Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
06 Feb 2018, 9:54pm
Shrugging her shoulders Corvallu answers the question, "They would have trial that is customary to HIP 108828's laws. Though, Inara may have some weight in it as well since this is now an inter-judiciary case."

she pauses, staring hard at Jem's back, but chooses not to speak.
06 Feb 2018, 10:36pm
Jemine nods, and watches the branches of a tree moving in the breeze on the realistic holographic landscape.

"I don't know much about criminal law," she says. "Can you tell me what would happen if the trial returns a guilty verdict? What's the sentence likely to be?
06 Feb 2018, 10:44pm
She thinks for a moment and coming to a resolution she explains, "Since we don't have all of the details, it can range from a few years in prison colony to a life sentence."

Again she pauses. "Is there something you would like to share with me, miss Caesar?"
07 Feb 2018, 2:43pm
Jemine purses her lips, then turns to face Corvallu.

"I... I may know who it is you're looking for..."
07 Feb 2018, 3:58pm
Corvallu rests a finger on her cheek, elbow on table,

"Any information you have would be helpful."
07 Feb 2018, 7:13pm
With a deep sigh, Jemine retakes her seat and, after a moment's hesitation, taps the desktop. She nods towards the large holo-screen mounted on the wall in one corner of the room. The screen flickers into life.

"This is recorded security footage from The Olive Grove's bar," she says. "As you can see, it's time stamped at 21:46 on November the twenty eighth last year. You see those three men standing at the bar, chatting? From what you've told me, I think it's likely that one of them may be the person you're looking for."
07 Feb 2018, 8:36pm
Corvallu stands, tugging at her jacket. She closes the distance between her and the large screen clasping her hands behind her back as she watches the security feed unfold.

Looking over her shoulder the young woman address her host, "Can you pause it at time index 1125?" returning her attention to the scene scrutinizes the men in question. Finally she turns,

"Miss. Caesar, would it be an imposition to receive a copy of this security footage?" she turns slightly back to the large holo-screen and points to a large muscular man with a claw like cybernetic for a right arm. "Who is this man?"
07 Feb 2018, 9:12pm
Jemine taps her desktop a few times, then produces a datachip from a drawer.

"I've copied the footage for you," she says, handing the datachip to Corvallu. "It's all on here. The man's name is Aune. Stryker Aune. As I say, he may be the one you're after. I have no proof that he is, but with one thing and another..."

She falls silent.
07 Feb 2018, 9:47pm
Corvallu takes the offered datachip and slips it into a pocket of her jacket.

"Any idea where we could find him?" she asks.
07 Feb 2018, 11:04pm
Lost in thought, Jemine rests one hand on her stomach. She remains silent for several more seconds, then blinks as her attention returns to the present. She looks at Corvallu.

"What? Oh... no, I have no idea where he could be. I only saw him once more after that-" she waves towards the holo-screen, "-about a week later, in fact. He was outside the InGaBa, arguing with some other fella. Perhaps he knows where Stryker is. Or maybe one of the two men who were here with him might know."
07 Feb 2018, 11:27pm
She nods once before collecting her emitter. As she pockets it she speaks.

"Before I leave, Any information you have on those two would be helpful."
08 Feb 2018, 8:23am
Jemine nods, and turns back to her desk.

"All our visitors are required to give their name at reception," she says, trading the display. "A security cam captures a still image at the same time. I can pull them up from our records..."

A few more taps.

"There they are, on the screen. Adam Firethorn and..."

Jemine's eyebrows rise.

"...and Phisto Sobanii. Of course, people come and go here all the time, Inspector Ibara. I don't know whether the three of them already knew one another. They may have just met for the first time and got chatting. About their ships, probably."
08 Feb 2018, 4:12pm
Corvallu nods as she gathers her things.

"Boy's and their toys. Well, thank you Miss. Caesar, you have been most helpful."

She hands Jem a card.

"If you have any more information, or something comes to mind, please do not hesitate to contact me. You have a fine establishment here. I may just book my next holiday here. God knows I need one with this mess. But that's for another day. Thank-you for your time. It is very appreciated."

The inspector gives one last nod before making her way out of the office, down the hall and nods to Suki as she steps out of the establishment.
08 Feb 2018, 4:31pm
Jemine watches Corvallu Ibara leave. She taps the desktop button which opens the concealed door leading to her private bedchamber, and walks in. After closing the door behind her, she takes off her jacket and shoes, then lies on the four poster bed. She rests her hands on her stomach, and sighs...

...and falls asleep.
09 Feb 2018, 4:25am
"Ha ha ha! What's the matter, bub? Thought you could just grab the shiny and run, eh?" Jubei laughed, genuinely amused at the would-be thief before him. "Boy, the first lesson you need to learn is things aren't that easy. I mean look at you. Ya got balls for tryin' to take it from me, but your about to piss yer pants now. Why'd ya even try?"

The thief, who couldn't have been older than eighteen, stood there frozen in place with his hands on the Inquisitor's sword. His thin frame shook with the fear of being caught, clearly showing his inexperience as a criminal. He looked up at Jubei, frustration showing through his fear. "Food. I was gonna trade it, or sell, it fer food... maybe some medication fer me sistah."

"No job, eh? Yeah, that happens in the Federation." Jubei shook the sword from the boy's grip and sighed, picking the thin youngster up. "Guess yer lucky ya tried to rob me, kid. I'll make you a deal: I'll give you sixty credits right now, that'll be enough for two days worth of food and some over-the-counter stuff for yer sister. Two hundred credits more if you and your sister meet me at the coffee shop across from the Olive Grove tomorrow afternoon at fourteen-hundred hours. How does that sound?"

"Why?" the thin young man asked after catching the credit chip. "And fer dat matter, how do I know yer not gonna just make us slaves, er extort us?"

"Coffee shop's out in the open, kid," Jubei smiled. "I pull anything nefarious there an' everyone will see it. Ultimately kid, it's your choice."

With that, Jubei walked away from the failed thief and continued on to through the entertainment district. As he approaches the front doors, he sees Miss Ibara exiting the establishment.

"Inspector, good to see you," he waved as he spoke. "Here on business, or for pleasure?"

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