Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
18 Jan 2018, 10:45pm
Jubei nods, "Thank you, Suki. Since it was a public board, others may have caught on too. I'm going to guess that I'm not the only one here."

He turned toward the bar. "Tell me Suki, is the owner aware of this? I can't see the woman who created this establishment knowingly sit idly by."
18 Jan 2018, 10:55pm
Again Suki nods.

"You are astute," she says. "Hai, the owner is aware. Miss Jemine has been trying to give assistance to the woman you seek."
18 Jan 2018, 11:27pm
"Well it may be well in hand then, but I'm going to the bar just in case."

Jubei takes a step and then stops. "You're an excellent retainer, you serve your lady well. The Grand Master would be pleased."

He then heads into the bar with purposeful steps.
18 Jan 2018, 11:31pm
Suki bows low to Jubei.

"Arigatou gozaimasu, Himura san."
19 Jan 2018, 5:54am
Apollonia blinks back her tears, her eyes flashing at Kyla and Jacyn.

"How would you know? How would you understand?"

Her voice raises slightly.

"I've never seen him react to anyone like that before, not even Marra. Don't you see? There's a man in there, trapped under that armour and brainwashing! We can save him, too!"
19 Jan 2018, 5:57am
Kyla sighed, but nodded. "I saw the whole thing," she lifted her finger and pointed toward the table she was sitting at. "I was sitting right there when it happened." She stood up, looking around the bar while tapping a message on her dataslate.

Jem, she's refusing to come with us. She wants to save Idris too... Got any ideas?


"Okay, how do you propose we do that? How do we convince him to betray her and come with us without tearing us to pieces?"


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19 Jan 2018, 6:15am
Apollonia shakes her head.

"I don't know. But it will take time, more time than we have here," her shimmering eyes turn hopeful for a moment, "Jemine has shone a light to his darkness, as she did mine. I'm so sorry," she wells up again, biting her lip, "but I cannot come with you."
19 Jan 2018, 2:19pm
A bit startled at what he heard, Jacyn probes, "You mean to say that that large man was brainwashed into some sort of robot and has never show signs of even the slightest affection towards a woman? What kind of hell do you people live in?"

Scrunching his face he continues, "Who is this her and how can she have such a stranglehold on you two."
19 Jan 2018, 2:30pm
As he walks into the bar, Jubei overhears Apollonia's words. He's heard them before, the refusal to leave when there is another victim is common in abuse cases. The Inquisitor looks at the booth, recognizing the platinum bond woman from the avatar, as well as the other woman. However, the man standing with them is unknown, but doesn't seem to be a threat to the others.

Jubei takes a seat at a booth opposite to the group, orders a drink, and carefully listens while watching the entrances.
19 Jan 2018, 2:55pm
Running a hand through her dark curls with a luxurious sigh, Marra exits the private bedroom.

She adjusts the folds of her skirt and begins to walk with a swagger back down the corridor towards the bar area.
19 Jan 2018, 3:25pm
The distinct accent from the thin woman was familiar and it was bothering him to no end. Confirmation was needed to fully understand the situation.

The inquisitor pulls out his holoslate and opens the messaging app, typing to someone he knew would give him a straight answer.

Stryker, look at the attached picture and tell me if you know this woman from anywhere. I think I saw her in Claire Dock after our fight.


Jubei then looked at the entrance and cursed that he couldn't see into the hallway. He quickly typed a second message using the information Veronica gave him.

Suki, I need you to be my eyes and ears for the hallways. Please let me know of any possible incoming threats.
19 Jan 2018, 3:34pm
Monagh lies naked on the deck of the bedroom, staring up at the ceiling and grinning broadly. Her breasts rise and fall with the rhythm of her raptured breathing. Her face glistens with perspiration.

"Now that," she gasps, "was feckin' amazin'. Oh, she's goin' to take some beatin', to be sure."

Getting to her feet, Monagh picks up her bra and knickers and puts them on, then surveys the mess she and Marra have made of the room.

"Worth it," she says as she begins to tidy up. "Totally one hundred per cent feckin' worth it."
19 Jan 2018, 4:03pm
Marra enters the bar area, a satisfied smile on her lips. Her euphoric mood comes to an abrupt end as she stops dead in her tracks, her face falling as she looks around...

Her aide is in tears and distressed, with two strangers standing near her. Her bodyguard is nowhere to be seen. And an Inquisitor who she recognises is sat at an opposite booth, typing on a holoslate.

"What the fuck...?" she snarls, her hand instinctively dropping to her absent pistol.
19 Jan 2018, 4:22pm
At her podium, Suki notices one of the green lights denoting an occupied bedroom go out. Her eyes widen.

"Chikusho!"
19 Jan 2018, 5:10pm
Jubei looks up from his dataslate and spots Marra standing at the entrance, clearly not happy with the situation before her.

"Ah Space-Christ." he curses, suddenly putting two and two together.

Think, dammit!

The inquisitor notices that she's not look at him, but at the group. Particularly at the platinum blonde woman. Suddenly it clicks, MONSTER. That would fit what he knew about Marra. Another realization hit him: if she's here, where is Idris? And was he the one the woman was concerned about? This just got a hell of a lot more complicated.

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