch of ruthless thugs and ended up in Pegasi. I took down their boss and they wanted my head." He takes another swig. "What are you doing with yourself these days?"
09 Dec 2017, 11:22pm
Jemine picks up her coffee and takes a sip, then looks at Sam and smiles.

"I don't mind you hanging around in the slightest," she tells him. "Though you already know all the details of what I have to tell Nath."

Gesturing for Nath and Sam to take a seat on the sofa, Jemine moves round to sit at her desk. She taps her desktop and reads from the display, then leans back in her chair and takes another sip of coffee.

"It's almost midnight," she says. "This has been quite a long day, one way and another. So, let's see... I was at Clair Dock, working for Black Omega under Marty Aston. At first I was able to satisfy him by running cargo deliveries, but then he told me that I had to start doing some real work...
09 Dec 2017, 11:31pm
Nathalie would listen to the whole story, sipping coffee, mainly with a frown on her face, making sure to print mentioned names in her brain.
10 Dec 2017, 1:52am
Phisto rolls his eyes and sighs melodramatically before matching Simon's gaze again with a grin. "Work! Got so much going on I can hardly keep my head straight."

He kicks back his head and finishes his beer. Lackadaisically pointing the bottle at Simon. "Stopped in here for a quick break, and I'll tell you what, the staff know their trade."

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ROLEPLAY ONLY! Respect the universe settings!
If you are new here, please try to at least partially involve in the ongoing stories and conversations instead of establishing a completely different "arc". You can always turn it to a different story later.