Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
13 Jan 2018, 5:03pm
Grinning Jacyn took another drink of his beer.

"The secret is gaining it's trust. Shooting stars only trust those that are pure of heart. You have to spend time with it. Let it know you care about it."

Jacyn reached up and pinched his fingers, "And when you've done all that you can reach up and pluck it out of sky."
13 Jan 2018, 5:40pm
"I see," says Jemine. "So it's merely a matter of gaining their trust, is it? It sounds quite simple when you put it like that, Mr Witherwigh. Tell me, how many shooting stars have trusted you to ride them? Or have you ridden so many that you've lost count?"

She glances across the bar to where Apollonia sits, and notices the blonde waif busily tapping at her dataslate. Taking another sip from her drink, Jemine returns her attention to the smooth talking young man by her side.
14 Jan 2018, 1:45am
Commander ******* "Kurama10" Goes to the Habitation Complex to get some rest. "Man being someone who does basically everything is tiring." Kurama10 says. He never really remember his name each time he try's to remember his name, He's hoping to remember it tonight but he never remembered it.  

*His Thoughts*   "UHG Why can't I remember its been like this for years, Oh god I don't even remember how long has that been too, know what just rest my mind this might be a dream hopefully when I wake up I remember my name." He goes to sleep.    




(WARNING Im not good with role-play so this might not be good)
14 Jan 2018, 12:57pm
Winking Jacyn answered the question. "Oh, just the one. It's notoriously jealous."

Catching the glance he looks too. He noticed that Apollonia had sat at the table with Idris.

"What's the deal with broody. You would think there would be more cheer for whatever they are celebrating."
14 Jan 2018, 1:29pm
Jemine follows Jacyn's gaze.

"Oh, him," she replies. "His name's Idris. That's him being happy, believe it or not."

Jemine places a finger under Jacyn's chin and gently turns his face back towards her.

"Never mind about Idris. Tell me about yourself. What do you get up to, Mister Witherwigh? Apart from riding your shooting star, that is."


Last edit: 14 Jan 2018, 3:32pm
15 Jan 2018, 2:24am
He glanced back at Idris and Apollonia.

"Heh, if you say so," he said.

Tapping his chin he smiled, "Well, you see what I do depends on what day it is. Today is Sunday so I happen to be a daring adventurer. Oh, what grand adventures I've been on. Like the time I retrieved the Sacred Horn of Gallhallia from the mauradering chieftain Frixus deLaouve."

He takes a sip of his beer.
15 Jan 2018, 7:55am
A beep from the reception podium attracts Suki's attention. She taps the display a couple of times, then picks up her dataslate and taps its screen. She turns and hurries to the bar, then approaches Jemine who is listening to a young man at the counter.

"Miss Jemine," says Suki. "Forgive my intrusion, but there is a message for you from Hodkin san. It is marked urgent."
15 Jan 2018, 8:23am
Jemine takes the dataslate from Suki, and checks its display. She smiles.

"Good old Kyla," she says to herself. Then she looks at Suki.

"Thank you, Suki. Please tell Sam to standby, would you? But tell him to have the ship prepped and ready to leave at short notice. Just in case."

Jemine hands the dataslate back to Suki, and watches her leave the bar. She casts another quick glance at Apollonia, then turns towards Jacyn and picks up her glass.

"Now, where were we? Ah, yes. Tell me about this sacred horn of yours..."
15 Jan 2018, 8:35am
Apollonia sighs softly in relief as she checks her messages on her dataslate.

"Merci," she whispers to herself as she quickly taps out a private message to Kyla;

Olive Grove

Distract Idris


She glances up at the monolithic minder, who continues his silent, motionless watch over the room.

Satisfied that he's none the wiser, she sips her wine calmly whilst reading the GalNet.
16 Jan 2018, 4:18pm
Jacyn waits patiently as Jem reads the holo-tablet.

"No rest for the weary huh?" he paused looking over his shoulder then back to Jem. Leaning in he asks quietly,

"Need to leave in a hurry? Doesn't have anything to do with that armored brute does it? Something about him. He ain't right. And the lovey lady next to him looks like she is nervous as hell. That's not what his place is about, is it?"

he pulls back.
16 Jan 2018, 4:33pm
Jemine smiles.

"No, I don't need to go anywhere right this minute. And no, it wasn't anything to do with Idris or the woman. They're just waiting for... a friend."

Jemine sips her drink.

"The message was just a query about some bed linen I ordered, that's all. Nothing important. The supplier thought it was more urgent than it really is. But I don't feel like talking about business for the time being. Let's talk about you instead. What is it you do?"
16 Jan 2018, 4:53pm
Jacyn gave the woman a simple nod.

"Well, simply put, I'm an adventurer. Bit 'o this and a bit 'o that really. So long as I'm out in the void I'm a happy guy."
16 Jan 2018, 5:07pm
"Oh dear!" says Jemine. "But you're not out in the void now. You're here, standing in the bar of a pleasure house on Citi Gateway. Does that mean you're not a happy guy?"

Jemine rests one hand on Jacyn's arm and moves closer to him.

"Would you rather be out riding your shooting star than spending time here... with me?"
16 Jan 2018, 5:30pm
"Not at all. I'm on an adventure, so I'm quite a happy guy. Sure shooting stars are fun, but so are telling stories and getting to know people. Entertainer at heart."

He places a hand on Jemine's hand. "So how did a lovely gal like yourself end up owning a fine establishment such as this?"
16 Jan 2018, 10:10pm
"I used to be a pilot," says Jemine. "Then one day I decided that the life of a spacer wasn't for me any more, so I sold my ship, settled down here and bought this place. It was a bit of a dump, and I've spent a lot of money and time doing it up."

She looks down at Jacyn's hand, which is still resting on her own.

"Are you planning on doing anything with my hand?"

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