Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
20 Feb 2018, 10:54pm
With the short intrum that she had with Jubei tending to his affairs, Candi set her room up for a massage. In the center was a masseuse table with fresh and clean linen. A round table with a bowl full of hot smooth river stone of jet. A couple of slightly sweet candles burning, the only light source in the cozy nook. Candi dips her hand in a bowl of warm oil.

"Honey, that one, was too easy." she said nodding to a paper room divider. Behind which was another table for him to set his things upon and a towel to wrap himself up with. "So, I'll spare you."

Smiling she patted the table where her client would soon be lying.
21 Feb 2018, 4:54pm
"Holy Space Christ, I needed that," Jubei stretched before grabbing his dress shirt. The massage really hit the spot and the Inquisitor was feeling like a younger version of himself. "Was there anything special in the oil this time?"
21 Feb 2018, 5:59pm
Cleaning up, Candi winks at the Imperial,

"I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wish I could tell you what's in this oil, I really do, you're so sweet, but it is a proprietary recipe." she said as she wiped her hands off.

"Well, that concludes today's session. Don't be a stranger, and don't forget to tip, like last time." she puffed out her lips in another mock pout.
21 Feb 2018, 6:46pm
Jubei buttoned up his shirt and laughed. "Didn't your boss tell you? If you have to ask for a tip, you're not charging enough."

The Inquisitor secures his wrist-computer/vambrace to his forearm and rolls down his sleeve to cover it.

He turned and winked at Candi. "Ha ha, don't worry darlin', I always give good tips to people who do a good job."

"So tell me, what do you think of the owner? I want to have a word with her, but don't exactly know what to expect."
21 Feb 2018, 7:59pm
Candi turned and considered the young man for a minute.

"Miss, Jemine? She's a real dear. No nicer woman you could meet. I don't know her personally, but she's kind to us, and lets do pretty much what we want. What can I say, best boss I ever had!"

She smiles, "Not that it's any of my business chico, but what is it you want to talk to her about?"
21 Feb 2018, 9:09pm
"Well darlin'," he started, smiling as he spoke. "My student was here a short time ago on, clan business, and spoke very highly of her. Now, I'm a bit of a skeptic due to my field of work and my own experiences, so I have an opportunity to see if what my student said was true."

Jubei scratched his thin beard absentmindedly and pondered for a moment. "I did meet her briefly, what that incident in the bar involving Morgan. She's quite intelligent, I'll give her that."
23 Feb 2018, 11:15am
Phisto Sobanii walks briskly down the boardwalk of Citi Gateway's main shopping centre. Holding his data slate out in front of him, his eyes dart between it and his path ahead. Slung over his shoulder is a bag containing several grocery items.

As he turns a corner he becomes a little too engrossed in what he's reading and collides with a woman coming the other way. Startled, he drops his data slate with a look of horrified embarrassment.

"Oh, gods. I'm so sorry. I should've been watching... wait! Jemine?"
23 Feb 2018, 11:31am
Jemine walks along the concourse of Citi Gateway's shopping area. Something in a window catches her attention, and she does not see the man walking straight towards her. As they collide, Jemine gasps in surprise. Her shopping bag falls to the deck, and a small package spills out.

"Hey!" she says. "Why don't you watch--"

She stops as she registers that the man has addressed her by name. She looks at his face, puzzled at first. Then she raises her eyebrows on recognition.

"Oh! Commander Sobanii, isn't it?"
23 Feb 2018, 12:03pm
Phisto smiles sheepishly as he kneels down to help Jemine collect her things.  He hands her the small package before tucking his data slate into his flight jacket.

"In the flesh, I'm afraid.  Sorry again, I was getting caught up on the latest issue of Valentina!  How've you been?"


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23 Feb 2018, 12:24pm
After hurriedly stuffing the package into her bag, Jemine attends to a few stray wisps of hair.

"I'm fine, thank you. So, you actually read Valentina! magazine, then? I'm afraid I haven't yet caught up with this month's. Anything interesting in it?"
23 Feb 2018, 12:30pm
Phisto stands up and smiles as Jemine tidies her hair.

"Yeah! They've got a feature this month about YZ Canis Majoris. One of the biggest stars out there, they say. Needless to say, putting it on the list of places to see before I die."
23 Feb 2018, 12:47pm
Jemine nods.

"Ah, I see. Well, I tend to read it for the fashion and makeup sections myself. It's essential for a girl to keep up to date with the trends, you know."

She gives Phisto an appraising smile.

"So, tell me; what has Fighter Jock been up to since I saw him last?"
23 Feb 2018, 12:59pm
Phisto nods along as Jemine speaks. He smiles slightly at her question, taking a few moments to consider his answer.

"Had a rough patch at work. FDL is... ah... in the shop so I've been hanging around Citi Gateway the past few weeks." He motions toward the bag on his shoulder. "Just picked up a few things before I head out on a trip."

Giving Jemine a once over, he quizzically cocks his head. "What about you? Olive Grove keeping you busy, I hope?"
23 Feb 2018, 1:50pm
"Very," Jemine replies. "Our reputation is growing leaps and bounds. For the better, I hasten to add. And I'm sure you know only too well how important reputation can be. One false move and your rep takes a nasty tumble."

Jemine suddenly coughs into her hand, then clears her throat. She smiles at Phisto.

"The last time I saw you," she says, "you were in The Olive Grove with an acquaintance of mine; Stryker Aune is his name. Seen him lately?"
23 Feb 2018, 5:36pm
“Big Guy?”

Phisto frowns and shakes his head slightly. “Nope, can’t say that I have. Last time I saw him, in fact. Why?”

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