Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
12 Jan 2018, 8:23am
Jemine chuckles softly.

"You're persistent, aren't you?" she says. "I really can't leave the podium unattended, but I admit that the thought of taking some time off from 'dry old management' does have a certain appeal."

She glances towards the bar room door.

"Look, I shouldn't be too much longer here. Why don't you go through to the bar, find an empty booth, order us some drinks, and I'll be with you as soon as I can."
12 Jan 2018, 8:32am
Quickly checking to make sure that she and Apollonia are alone in the ladies room, Suki moves to stand by the cubicle.

"Apollonia san," she whispers, "I have a message for you from Miss Jemine. She says to tell you that she remembers you, and that she remembers what you are not. And she also says..."

Suki shoots a glance at the door which leads out to the bar.

"She also says to tell you that she wishes to help you."
12 Jan 2018, 9:07am
"Jemine? She...?"

Apollonia smiles tentatively, her dark teary eyes lightening in relief.

"Merci, mon amie! Forgive me, I don't know your name...?"
12 Jan 2018, 9:28am
"My name is Suki. But we do not have much time, Apollonia san. If you do not return to your companion soon, he may grow suspicious and come for you."

Suki glances at the exit door again, then whispers more urgently to Apollonia.

"Miss Jemine says that there is a place you can go where you will be safe. A warm island on a planet about two hundred light years from here. The island is small and remote, with little technology. Your mistress will not find you there. One man lives on the island, he will look after you. If you can get away from your mistress, Miss Jemine will arrange transport for you to the planet."
12 Jan 2018, 9:38am
Apollonia blinks in confusion.

"This man... he needs an assistant? That sounds... but what will I do?"

Her face falls as her tears well up again.

"I don't want to run away, Suki," her voice breaks, "I just want her to love me!"

She buries her face in her hands as she sobs.
12 Jan 2018, 9:51am
Suki's own eyes moisten.

"Miss Jemine says Morgan san is a very bad person, a manipulative bitch who treats others like dirt. Those were her words, amongst many others. I think the woman Miss Jemine describes seems incapable of giving love. Do you truly believe that she can love you?"
12 Jan 2018, 10:00am
Apollonia stops crying and looks up at Suki.

"I wasn't talking about Marra," she says softly.
12 Jan 2018, 10:41am
Suki frowns for a moment, and then her eyes widen. She nods slowly at Apollonia.

"I understand," she says. "I apologise. I have been insensitive. Forgive me. I will tell Miss Jemine what you have said. I have relayed the message. The decision, to stay or to leave, is now yours alone to make. If you choose to leave then you have only to send word to Miss Jemine."

Suki steps away from the cubicle.

"You should return to your companion now, before he becomes suspicious of your absence."
12 Jan 2018, 10:44am
Apollonia's eyes glaze over as she stands mute and motionless for a few moments.

"The man... the island," she mumbles, looking up again.

"Who? Why?"
12 Jan 2018, 12:08pm
"The island," Suki explains, "is on a planet in the system of Reorte. The man who lives there is called Edward Harvard. He is Miss Jemine's father."
12 Jan 2018, 12:14pm
Idris turns his visored helmet towards the door of the ladies room.

Apollonia has been gone some time.
12 Jan 2018, 12:17pm
Apollonia's eyes snap into focus.

"Her father?"

Setting her jaw in resolve, she nods firmly and without hesitation.

"I will go. I don't know how I will get away from her though. But I will."
12 Jan 2018, 1:04pm
Rapping his knuckles one last time he nods to the owner.

"Sometimes persistence pays off." then shaking his head he continues, " then again it can go too far. I do hope to see you later." he gave her one last wink.

A short walk later he found himself in the main entertainment section. Casting his eyes about he saw the most curious juxtiposition. A huge armored brute clad in black was sitting alone with, what appeared to be a party hat set upon his helmeted head. Jacyn smiled. It was silly small and he shook his head. But he felt bad for the man. He was all alone. Though he was intimidating that was not an excuse to be friendly. The young man learned that sometimes you need to be the one to walk up start talking. Get people to feel comfortable. Who knows, a new friend.

He walked up to Idris and pulled a chair out from the table sitting at it.

"Some sort of occasion to celebrate?" He said eyeing the hat with his usual smile
12 Jan 2018, 1:17pm
Suki nods.

"You should leave first. I will wait for two minutes. Ganbarou, Apollonia san. Good luck."

Suki gives Apollonia a respectfully low bow, and then goes into a cubicle and shuts the door.
12 Jan 2018, 1:25pm
Jemine smiles and shakes her head as Jacyn departs for the bar. Turning back to the podium, she returned her attention to the security camera view of the bar.

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ROLEPLAY ONLY! Respect the universe settings!
If you are new here, please try to at least partially involve in the ongoing stories and conversations instead of establishing a completely different "arc". You can always turn it to a different story later.