Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
12 Feb 2018, 4:16pm
She eyes the Imperial's eye.

"Sounds fair enough. But we will be near by to make an arrest if warranted."

Taking another sip of her beverage she adds, "Interesting eye you have there Mr. Himura."
12 Feb 2018, 8:09pm
"Ah, you've noticed," Jubei replied calmly. "My eyes are enhanced. I Got them replaced when one of my natural eyes was badly hurt during a mission. Right now I'm checking your vitals. Most notably, your heart rate as I need to know you aren't planning something 'extracurricular'. If you want Stryker, or whoever else is causing you trouble, you need to do this right. Because if you don't, you may not get another chance."

He looked at the inspector intently. His bionics making note of any changes to heart beat and body temperature.

"Please understand that intelligence is my field of expertise. This isn't my first time working with a young inspector, so I've come to expect some level of overzealousness. Granted, we barely know each other so I also expect you to be cautious of me."
12 Feb 2018, 8:23pm
Corvallu scoffs, "Arn't you full of surprises." she offers him a cunning smile. "I may be young, but I am not zealous. You're right of course we have one shot at this so we have to make the best of it and play it safe. So tell me, what's the next step then?"
12 Feb 2018, 8:32pm
"The next step for me is to contact Stryker," the Inquisitor laughs. "You, on the other hand, should report back to your partner or superior. I'm sure they're waiting for you."

Jubei pulls back his left sleeve to reveal his wrist-computer. He taps a few keys, produces a small chip, and hands it to Miss Ibara.

"This contains security codes so that you can contact me directly. Please use it as you feel the need."
12 Feb 2018, 9:34pm
She nods as she takes the chip.

"Thank-you Mr. Himura," she said standing. She gasped and a look of surprise drew across her face as she clutched her chest. Looking down she pulled her hand away coated int crimson. A hole in her chest where her forehead was just a moment ago. She teeters and collapses upon the table with a clatter.


Last edit: 13 Feb 2018, 2:06am
14 Feb 2018, 4:40am
Seeing the sudden spike in Corvallu's heart rate followed by a sudden drop, Jubei sprang into action and caught the critically injured investigator before she hit the ground. His enhanced bio-vision noted that her vitals were rapidly dropping, there was an immediate and almost certain chance that the woman would not survive her wound.

Jubei quickly looked around to see where the shooter could be. He noticed a dark figure dismantling a rifle in the window of a multi-story residential apartment. Anger started to bubble up in the Inquisitor, making him tighten his grip on Corvallu. A faint wheeze from the young woman made him come back to the here and now. Punishment would have to wait, the young woman needed immediate medical attention.

"I hope your will to live is strong, darlin'," he whispers as he closed his eyes. "Cause I got about a hundred meters of corridor to get through before the medical ward."

Jubei opens his eyes, revealing a different pattern than before. His iris had again the light blue colour, but the pupil was surrounded by a blue circle and encased in a three ended mass of black. The Inquisitor's muscles tensed for a brief moment before he took off at high speed toward the medical ward, carrying Corvallu in his arms and nimbly avoided all the people and obstacles in his way with surprising accuracy.
15 Feb 2018, 8:22am
Jemine wakes up. She turns her head to see the slumbering figure of her boyfriend, Sam, and smiles. She checks the time: oh-six-hundred. She's had barely any sleep since getting home from her shift at The Olive Grove.

She gets out of bed and crosses to the washroom. After a short shower, Jemine slips into a robe and moves into the kitchenette to prepare breakfast.

An expression of discomfort appears on her face. She opens a storage locker and takes out a small brown bottle. She removes the cap and tips two white pills into her hand, then pops them into her mouth and swallows them.

She takes a breath, then moves back to the bedroom. She lays a hand on Sam's shoulder.

"Sam? Time to wake up..."
15 Feb 2018, 9:33am
Sam had been sleeping more heavily in contrast, having spent a few days doing passenger runs, in addition to purchasing a secondary ship for more general use. He placed his hand on top of his girlfriend's, humming contentedly as his eyes opened themselves contentedly as he looked up. "I'll never get over the fact I have you to wake up to, honourable and privileged I consider myself." He noted, his accent being less defined than recently due to using more neutral tones with passengers.
15 Feb 2018, 10:20am
Straightening up, Jemine smiles and then begins to sway awkwardly.

"Oh!" she says, raising a hand to her head. "I feel dizzy. It must be because of that pedestal you put me on. It's terribly high."

Laughing, Jemine bends down to kiss Sam's forehead.

"Breakfast in five minutes," she says. "Then we should be sorting ourselves out to leave. I want to get there in good time."

She moves through to the kitchenette dining area.
15 Feb 2018, 11:11am
Sam indulged in his inimitable hearty laugh to this. "And holding firm after yesterday." He teased gently in reference to Valentine's Day the day before, where the bar had been at full capacity all day.

"Well the Cobra's all ready to go for us when we set off. Best FSD we can get on Citi installed so we'd be there in no time."

He hauled himself into a sitting position and stretched. "More than enough time to shower, can't promise I won't sing.."
15 Feb 2018, 12:03pm
After breakfast, Jemine walks through to the bedroom. She takes off her robe and puts on some underwear. Then she takes her green flightsuit from its locker.

"It's been months since I last wore this," she says. "I hope I can still get into it."

She pulls on the garment and fastens it with a loud sigh.

"Good Gaia's Armpits! I'd forgotten just how ruddy tight this thing is."
15 Feb 2018, 12:29pm
Sam had suited up at around the same time, now opting for red over blue for purely aesthetic reasons.

He quite rightly said nothing with regards to whether the flightsuit would fit or not, not wishing to risk the wrath of his partner if he did.

"You're telling me! Had to go a size up without gaining a gram!" He added with a small chuckle , half lying as he had admittedly gained a few kilos of late, but not enough to make a huge difference.

"We can go the leisurely route or just get there as soon as possible. I've got a high end fuel scoop fitted if we want to do it in one." He added as he put his glasses on, displays coming to vision for a few moments.
15 Feb 2018, 12:55pm
"The quick route, please," Jemine replies. "I'd like to be at the spot for the right time. If we can avoid any trouble on the way, so much the better."

Jemine puts on a pilot jacket over her flightsuit, then ties her hair in a high ponytail with a green bobble. Picking up her holdall, she nods at Sam.

"Let's go."
15 Feb 2018, 1:14pm
"One step ahead of you there, route is already set in the ship, so just a case of charging the FSD and scooping when needed. How long have we got as of now?"

He asked, having allowed leeway in the route for any unforeseen delays. He too clad himself in a pilots jacket, adorned with a few decorative images here and there.

"Well I can't guarantee any immunity from interdiction once we get to LHS 3447 from undesirables, but other than that, I have a clean record in all systems and I'll be keeping time in intermediate systems down to fuel scooping and star reorientation only."

He probably came across as wordy, but it was hard to take the Naval mindset out of him at times. He had his luggage already stored in the Cobra's cargo hold, sliding his hand intinhetd gently.

"Pad 35, lead on my love."
15 Feb 2018, 3:10pm
Jemine nods.

"We've got plenty of time," she says. "But I'd prefer to get there too early than be in a mad rush at the last minute. Besides, Galnet says there's a war in '3447 at the moment, so we may have a wait on our hands when we get to Dalton Gateway. The authorities are bound to be running checks on incoming ships."

Her hand in Sam's, Jemine and her boyfriend leave their apartment and head for the Citi Gateway docks.


Last edit: 15 Feb 2018, 4:25pm

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