Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
19 Jan 2018, 5:19pm
As Suki stares at the extinguished green light, she sees a message flash into her comms display:

["Suki, (it says) I need you to be my eyes and ears for the hallways. Please let me know of any possible incoming threats."]

Suki shakes her head and frowns.

"Oso sugiru, Himura san!" she says. "Too late!"
19 Jan 2018, 7:15pm
Kyla turned around, seeing Marra staring right back at her. Her heart sank as she glimpsed Marra's expression, her snarl filled with more hate than Kyla had ever witnessed.

"Oh shit." She said. "Didn't plan for this part. Heyyy uhhh, stranger." She jerked her head toward Marra. "That's the her we're speaking of."
19 Jan 2018, 7:22pm
Marra places her hands on her hips, her curled lips tightening into a pout.

Her blazing glare turns to Apollonia.

"Where is Idris?" she asks, her voice soft and controlled.
19 Jan 2018, 7:24pm
Apollonia gapes, frozen in fear and unable to reply.
19 Jan 2018, 7:29pm
Idris emerges from the corridor entrance to stand behind Marra.

"Feistres," he rumbles.
19 Jan 2018, 7:30pm
Kyla glanced over to the armoured man, now standing behind Marra. Time halted to a stand-still as she froze in place, unable to take her eyes off Idris. Her lips trembled. "We're double screwed now..."

Last edit: 19 Jan 2018, 7:40pm
19 Jan 2018, 7:34pm
Jemine hurries into the bar after Idris, and looks around.

"Oh, shit..."
20 Jan 2018, 1:34am
Jacyn had made the assumption that her referred to the curly black haired woman. He was about to say something when he saw Idris look into the room. He noticed Kyla's expression. In a whisper he spoke to the toaster whisperer (Kyla, see her fun exploration log) "W-why do you say that?"

Last edit: 20 Jan 2018, 2:03am
20 Jan 2018, 1:56am
(I know this comment is not in role-play but I noticed this whole thing going on who started it ?)
20 Jan 2018, 9:39am
"See that armoured guy there?" Kyla said, nodding toward Idris. "That is what makes me say that. As soon as that woman commands it, he's going to tear us to pieces."
20 Jan 2018, 10:16am
"No, he won't," says Jemine, stepping forward. "Morgan won't command him to do any such thing. Why would she?"

Jemine moved to stand in front of Marra.

"Well?"
20 Jan 2018, 10:25am
Marra turns to Jemine, noting that she followed Idris into the bar area. Her dark eyes flick between them both, her eyebrow raised.

A wry smile breaks across her lips as she nods in understanding.

Slowly and deliberately, she walks towards Apollonia, raising her voice to address the tense crowd of people;

"In Pegasi, we have a saying," she reaches down to caress Apollonia's delicate cheekbone, running her hand down to her neck.

"If you can't defend it, you don't deserve it,"

Suddenly, she grasps Apollonia by the neck and hauls the startled woman to her feet. Marra shoves her towards Idris, who places a huge armoured gauntlet firmly on her shoulder.

"These two are mine," hisses Marra, her eyes blazing as they sweep across the crowd, "and I am more than capable of asserting that. Try to take them from me, and I'll take from you tenfold."

She looks back to Jemine with a twisted smile.
20 Jan 2018, 11:23am
Jemine stares at Marra for several moments, and then bursts out laughing.

"Oh, Morgan!" she says. "You are priceless! Priceless... and totally paranoid. Always jumping to conclusions, seeing threats in every shadow."

She glances at Apollonia, then back to Marra.

"What makes you think I tried to take anyone away from you? No one is missing, are they? You've been out of the room for an hour, plenty of time for, well, for anything to happen. But nothing did happen. Nobody died. No one has gone missing. Your... friends... are still here, waiting for you."

Jemine's lips curl into a half smile.

"You've had a good time here, Morgan. But you had to go and spoil it for yourself with your baseless accusations. Always bullying, always manipulating... I actually feel sorry for you."

Jemine glances at Apollonia and Idris, then turns back to Marra.

"As for these two people being yours, you might do well to remember that compassion goes a long way towards keeping loyalty. And the way you're going, it may not be long before that loyalty evaporates. Then you'll be all alone, Morgan, and you'll have only one thing to defend. Yourself."
20 Jan 2018, 12:10pm
Marra holds her smile and her gaze on Jemine.

After a few awkward moments of silence, she glances around her surroundings, before looking back to Jemine.

"Nice place," she says, her voice laden with an underlying malice.

Without another word, she spins on her heel, beckoning to Idris.

The armoured minder pushes Apollonia foward to follow Marra. Before he follows on himself, he mutters in a barely audible rumble to Jemine;

"Diolch,"

With that, the small group of outlaws exit the Olive Grove.
20 Jan 2018, 4:10pm
Jacyn eyed the whole spectacle with an air of disdain. As Marra made her retreat the young man approached Jem.

"No one of consequence huh? Seems to me ya know them quite well. The blond haired woman kept referring to a 'monster,' I'm assuming she meant that Morgan woman."

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ROLEPLAY ONLY! Respect the universe settings!
If you are new here, please try to at least partially involve in the ongoing stories and conversations instead of establishing a completely different "arc". You can always turn it to a different story later.