Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
24 Dec 2017, 2:46am
Luke turned back towards the woman, muttering under his breath as he did so, "Not a coward... Sure..."

Walking towards her he gave her an exasperated expression, holding his hands out from his sides in a gesture to show he intended no harm.

"I'm sorry about this but... Are you Jem?" he asked apologetically, "Seems it's either talk to you or go three rounds with knucklehead over there."
24 Dec 2017, 8:46am
Jemine stands her ground as the young man approaches.

"My name," she says, "is Jemine. Only my friends get to call me Jem. 'Knucklehead' over there is certainly no friend of mine. Now, who in Gaia's armpits are you, and what do you want?"
24 Dec 2017, 1:51pm
As Jellicoe'
strolled through the station his head whipped round at the mention of the name 'Mhera'. He saw a young man speaking to a claw armed giant and a slender young woman.

"You. " He said sharply. "Where do you know that name from?"
24 Dec 2017, 8:13pm
"Jemine... As in, Jemine Caesar?" Luke asked, "So, you're the owner of that Olive place?"

He was unable to finish the thought as another man approached. Facing him with a raised eyebrow he asked politely, "What name? Jem... I mean Jemine?"
24 Dec 2017, 8:22pm
"Not that name," Jellicoe replied staring straight into the young mans eyes. "You said Mhera, where do you know that name from?"
24 Dec 2017, 8:48pm
Mouth agape and blinking in mild confusion, Jemine looks at the blond haired newcomer.
24 Dec 2017, 8:57pm
Jellicoe's eyes flicked briefly to a slender, dark haired woman before returning to the young man burning witha cold fury
24 Dec 2017, 9:21pm
Pinching his nose in frustration Luke audibly huffed.

"Is there anyone on this god forsaken station who doesn't have a bone to pick with me about her?!" he meant to stop there, but had reached tipping point couldn't help himself from spilling out in a tirade.

"I was her pilot. Okay? I was her pilot and I was supposed to look after her but I failed. I didn't mean to, I didn't want to. I just wanted to look after her and... I dunno... Maybe impress her I guess but you know what? Apparently I'm a shitty pilot!! I managed to get us kidnapped and somehow managed to get her killed TWICE!!! Yeah, that's right. I'm so goddam crap at my job I failed her twice. Once because I was too busy fighting psychopaths and Scythe Cats, and another time to some bint called Kat von Steuben. So now... If you don't mind, I would like to politely ask if Ms Caesar can provide me with amy information on this, Kat woman."

By the time he was done, Luke was breathing heavily and fighting back tears of anger, flicking his eyes between Jemine and this newcomer before finishing off with a calm question of his own.

"So... Who's asking?"


Last edit: 24 Dec 2017, 9:27pm
24 Dec 2017, 9:37pm
Jemine blinks at the mention of Kat von Steuben's name, then looks at the blond haired man and raises an eyebrow.

"Well?" she says.
24 Dec 2017, 9:38pm
"I'm the man her parents asked to find her, I'm the man who had to go back and tell them that their daughter wasn't coming home after making up some crock of shit about a quick death in an accident so I didn't have to tell them the truth; that their darling little girl spent the last months of her life getting shagged senseless by scum before being blown to bits in a war she was nothing to do with, and looking into her fathers eye and seeing he didn't believe a word of it. So trust me, wallowing in self pity when you're stood here right as rain isn't going to impress anyone. Now what do you know?" Jellicoe's voice was quiet, clear but ice cold.
24 Dec 2017, 9:41pm
Jemine turns from the blond haired man to look at the other man.

"Well?"
24 Dec 2017, 9:55pm
"We'll what? That's my side. You want more?" Luke pointed in the direction Stryker was before, "Big guy, metal claw, can't miss him. He's one of the scum who shagged her apparently."

He turned to look towards Jemine.

"Je... Ms Caesar. I imagine you're a busy woman. Could I possibly steal some of your time in the near future? All I know is that if I don't do something to find Kat, I'll be seeing more of that claw." figuring he must sound pathetic, he braced himself for the answer he believed to be inevitable.
24 Dec 2017, 10:20pm
"She ended up in a brothel, you're here a free man, would you care to explain how that happened? You'll forgive me if I wonder just how that came about?"
24 Dec 2017, 10:46pm
"Sheer dumb luck and several pints of blood loss. Happy?" Luke spat back. Then he realised it wasn't this man's fault and regretted it immediately. "Okay.. Look. It's a touchy subject. Can we meet up tomorrow or something? Trust me when I say that big fella probably knows more than I do anyway. If you go now, you might catch him."
24 Dec 2017, 10:49pm
Rolling her eyes, Jemine holds up both hands towards the two men.

"All right, I have other things to do then listen to you two exchanging testosterone. I'm going to walk away now. If either of you want to talk to me sensibly, make an appointment at The Olive Grove, on Second Avenue. Now, if you'll excuse me, I'll be on my way."

Jemine spins on her heel and walks away into the crowd.

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