Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
10 Jan 2018, 7:17pm
Ten froze for a moment, but quickly relaxed. The two men didn't seem to notice the interruption, so Ten retreated a few meters to check her datapad.

She typed out a short response before turning off her datapad. Satisfied, she turned back to continue eavesdropping.


"Busy?!" Cartlidge parroted the response Ten had given him, startling some of the passers-by. Switching to Luke's contact profile, he typed out a new message.

"Still haven't found her. Going to check the docks."

A faint ping sounded from the bag at Cartlidge's side immediately after, reminding him that he had forgotten to return Luke's bag. He swore, and instead decided to turn back for the bar.

(Edit: Minor plot hole I needed to sow up. Sorry about that.)


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10 Jan 2018, 7:23pm
Both Marra and Idris watch Jemine's movements carefully, then the outlaw turns her attention back to Monagh.

"Ah, cariad," she sighs wistfully, "you wouldn't believe what the Exotica sold. Every pleasure you could imagine. And many you couldn't."

She finishes her drink and tops up all three glasses up as she continues;

"It was famous throughout Pegasi. Federal CEOs, Imperial patrons, Alliance bureaucrats and rich pirate lords alike came to visit. A magical place, wasn't it Apollonia?"

"Oui, cherie. Magical," agrees the blonde aide dutifully, but without emotion.
10 Jan 2018, 9:43pm
Monagh picks up her glass.

"The 'Exotica', eh? Sounds like a real hot place. I can't say as I've ever heard of it myself. The Olive Grove may not have the kind of high class clientele you had with your place, but me and the girls here are working on that."

She winks and raises her glass to her lips, but then places the glass back on the table without taking a drink.

"You said some woman took it away from you. Who was she? Did she buy you out or somethin'? An' how did Miss Jemine figure into it all?"
11 Jan 2018, 6:07am
Marra swirls her drink around in the glass.

"She shut us down with several tons of military-grade explosives," she says flatly, looking Monagh sternly in the eyes, "there were no survivors."

She drinks and takes a deep breath.

"Katarina Von Steuben killed my father and wants me dead. I hired your Miss Jemine, when she was a bounty-hunter, to put a stop to her,"

Marra does nothing to disguise the disdain and contempt in her voice;

"And Miss Jemine failed."

She knocks back the rum and pours another.
11 Jan 2018, 9:57am
Monagh's ruby red lips form an 'o'.

"Dear, dear! It's no wonder you're so upset. That must have been a terrible thing."

Monagh crosses her legs, so that her knee rests gently against Marra's.

"I didn't know Miss Jemine was ever a bounty hunter. Mind you, she doesn't speak much about her life before taking over The Olive Grove. But she's quite a determined sort, I think. If she could have done something to stop this Katerina Whatsername, then I'm sure she would have."
11 Jan 2018, 10:12am
Marra shakes her dark curls.

"Even the most determined can fail," she says, almost sadly.

After a moment, she looks up again with a smile, her sombre mood lifting.

"But enough of that. Back to you, gorgeous," she lifts Monagh's legs to lay them across her own, "you have one of those open contracts, then? Choose your clients, and all that?"
11 Jan 2018, 12:27pm
Monagh smiles broadly.

"That I do," she says, stroking Marra's cheek with the back of her fingers. "I'd say you're looking to be a girl who likes a bit of fun an' adventure. Well, you've got the right girl in Monagh Mallone, so y'have. I think we'll get on like a house on fire... Sorry, maybe that was a poor choice 'o words, considering all that shenanigans with your Exotica place. Anyway, will it just be yerself, Marrakech? Or will Apollonia and yer big man be joinin' in as well? Only I charge more for group, y'understand."

She flashes her hazel eyes at Marra, and grins coquettishly. Then she looks up at Idris.

"By the way, I meant to ask, what's the craic with the little silver hat? Only I don't see it being a regular part of his uniform somehow. A hat like that's not goin' to be stoppin' too many bullets, now is it?"
11 Jan 2018, 1:23pm
Marra's eyes widen at Monagh's mention of the Exotica, before she bursts out laughing.

"Cariad, you are exactly what I need right now! It'll just be you and I,"

She looks up at Idris.

"Seriously girl, you won't be able to handle that," she looks back to the golden-haired courtesan with a wink, "believe me."

Marra knocks back another shot of rum and points up at the silver conical hat perched atop Idris' helmet.

"And that is because it's my birthday."

She lifts Monagh's legs off her lap and stands, swaying a little with a smile as the alcohol goes to her head.

Offering her hand to Monagh, she tilts her head towards the private rooms.

"Let's go."
11 Jan 2018, 2:12pm
Monagh beams at Marra.

"Your birthday, is it? Well now, many happy returns to you, Marrakech."

Giggling in delight, Monagh accepts Marra's outstretched hand, and gives it a playful squeeze. She nods towards the door which leads to the bedrooms.

"This'll be a celebration for you to remember, an' no mistake."

Monagh leads Marra out of the bar...
11 Jan 2018, 3:48pm
Apollonia watches the pair leave the bar, sighing to herself.

She looks up to Idris.

Seeing her forlorn expression reflected back in his mirrored visor, she sighs again and sips her rum.
11 Jan 2018, 4:24pm
Suki enters the bar. She catches her breath as she sees the huge combat suited figure standing by the corner booth. Then a smile plays on her lips as she spots the incongruous silver party hat perched atop his helmet.

She steps towards the bar counter, glancing several times over her shoulder towards the booth. She moves round past the pole dance cage to stand behind the counter. She remains still, her gaze now fixed in one direction.

"Watashiwomite," she whispers. "Watashiwomite, Apollonia san..."


Last edit: 11 Jan 2018, 4:37pm
11 Jan 2018, 5:32pm
Apollonia looks up towards the bar, thinking she heard something.

She gives Suki an inquisitive glance.
11 Jan 2018, 6:27pm
Suki flashes a smile at Apollonia, and then casts a deliberate look across towards the ladies room in the far corner. Tilting her head in its direction, Suki looks back at Apollonia and raises an inviting eyebrow...
11 Jan 2018, 6:48pm
Apollonia stands and taps her hand on Idris' breastplate.

"Watch the drinks, cherie,"

Idris watches her walk to the ladies room.
11 Jan 2018, 7:05pm
Jemine stands at the reception podium, waiting.

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