Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
18 Jan 2018, 7:39pm
Kyla's jaw dropped in astonishment, surprised that Jemine's plan had worked. She quickly snapped out of it and bolted over to Apollonia.

"Hello, I'm Kyla, the loudmouth on that bulletin board?" She offered her hand. "I don't know what just happened there, but we kinda need to move, like right now."
18 Jan 2018, 8:26pm
Apollonia looks at Kyla as her tears begin to break.

"I... I can't," she stammers softly, "there's a man under that armour. How can I run and leave him here, forever Marra's slave?"
18 Jan 2018, 8:40pm
Jubei made his way through the entertainment district, easily moving between the patrons moving from store to store. His clothing didn’t stand out faded brown cargos and a green long sleeve covered by a black vest, so everyone just assumed he was another station dweller in a hurry. The only time the inquisitor caused any sort of disturbance was when another man nearly backed up into Jubei. The man nearly fell over in surprise when Jubei firmly said “excuse me” at a volume that would have expected from an annoyed parent.

The inquisitor walked through the Olive Grove’s front entrance nonchalantly and looked for any greeting staff, hoping to find the one he wanted to talk to.
18 Jan 2018, 8:45pm
Suki looks up from the podium display screen to see a man entering the club.

"Konbanwa," she says. "Welcome to The Olive Grove. Your pleasure is our pleasure. Do you have a booking?"
18 Jan 2018, 8:51pm
Jubei looks at the young lady behind the podium and smiles.

"I need to speak to Suki, please. Do you know where I can find her?"
18 Jan 2018, 8:55pm
Suki gave the man a formal bow.

"I am Suki Hai. How may I help you?"
18 Jan 2018, 8:55pm
Jacyn sat quietly at the bar watching the whole ordeal go down.

How odd, That large bloke is of no consequence, yet Jem just threw herself on him. And that blond woman looks as if she is going to die of nerves.

It didn't take long for him to put two and two together. This was a rescue of some sort.

Keeping a cool air about him, he got up and made his way over to Apollonia and Kyla.

"Worry about him later. Right now, if I'm not mistaken, you need to leave."

He looked to Kyla and gave her a nod as he slipped an hand under the waif's elbow offering her support to stand.
18 Jan 2018, 9:10pm
"Excellent." Jubei said as his expression changes from the over exaggerated smile to a look of relief. "My name is Jubei Himura, Veronica Richardson is my assistant and student. I'm following up on some messages that were sent from this establishment. Veronica said to speak to you first."

The inquisitor looked past Suki to see if anyone was listening in.

"From what she said: you would be aware, if not the first person, to know if anything seemed 'off'."


Last edit: 18 Jan 2018, 9:19pm
18 Jan 2018, 9:16pm
Kyla nodded. "This stranger is right. He'll rip both of our arms off if he caught us, and probably Jem's when he realises what is going on. He is a mo-" She paused, looking at Apollonia's expression, raised her hand to her face and sighed. "Look... I get it. You want to free him too but we're all dead if either him or Marra come out and we're still here. If we get you now, maybe we can help the big guy later."

Last edit: 18 Jan 2018, 9:29pm
18 Jan 2018, 9:29pm
"Ah!" says Suki, bowing again. "Himura san! It is my honour to meet you. Veronica san holds you in most high regard."

She smiles at Jubei, and then frowns slightly.

"But I do not understand. What do you mean by... 'off'?"
18 Jan 2018, 9:51pm
Jubei pulled out his holoslate and opened a series of messages posted to the online board.

"Not too long ago a young woman posted to popular online board messages of praise that were actually coded cries for help. The messages had the words 'monster', 'trapped', and 'help me'. This is very similar to situations involving abused employees, slaves, or lovers. As a matter of honour, I cannot ignore this."

He tapped on the woman's avatar to enlarge it. "She looks to be a thin woman with light blonde, almost silver, hair. Do you know where she currently is?"

The inquisitor looks at the picture a little closer and frowns. "She almost looks like someone I had seen two years ago, back in Pegasi."
18 Jan 2018, 9:56pm
Apollonia freezes, shaking her head.

"I can't leave him," she whispers, "not with her."
18 Jan 2018, 10:03pm
Suki looks at the image on the 'slate and nods slowly.

"I believe I know the woman of whom you speak. She is presently seated in the bar, awaiting the return of her companions."
18 Jan 2018, 10:11pm
Kyla frowned, but attempted to remain calm amid the rising anxiety. "This may be the only chance to get you out of this situation. You know her, so if we get you out now, with your help we can go back for him. Unless Jem Jem performs another miracle, I doubt he'd want to get away anyway and you're just going to remain stuck with her for the rest of your life."

Last edit: 18 Jan 2018, 10:22pm
18 Jan 2018, 10:19pm
Gives Kyla a significant look, then returns his gaze to Apples.

"Look, I've only been in here for a short bit, but your monolithic friend doesn't seem the type that wants to get out from under her thumb. If you're gunna disappear, better make it soon."

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