Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
20 Jan 2018, 4:13pm
Jemine remains still, choosing not to watch Marra and her entourage leave. Instead she turns to face Kyla.

"What in Gaia's Armpits happened?" she asks. "Why didn't you get Apollonia out of here as we planned?"
20 Jan 2018, 4:16pm
Cocks his head.

"So, there was a little plan in the works there... There's more to this..... establishment then meets the eye."
20 Jan 2018, 4:33pm
Jemine gives Jacyn a sideways look, then tilts her head at Kyla, waiting for an answer.
20 Jan 2018, 4:41pm
Offering a charming smile Jacyn continues,"I can see that you have some more, administrative things to deal with."

With that, he leaves Jem to deal with Kyla and finds his way back to his seat at the bar.
20 Jan 2018, 7:39pm
"Young lady," the inquisitor finally spoke. "It seems that compassion is the word of the day. Apollonia did not want to leave while Idris is still in Morgan's grasp."

He looked at the group over the edge of the data slate. A smuggler, a bounty hunter turned entrepreneur, and a random adventurer. It's almost like something out of bad holovid.

"That's going to pose a large problem. The big guy has been legitimately brainwashed into a loyal, and I mean to-the-death-loyal, guard."

He stood up and tucked away the slate. "However, the danger is over for now, and the young lady is correct: Morgan does seem paranoid."

Jubei turned to the young woman who matched the owner's description. "Honestly, it was the quick and brave actions of the owner that saved the establishment, and the people inside. If Idris started anything, I don't think Morgan would have stopped it. Exemplary work."
20 Jan 2018, 7:52pm
Jemine turns to face the newcomer as he speaks. When he finishes, she raises one eyebrow.

"Thank you," she says. "You sound like a law enforcer. That was a very nice summary, not to mention some rather astute observations and deductions. I'm quite certain we've never met, Mister...?"

Allowing the question to hang in the air, Jemine places her hands on her hips.
20 Jan 2018, 8:03pm
"Jubei," he replies with a friendly tone. "Jubei Himura. You are correct, I am a member of Imperial law enforcement. So, I naturally ran a background check on my way here."

He extends his hand and smirks. "Also, you recently met with my student, Veronica Richardson. Who, by the way, gave your establishment an absolutely glowing review for the way you treat your employees. You have my respect."
20 Jan 2018, 8:25pm
Jemine winces slightly.

"Ah," she says, accepting the handshake. "Mister Himura, yes. Miss Richardson did mention your name during my meeting with her. I'm afraid you chose a somewhat inopportune moment for your first visit to The Olive Grove. I can assure you that's not the sort of thing which happens here every day."
20 Jan 2018, 9:14pm
Kyla looked at Jemine in disbelief. "She did not want to move. I tried to convince her we'd come back for that brute." She looked down to the ground. "I tried, alright?"
20 Jan 2018, 9:53pm
"It's OK, Kyla," says Jemine. "I'm sure you did your best. But Apollonia is totally in thrall to Morgan. It's probably not surprising that she turned down the chance to escape. And as for Idris..."

Jemine blinks, her brow furrowing. She turns to Jubei.

"Mister Himura, there's something I need to check in my office. Why don't you take a seat and order a drink, on the house. I'm sure Kyla would be happy to keep you company - provided you promise not to arrest her for smuggling, of course!"

She winks at Kyla, and then leaves the bar.
20 Jan 2018, 9:57pm
Kyla threw herself onto the corner of the booth, slouching and winking back at Jemine. "I'd love to see him try," she said. "But after that ordeal, I think we might need a double drink."
20 Jan 2018, 10:53pm
Jubei keeps a mental note of the wince from Jenine and sits across from Kyla. "Darlin', if I wanted to arrest you I would have done it while you were in Empire space."

He orders a Hattori Select sake from the waitress and relaxes.

"Smuggling doesn't bother me in the slightest, unless your smugglin' slaves to bad people. My... unit,  usually takes on special cases that involves much darker issues. Besides, you never know when you need a good smuggler."
20 Jan 2018, 11:07pm
Luke arrived outside the InGaBa and leant casually against the threshold.

Part of him wanted Ten to be found, least of all because he was genuinely concerned that she'd get herself into trouble. But another side hoped she'd stay gone. He felt guilty for thinking so, but if she came back, he knew the next thing he'd be expected to do is tell her about how he lost Mhera. A memory he could do without reliving again.

Continued in The Galactic Bar
20 Jan 2018, 11:13pm
"I won't go near slaves. Hell no, I was damn close to becoming one myself," Kyla said. She ordered a double Toolfa from the Waitress. "Just frowned-upon goods."
20 Jan 2018, 11:33pm
Jemine steps into her office and closes the door. Sitting down at her desk, she taps the desktop display and selects a public access menu. From the menu she calls up Galpedia's language database.

"Now then, Idris," she says to herself, "let's see what it was you said to me as you left. Cambrian, I believe..."

Jemine picks Cambrian from the list of languages on Galpedia Translate, and activates the audio input option. She hesitates, then clears her throat and speaks.

"Dee olk."

Moments later she is rewarded with the search result.

Language = Cambrian
Input = Diolch
Translation = Thank you



Jemine smiles.

"Happy birthday, Marrakech Morgan..."


Last edit: 21 Jan 2018, 2:15pm

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