Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
10 Jan 2018, 5:55am
Apollonia raises her glass with a cheerful smile, but Marra does not seem impressed.

"What do you mean, you've got no fellas?" she says, scowling, "This is a pleasure house, no?"

She rolls her eyes, downing her drink and slamming the glass back down on the table.

"Huh. It's Caesar's pleasure house. That would explain it," she sneers, pouring herself another rum, "I've yet to see her do anything right."

Fixing her hard dark eyes back on Monagh, she asks; "So what's your name, girl?"
10 Jan 2018, 11:23am
"Monagh's my name. Monagh Mallone. Look, I'm sorry about the lack of fellas, so I am. The truth is, it's mostly girls work at The Olive Grove. We don't have many fellas here, never have done. An' the ones we have are taken at the moment. If you know what I mean."

Monagh tosses her hair back and flashes her hazel eyes.

"I'll tell you what; let's have a little craic for a wee while, then we can move on through for the party games. Sure an' I'll find you a fella, that I will. Now, I take it you know Miss Jemine? She's a good sort, an' that's a fact. Though between you an' me, I think she's been through a rough patch lately. What might your name be, love? Maybe she's made mention of you."

Monagh takes a sip of rum.
10 Jan 2018, 12:23pm
Marra's scowl eases as she listens to the melodic lilt of Monagh's voice.

"My name's Marrakech, but you can call me Marra," she replies, her voice softening, "and yes, I know Jemine. And she knows me. Not that she would have anything good to say about me, mind."

She takes a sip from her glass, a small smile creeping across her lips.

"But enough of her. Tell me about you, Monagh. Where's your accent from? It's not Cambrian or any Pegasi dialect, certainly not Imperial or Gallic either,"

Marra tilts her head inquisitively.
10 Jan 2018, 1:24pm
"Marrakech," says Monagh, her voice adopting a more sultry tone. "Now that is a very unusual name. It suits you. Marrakech. Beautiful and powerful at the same time. Just like yourself, I'm thinking."

Monagh takes another sip of her rum, and then smiles at Marra.

"Well now, you're after knowing a bit about myself, so... My accent is Gaelic. I'm from an Alliance system called Mullag, about forty light years from Sol. There's a Gaelic settlement on the Earth like world there, called Lughnasadh. Sure and you've likely never heard of it."
10 Jan 2018, 1:48pm
Marra slowly downs another glassful of rum, her smile spreading at the flattery paid to her.

"I can't say I have heard of it," she says, colour beginning to flush in her pale face, "but you can tell me about it all night, with a voice like that."

She leans in closer to Monagh.

"And how long have you been working for Miss Caesar?"
10 Jan 2018, 2:25pm
Monagh picks up the bottle of Harma rum and refills Marra's glass.

"A little over two months now," she replies. "Miss Jemine opened The Olive Grove on the first of November last year. The place used to be called The Organ Grinder before that, an' a right dump it was, I can tell you. I worked for the previous owner, feckin' arsehole that he was."

Monagh takes another sip of rum.

"To be sure, Marrakech, Miss Jemine is the best thing that ever happened to this club. She's a lovely woman, too. I can't be imaginin' her ever saying anythin' nasty about anyone. Least of all someone as nice as yourself. Did yers have a row over somethin'? I bet it was over a man. I'm right, aren't I?"
10 Jan 2018, 2:29pm
Marra laughs, genuinely amused.

She takes another drink and looks through her dark curls at Monagh as she raises the glass to her lips.

"Actually, it was over a woman."
10 Jan 2018, 3:42pm
"A woman, you say?" Monagh replies. "Is that a fact?"

She glances at the blonde waif sitting on Marra's other side.

"Oh," says Monagh, nodding. "Do I take it you're meanin' your girl, here? Only I was wonderin' why she's been sitting there all quiet, like."
10 Jan 2018, 4:03pm
Marra blinks, suddenly remembering about Apollonia's existence.

"This is Apollonia, my aide," she says, nodding to the waifish woman.

"A pleasure," nods Apollonia to Monagh, her tone and manner submissive.

"And no, she has not come between your employer and me," continues Marra, "you have no feelings for Miss Caesar, do you Apollonia?"

There is a hint of forceful malice in the outlaw's voice, at which Apollonia shakes her head vigorously.

"No, cherie."

Turning back to Monagh and reaching out to take one of her crisp blonde curls between her fingers, Marra sighs sadly.

"I used to be in the same business as your employer. I had a wonderful venue, much like this, but maybe a little more... risque. Another woman took that all away from me, and your Miss Caesar let her."
10 Jan 2018, 4:20pm
Seeing Marra taking hold of Monagh's hair, Jemine pushes herself away from the bulkhead and stands straight.
10 Jan 2018, 4:23pm
Noticing movement across the room, Idris turns his head to focus.

"Feistres," he rumbles.

Marra looks up and follows his gaze.

"Well, speak of the fucking devil," grins Marra, extending her arm around Monagh's shoulders and locking eyes with Jemine.
10 Jan 2018, 5:09pm
Monagh flinches slightly at Marra's embrace. She notices Jemine standing across the bar by the door.

"Well," says Monagh, her mouth flickering into a smile, "I can see you're upset about that, Marrakech, and I can't say that I blame you, to be sure. But whatever it was that happened, I reckon it was probably all just a big misunderstandin'. Miss Jemine might have had nothin' to do with it at all. Perhaps you an' her could have a nice chat about it, eh? Let bygones be bygones. I'm positive Miss Jemine would be perfectly happy to bury the hatchet."

Monagh slowly reaches out and takes a lock of Marra's hair, twirling it around her finger.

"Now, we're havin' such a good time here, so we are. Let's not get all serious about stuff that happened in the past, eh?"
10 Jan 2018, 5:33pm
Marra holds her steely gaze on Jemine for a few moments longer before turning back to Monagh, her expression softening once more.

"Of course," she smiles, taking a large sip of her rum and drawing the courtesan closer, "back to you. You said the Organ Grinder was a dump. What makes the Grove different?"
10 Jan 2018, 6:55pm
Monagh's eyebrows arch upwards.

"Shite! Where the feck do I begin?" she says. "The Organ Grinder was a shithole, to put it mildly. Broken beds with lumpy mattresses, filthy rooms and constantly blocked toilets. Most of the lights didn't work, and the décor... well, there wasn't any. It was more like having sex in a prison cell. Not very nice."

She takes a sip of her rum.

"As for the bastaird who owned it, well, the least said about him the better. Miss Jemine turned this place around since she took over. It's clean, hygienic, and pleasant to work in. The girls are very well looked after and treated fairly. We get holidays, and regular medical checks paid for by Miss Jemine. And The Olive Grove is proving right popular with the locals, as you can see."

Monagh flutters one hand around the busy bar room.

"Tell me, Marrakech," she continues, "this pleasure house you used to run, what was that like?"
10 Jan 2018, 7:00pm
Jemine continues to watch Marra and Monagh for a few moments, then walks across to the bar counter. She speaks briefly to Ronique, the barmaid, then walks back to the door and leaves the bar.

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