Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
30 Dec 2017, 6:52pm
Jellicoe nodded. "Yes it's become that. I've seen a lot of death in my time, dished out a fair bit of it myself but you don't see the reality of it from a cockpit, you don't see the wreckage it leaves behind, sitting in their house, seeing two hollowed out shells where people used to be, it affects you, I suppose I should be glad it did, proves there might be some spark of humanity left, and she meant a lot to someone close to me. But there you go, I need to do this, yes for them but also for myself, I need to prove I'm not becoming a monster,"
31 Dec 2017, 5:03am
Stryker nodded slowly. As he did he whispered. "Becoming monsters..." Looking down he flexed each individual talon like fingers of his prostetic cybernetic claw.

"It's too late for some of us..."

He gazed back into the inspectors eyes. "Who was it? The person close to you if you don't mind my asking?"
31 Dec 2017, 4:45pm
"Well that's one possibility," Cartlidge replied, his gaze shifting back and forth, scanning the hallway for a sign that Ten might just reappear. "Go check the bar."

Cartlidge turned to walk down the hallway, hoping that she wasn't too far ahead of them.
31 Dec 2017, 7:37pm
"The mother of my son, she was a good friend of Mhera's parents and saw her grow up. She is, as you can imagine, not in a good way. And it's never too late."
01 Jan 2018, 2:46pm
Stryker nodded, then frowned at Jellicoe's words.

"Never too late... You have a lot to learn about Pegasi. It changes people. And not in a good way."

Pausing for a moment to inspect another peice of equipment the large man continued. "What have you found out so far?"
01 Jan 2018, 6:17pm
"Probably not much more than you know already; she was captured in the Pleiades by some small time hoodlum, then snatched by Black Omega on the way back to the bubble and ended up in Tjakiri where she was put into Exotica. She must have been more to them than just another girl though because they wouldn't sell her to me, and trust me I offered a lot, I believe she was doing some work for this Doctor Glaboski but I don't know what, my instincts are that it had something to do with that. Then of course she was killed when Exotica went up, I've no way of knowing but my instincts tell me she was a small pawn in a much bigger game, find out who blew the club and that may be the key, though whether there'd be anything that could be done about it is another matter entirely."
01 Jan 2018, 7:00pm
Luke strode quickly and decisively towards the bar, pausing only when he reached the entrance where he quickly scanned the premises for Ten. Seeing no sign of her, he turned on his heel and walked out.

He kept his head up as he checked the crowds for her, but didn't hold out much hope that he'd spot her though. Instead he contemplated what direction she'd likely head in when it dawned on him, Stryker. She'd been set on punishing Jemine when a connection between her and Mhera's death was made, but Jemine was in the bar surrounded by people. No way she'd try anything there. Stryker on the other hand, could be anywhere.

Even with his brute strength, Luke doubted Stryker would fare well against a cyborg. Then again, he did have that claw of his. Deciding it was in Ten's interest that she be found, Luke continued to search heading in the direction he hoped she'd gone.
01 Jan 2018, 8:07pm
Stryker set the object down and narrowed his eyes.

"I worked my ass off trying to get enough credits to buy Mhera out of that hell hole. And every time I made enough, they would set the bar higher. They didn't release her until she agreed to work with that price of shit doctor. I don't know the specifics, but it had something to do with some plant that causes infertility and a cybernetic implant."

His eye went hollow and he thought about Jemine for a second.

"After Omega got what they wanted from her, they released her. I was picking her up from Exotica when the explosion occurred.
01 Jan 2018, 8:24pm
Jellicoe grimaced, sensing the mans pain. "That figures, they got me to, well, do things I'd rather not have done for them but it was never enough. I wonder why a criminal firm is interested in infertility? A weapon I could understand but that?"
01 Jan 2018, 8:47pm
"That's exactly what they did with it. They made it into a weapon." He shook his head.

"It's all about leverage." He said.

Stryker thought for a bit unsure what to make of the inspector.

"I'm going to make that doctor pay."
01 Jan 2018, 9:18pm
Jellicoe thought hard, this tangle of threads had to have some pattern, some order to it but he felt further away from seeing it than ever.

"Who do they want to leverage though?" He asked, half to himself. "This doctor I presume is the neuro-scientist? This is a long way outside his field though, do you know who's pulling his strings?"
01 Jan 2018, 10:09pm
Stryker nodded.

"Mhera Complained about Glaboski. He's as amoral as they come. She said he wasn't much of a botanist, but yes, he's a neurosurgeon. We rounded, as an ex Omega enforcer, we rounded up subjects for his experimentation. Now that Marra is gone, we know she's not pulling his strings. Could be the new Pontifex."
01 Jan 2018, 10:19pm
"From what I gather he can't afford to show his face in the core worlds so I suppose he has to grovel to whoever the big noise out there is. Alright one thing I could never work out, they knew she was a scientist, she even worked in their labs for a bit, why did they throw her in the brothel? Why not make use of her skills?"
01 Jan 2018, 10:52pm
"They didn't know."

His gaze was hard upon the blind haired inspector.

"The slavers that hijacked her ship in Maia had no idea. They had no records. When she was sold to a harem, and Black Omega intercepted the transport, there were no records of who she was. I only recognized her from a short introduction here at Citi a long time ago."

He shrugged.

"And Glaboski was with me. He visited the Brother frequently and must have recognized her as well and pushed to get her in his lab."


Last edit: 01 Jan 2018, 10:58pm
01 Jan 2018, 11:47pm
Jellicoe grimaced, "Seems I put two and two together and got five. The two people I'd most like to speak to are on the run and unlikely to show their faces any time soon and I very much doubt the good doctor will agree to an interview," He stroked his chin as he thought, "Never work in the Pegasi they say, now I see why."

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