Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
17 Jan 2018, 11:45am
Kyla entered the entertainment district of Citi gateway, wearing her usual blue jacket and a black tank top underneath. Her nerves flared as she drew closer to Olive Grove. Her mind raced trying to desperately think of how she was going to handle the situation she threw herself into. Distract Idris, she said. I doubt that brute is susceptible to feminine charm... As if I am even charming in the first place.

A man shoulder charged her as she made her way through the crowd. He turned to her, posing in an aggressive stance while struggling to maintain his balance. "Oi, you wanna 'ave a go lass?" He yelled.

Kyla rolled her eyes and approached him, pushing his shoulder. He fell over backwards, landing on his butt with a thud. "Maybe when you sober up and can walk in a straight line," she said and continued to Olive Grove.

She briskly walked through the entrance, bee lining straight to the counter. "Suki, I need to see Jem Je- err Miss Jemine."


Last edit: 17 Jan 2018, 11:53am
17 Jan 2018, 3:01pm
Luke continued searching for signs of Ten's whereabouts. Although what these signs would be he didn't know. He reached into his rucksack...

*Shit. Jacob still has it*

Well that was just great. Not only could he not find Ten, he couldn't contact Jacob. He was about to start the age old method of simply shouting at the top of his voice when he paased by a vendor selling more Dataslates. This gave him an idea. Approaching the teen at the desk he asked kindly.

"Hey, mind if I try one of these out?"

"Sure man, want a basic one or one that has all tje bells an whistles?" the teen replied in a slightly broken voice.

"Basic is fine, so long as it can access Galnet."

The teen disappeared into the back of his booth and returned quickly with a slightly beaten Dataslate.

"Don't worry, yours will be a new one."

Nodding, Luke began typing away on it, hoping this would work.
17 Jan 2018, 3:45pm
A wry smile crept across the young man's lips, "Well, it looks like you did a bang up job in here. Very inviting. Very professional."

He lifted the hand and gave it a small kiss. "As a matter of fact, I was planning to."
17 Jan 2018, 4:07pm
Suki gives Kyla a polite nod.

"Konbanwa, Emmerich san. Miss Jemine is at present entertaining a gentleman visitor in the bar. One moment, onegaishimasu, I will inform her you are here."

Suki hurries into the bar and approaches Jemine.

"Sumimasen, Miss Jemine," she says with a respectful bow. "Kyla Emmerich san is in reception. She has asked to see you."
17 Jan 2018, 4:42pm
Jemine gives a quick nod of acknowledgement to Suki, who then hurries back to the reception. Gently withdrawing her hand from Jacyn's, Jemine gives the young man an apologetic smile.

"What was that you were saying earlier?" she asks him. "'No rest for the weary', I believe it was. Please excuse me. Duty calls, and all that. But don't go away, will you? I want to hear more about your adventures in the void."

Jemine flashes a smile at Jacyn, and then leaves the bar.
17 Jan 2018, 7:52pm
After the tenth notification from Luke's dataslate, Cartlidge finally caved and pulled the device out of his pack.

Ok, seriously, who is this? Cartlidge thought as he turned the device on. Oh, it's that Galnet forum. Why does he have the notifications on? Oh!

After reading Luke's post, Cartlidge placed the dataslate back in Luke's bag, then turned to walk back to the bar.
17 Jan 2018, 9:10pm
Kyla thanked Suki as she left to inform Jemine of her arrival. She stood tapping her foot while waiting.

She caught Jem leaving the bar in the corner of her eye and dashed over to her. "Jem! Hi! I probably should have told you I was coming. Sorry!" she said.
17 Jan 2018, 9:30pm
"It doesn't matter," said Jemine. "I think I can guess why you're here. It's about Apollonia, isn't it? You've responded to her call for help. She's in the bar right now, along with that big bugger, Idris. Morgan is here, too, being entertained by one of my girls."

Jemine takes Kyla across to the reception podium and taps the display, bringing up security footage of the bar.

"look, there's Apollonia, sitting in the corner booth. And there's Idris, standing guard right beside her. If you've got a really ingenious plan to whisk Apollonia away from under his nose, you might want to share it with me now."
17 Jan 2018, 9:47pm
Kyla looked to the ground. "All I have right now is 'annoy the big guy without getting my arms ripped off.' Should I start a bar fight next to their booth? I'm sorry, I didn't think this through as much as I was hoping to on the way in."
17 Jan 2018, 9:51pm
Jemine shook her head.

"All I can think of is to switch off all the lights and sneak Apollonia out under cover of darkness. But I'm willing to bet that Idris has some sort of night vision thing in his visor. So that's out."
17 Jan 2018, 11:16pm
Kyla looked back up and shrugged. "Maybe cutting the lights and music would cause enough confusion and chaos to open up a window. Could you do it without affecting the private rooms?"
17 Jan 2018, 11:34pm
Returning the Dataslate to the vendor, Luke said his thanks and muttered something about it not being what he needed right now.

He then spun on his heel and made his way through the crowds back towards the bar, hoping Jacob got his message.
18 Jan 2018, 8:34am
Jemine frowned.

"I could, yes... but Idris is a soldier, through and through. He's far too focussed to be confused by something like that. And like I said, that visor he wears probably let's him see in the dark. He'd be the only one in the room not at a disadvantage."

Biting her lip, Jemine shakes her head and rolls her eyes to the ceiling.

"Shit. I can't believe I'm going to even try this. Shit, shit, shit..."

Jemine takes off her jacket to reveal a sleeveless black lace  top. She opens the door to the bar, then turns towards Kyla.

"I have zero confidence that this will work in the slightest," she says. "But if it does, be ready to make a move."


Last edit: 18 Jan 2018, 8:45am
18 Jan 2018, 8:37am
Kyla blinked. "Wait, what?" She stepped forward. "What are you doing?"
18 Jan 2018, 8:44am
"This is a brothel, Kyla," replies Jemine. "The air is full of sex pheromone, and Idris is a fella. What do you think I'm going to do, offer him a cup of tea and a piece of cake?"

She takes a deep breath and steps through the door into the bar.

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