Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
10 Dec 2017, 2:14pm
Sam chuckled a little to Jem's response, allowing for a brief kiss before setting himself on the couch. "Doesn't always mean it stays in the brain mind you."
10 Dec 2017, 10:10pm
Jemine recounts the main events from the past year of her life to Nathalie.  By the time she's finished it is well past 02:00.

"And that's it," says Jemine. "That's how I became a bounty hunter, lost my real mother, discovered I was an Imp, almost died on a lava planet, and then finally gave up being a spacer and bought my own brothel."

She sits back in her chair.

"Now I'm just looking forward to some peace and quiet."


Last edit: 11 Dec 2017, 10:58am
11 Dec 2017, 12:40am
Simon chuckled. "You make it sound like you're a desk jockey pushing papers." He takes a final, long swig from his beer. "Though sometimes I wonder what that life would be like. I almost became one after I graduated from university back home."
11 Dec 2017, 7:40am
Phisto grinned.  "I ever become a desk jockey you just go ahead and shoot me, alright?"

"Anyway... university, huh?  What did you study?"
12 Dec 2017, 12:29am
"I was a middle-of-the-road software engineering student," Datura said, grinning. "Didn't do terribly, but I was no A+ student."
12 Dec 2017, 3:22am
Phisto waves down a passing waitress and orders another beer.

"Software engineering? Ugh. That was one of my worst subjects." Phisto chuckled at the memory. "I used to get so pissed off at those damn computers." He dismissively waves off the memory. "Music, history, philosophy... those were the subjects for me."

Phisto playfully sticks his tongue out. "Well, besides piloting I mean."
13 Dec 2017, 10:49pm
The young businesses woman walked along the district, taking note of a few clothing shops as she passed. Strange and wonderful smells filled her nose from the various food vendors that dotted the walkway. It finally got to be too much for her and she stopped in a restaurant decorated with beige walls covered in green, white, and red streamers.

Roughly twenty minutes later, she emerged from the restaurant with a satisfied look.

"How do you say it? Bor- burrito? Wonderful and delicious! Thank you!"

Veronica continued her way down the walkway and stopped in front of her destination.

"The Olive Grove! Well this looks nice-" she stopped mid-sentance as she looked at the broken front door. "Well, off to a good start now, aren't we?"

The young woman shrugged and made her way through the entrance.
14 Dec 2017, 8:19am
At her podium, Suki glances up at the blonde newcomer and smiles politely. She does not speak, and appears to be listening to something. It soon becomes evident that she is engaged in a comms call, and is listening to the other party through an audibud in her ear.

"Yes," she says, "that is correct. The Olive Grove, on Second Avenue. Yes, it used to be called The Organ Grinder... Yes, the main entrance door. It would be very much appreciated if you could. There will be someone here at all times. The Olive Grove is always open. Arigatou."

Suki taps her podium, and then looks up at the newcomer.

"Konbanwa," she says. "Welcome to The Olive Grove. Your pleasure is our pleasure."
14 Dec 2017, 8:45am
Simon smirked, "I'm sure your philosophical prowess has served you well out in the 'verse." He gestured his head toward the bar. "What's your poison? Pretty sure this round is mine."
14 Dec 2017, 9:17am
Phisto smiles slightly as he looks over his empty bottle.  "Another Barron's Head sounds good.  Thanks."  He looks over the bar crowd before turning back to Simon.  Looking past his friend, he bites his lower lip, then chuckles.

"Prowess or no, it helps life make sense I suppose.  Or, at least enough sense to keep moving forward."
14 Dec 2017, 3:36pm
"Ā! Konbanwa! Watashi wa darekaga kono gengo o koko de hanasu koto o kitai shite imasendeshita (Ah! Hello! I wasn't expecting someone to speak this language here.)," Veronica beamed, excited that someone knew the same language as her adoptive clan. "But, I'm going to stick to English as not many others know the dialect."

She extended her hand and smiled. "My name is Veronica Richardson, and I represent a prominent sake producer who has taken an interest in this establishment. They would like to offer a supply contract with the owner. That is if she is interested, and this establishment passes our strict humane treatment standards."
14 Dec 2017, 4:59pm
On hearing Veronica speak her own language, Suki tilts her head in appreciation. She gives a polite bow after Veronica explains the purpose of her visit.

"The Olive Grove is honoured by your presence, Richardson san." Suki's face takes on an expression of apology. "I very much regret that Miss Jemine is unable to meet with you straight away. She is currently entertaining a guest."

Suki reaches out and taps the podium display.

"Perhaps I can make an appointment for you?" she says.
14 Dec 2017, 5:09pm
"Absolutely," the young woman said confidently. "When is a good time? I'm on station until I can see her. The master merchants of the clan would not be very happy if I did not complete their request."

Veronica chuckled at the thought of the old clan merchants scolding her.


Edit: missing word


Last edit: 14 Dec 2017, 6:03pm
14 Dec 2017, 5:59pm
"Miss Jemine attends between the hours of 16: 00 and midnight," explains Suki, adding, "and it is midnight now. I can make you an appointment for... tomorrow at 18:00. Is this acceptable, Richardson san?"
15 Dec 2017, 2:59pm
"Yes, please. That would be lovely." Veronica smiled and let out a sigh of relief. "To be honest, I'm rather tired. Guess I didn't realize the time. Well, as Seijuro-sama would say: 'a good rest heals the mind and the body'."

She bowed to Suki and adjusted her suit jacket. "Arigatou-gozaimasu!"

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