Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
19 Feb 2018, 4:56pm
At Marra’s embrace Phisto sighs softly. He closes his eyes, losing himself in her voice. A moment later, he sets his drink on the edge of the table. Reaching up he takes her hands in his and slowly unwraps her arms from around his neck.

Gracefully he gets up, steps around his chair, and stands before her. Cracking a wry grin, he places one hand on her hip and cups her chin with the other.

Lifting her head gently, he leans in and kisses her deeply.
19 Feb 2018, 6:25pm
Marra returns the kiss with fierce intensity, placing her hands on Phisto's chest and pushing him back towards her bedroom doorway.

She breaks off for a moment, her lips breaking into a wicked smile.

"I'm gonna give you every reason to come back," she breathes.

The door slides shut behind them.
20 Feb 2018, 5:49am
The doors to the Olive Grove opened, allowing the pheromone laced air from the brothel to spill out into the corridor of the entertainment district. Jubei stepped through the threshold dressed in a forest green dress shirt and a pair of black dress pants, his sword hung from it's usual spot on his left hip. He rubbed his shoulder as he walked toward the greeter's podium.

"Konbanwa Suki-chan," Jubei calls joyfully. "I, uh... corrected a situation in the back allies. Would Penelope be available for a massage?"
20 Feb 2018, 9:26am
Suki smiles at the newcomer as he enters. She notices the sword at his hip. Her left eyebrow twitches as the newcomer addresses her by name. She hesitates for just a split second, then tilts her head in recognition.

"Konbanwa, Himura san," she replies, with a polite bow. Then she frowns apologetically.

"There is no one at The Olive Grove by the name of Penelope," she says. "We used to have a girl named Penny, but she left before Miss Jemine took over. Perhaps you are thinking of someone else, hai?"


Last edit: 20 Feb 2018, 2:47pm
20 Feb 2018, 3:02pm
"Right! Sorry," Jubei replies sheepishly. "Sorry darlin', must've gotten my bell rung harder than I thought. Shoot, what's the girl's name whom I've been getting to work my back?"

The Inquisitor purses his lips in confusion. "Anyway, please apologize to the lady for me."
20 Feb 2018, 4:27pm
Suki smiles.

"She has obviously created a favourable impression on you, Himura san. Let me check our records..."

Tapping her podium display, Suki brings up details of Jubei's previous visit. She nods and smiles.

"Ah! Hai hai, you were attended by Candi. She is very beautiful. Very eager to please."

Suki taps the display again.

"Candi will be available shortly. Would you like to wait for her in the bar, Himura san?"
20 Feb 2018, 5:03pm
Jubei straightened himself, recognition danced in his eyes. "Yes, Candi, with an 'i'! That's the lady. Wait... eager to please? No no no no no, it's not like that! She's good with her hands and I-"

He stops, fully realizing what that sounded like, and clears his throat.

"Yeah, I'll wait in the bar and get some water. Thanks, Suki-chan. Veronica's going to have a field day with that," he laughed as he made his way to the bar.
20 Feb 2018, 5:32pm
Suki nods and bows respectfully as Jubei passes by. She turns and watches him as he enters the bar. Then, as the door slides shut behind him, Suki shakes her head and chuckles softly.

"Dansei!"
20 Feb 2018, 6:27pm
"Kon'nichiwa!" Candi butchered the language, but she smiled all the same striding up to the Imperial Inquisitor.  Upon reaching him, she leaned on the counter affording the man quite a stunning view.

Chuckling, Candi-with-an-I traces a finger over a scratchy cheek, then pouts with exaggerated pursed lips, "Sword need polishing again Honey? Well, I assure you, your equipment is in good hands." she said as she lifted lifted the blade slung about the man's waist and let it slip from her fingers.


Last edit: 20 Feb 2018, 8:07pm
20 Feb 2018, 7:21pm
"Ha ha, Candi," Jubei kept his gaze on the woman's face, despite the instinct to look lower. "Yeah, I get it, this is a brothel. How many times have you done that now? You just like to see me squirm, don't ya?"
20 Feb 2018, 7:42pm
Candi-With-An-I sat up straight.

"Chico, I like seein' ya get all stiff and ridged." She said with smirk drawing across her candy apple red lips.

"So, what is it today honey?"

She leaned in, breathing lighty on the Imperial's neck, "Neck," as she spoke she ran soft hand over a shoulder, "shoulder" and up and over it wrapping the other hand about upper back, "or back?"
20 Feb 2018, 8:32pm
"My back today please," Jubei replied, voice cracking ever so slightly. He cleared his throat before speaking further. "Lead the way darlin'- Oh! I almost forgot! One moment darlin', I really should check my weapon at the front."

Jubei left the bar area and walked toward Suki's podium. He stops in front and hands Suki his sword. "Suki-chan, I really shouldn't have this in the facility. Do me a favour, take care of it for me?"
20 Feb 2018, 8:48pm
Suki bows, and then takes the sword from Jubei. She tests its weight and balance, then looks up at the Inquisitor and smiles.

"You have a very fine weapon, Himura san. It is my honour to take care of it for you."
20 Feb 2018, 8:54pm
"Chico, I'd be more then happy to check your weapon for you. Why should Suki get all the fun?" she said with a tease.

Turning with a hand on her hip she beckoned the Imperial with a slow finger. "When you're done letting her take care of your sword, you know where to find me."

With that Candi slipped into the corridor leading off to the private rooms.
20 Feb 2018, 9:40pm
A faint glow shines as Suki's thumb touches the handle and quiet male voice can barely be heard. "Secondary user authorized."

Jubei smiles and winks at Suki before turning to the hallway. He chuckles and calls after Candi. "Alright darlin', you'd better be ready. I think I pulled something so I'm coming with gusto!"

He stops and bows his head.

"Aw, I'm not gonna get away from the innuendos... am I?"

The Inquisitor then marches into the private room Candi walked into.

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