Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
24 May 2018, 11:00pm
Phisto rolls his eyes and slaps his palms on the table once.

"Look, I trust you guys.  I really do.  Right now you're the only thing I have that even approaches family."  Suddenly very conscious of his outburst he lowers his voice and leans in over the table.

"But we need to get going on this.  All the planning is fine and all but we can only twiddle our thumbs so long.  Just look around - stuff is starting to move and we're risking getting caught with our asses hanging out."

Phisto leans back from the table and smooths out his shirt.  He is silent for a moment.

"And honestly... goddamn it I can't believe I'm saying this... but this is probably the best chance I have to do something different with myself.  With my life.  If it slips through my fingers?"

He shrugs and looks back and forth between the two men expectantly.
25 May 2018, 3:21am
"There has been much risk and much sacrifice to get to this point. Plans fail for lack of counsel, and up to this point, steps have been taken carefully."

Deadeye smirked at Phisto, "But you're right. It's time."
25 May 2018, 3:28am
The waitress returns and delivers Phisto's drink to the table. He nods politely, takes the drink, and presses it to his forehead. He slumps in his chair, relieved.

"Thank the gods."

He sits back up, downs the drink in a single pull, and plants the glass on the table with a clunk.
25 May 2018, 3:33am
Snipes smiled as the waitress had also brought his full bottle of Old Sol.

"With everything happening recently, the best we can hope for is a smooth transition, on many fronts. I've tried to apply leverage and resources where needed, and I've been running a bit thin. It'll be nice to just take a breather after all of this, even if it's only a brief reprieve."

He popped open the bottle and poured a few rounds for the gentlemen around him.

"For Loren."
25 May 2018, 3:49am
Phisto laughs quietly and raises his glass. Wrapping his arm around Isaiah, he pulls him in for a hug.

"For Loren."
25 May 2018, 4:03am
Isaiah took his glass and peered down into the drink for a moment, then held it up to the others. His voice was quiet, solemn.

"For Rebecca. For Luko. For the souls that went out into the darkness and didn't come back. For Prism, and for her people. For all those who are fighting wars based on lies, half-truths. For Jameson."

His voice cracked slightly, but his resolve was steeled. "And for Kahina. May the memories of them all guide us forward."
25 May 2018, 7:05am
"for Iris and Wei" whispers Bernard, downing his drink as he watches the men toast over the rim of his glasses, zooming in with his cyborg eyes.
"Another, please" he asks the pleasure girl who plopped into his lap after a couple thousands credit disapeared down the preverbial money hole that is the dataslate menu
25 May 2018, 12:16pm
She is wearing an ornately patterned crop top and a long skirt. She runs one long finger across the cheek of the man on whose lap she is sitting. Then she reaches over to the dark haired man, ruffling his beard. She winks and smiles at the other two men.

"I understand you are here for a meeting," she says, her voice husky. "It is a strange thing, to hold a business meeting in a place meant for pleasure. So, when you tire of your business, and your thoughts return to pleasure, ask them to send me to you."

She reaches for one of the glasses on the table and takes a sip from it. Then she stands.

"My name is Zoya," she says, then turns and saunters away.


Last edit: 25 May 2018, 1:31pm
25 May 2018, 1:44pm
Snipes cautiously removed his hand from the antiquated sidearm in his sweatshirt pocket as he eyed Zoya sauntering off.

"So yeah, I'm going to take off, gentlemen. It's always a pleasure, and I will be in touch. If you need to reach me for any reason, you know my contact information. Good celebrating, but we have much to do."

He stood up from the booth and looked at his associates.

"Please enjoy the open tab."

Snipes patted both men on the shoulder and headed out of the establishment.
25 May 2018, 8:27pm
slightly nudging Liam with the tip of his boot 'show time buddy, get your sneak on'

Liam locks on to his target with one eye and waits a few moments before getting up, pretending to be drunk, as he follows unhurriedly the man that just got up

'well its just you and me' he says to the girl on his lap 'lets go party' **fade to black**
25 May 2018, 9:09pm
Stryker grunted as he pushed himself up and off the sofa. He turned his blue eyes upon the leather-jacketed inspector. "Well, if you're going to be bait, might as well set the trap. No reason sittin' around here."

He cast his eyes to Jubei, "Her ship? Most logical place to set it?" then slipped through the door.

Corvallu's eyes hardened. She didn't like the idea of being bait, but she knew the value in it. Nodding she stood to follow the large man, straightening her jacket.
27 May 2018, 2:55am
After this I'm going to need a change of clothing...

Jubei walked out of the apartment after nodding to the guards.

He followed the group to the lift and entered nonchalantly. There, he leaned against the wall and waited for the shift in gravity that comes when nearing the Docks.
27 May 2018, 12:01pm
As they were walking, they talked about their plan.

Off in the distance a sniper patiently set up his shot. Finger lightly on the Trigger he waited as Corvallu's head was clean in the holo-crosshairs.

He seized the moment and squeezed

And in that moment, Stryker unknowingly obstructed the shot. Searing hot pain ripped through his shoulder and he growled as a hot mess of blood oozed out over his back.
28 May 2018, 1:00pm
Continuing on through the marketplace, Adam turned to another stall. It was smaller than the rest and off into a corner. Yet, despite its size the small the little shop was as alluring as the rest. Savory and sweet smells drifted from the small stall and crept through the marketplace like an intoxicating gas. It was food. And Adam very much enjoyed food. The explorer adjusted his course, making a sharp and direct turn toward the man operating the stall.

“Hungry?” The man said glancing toward Adam as he arrived, straightening up his posture from where he slouched over a small grill.

Adam nodded, motioning toward whatever snack-sized-piece-of-meat-on-a-stick that was being constantly turned by an automated device. “Some of those?” He asked with a grin, producing his data-tablet in preparation for the exchange. “And any Street Waffles if you make them.”

“Sorry, no Street Waffles.” The stall owner grinned in response and took the snacks, placing them into a brown bag and handed them over. A few seconds later the charge pinged Adam’s account and extracted the credits. He handed them over. “Here, take these. It’s not the synthetic stuff you explorers are used to. All sourced in-system too. Fresh.”

Looking surprised, Adam cranked his head back. “Explorer? How did you figure that?”

Chuckling, the man motioned to Adam’s jacket and the symbol of his explorer rank patched onto the shoulder. “It’s on your shoulder, kid.”
31 May 2018, 10:53pm
In the Commerce Division Jack Miller needs to deliver one of the last work items that his father had before he passed 7 odd years ago, even tho its a old piece of technology its metals can be recycled its heart breaking to get rid his fathers belongings that he got from work but its Core Dynamics property.   He goes to building where he is suppose to give the items to the representative of Core Dynamics.
   "Hello there Mr. Miller." Jack hates it when he calls him "Mr. Miller" he's not married but it's the polite way to address someone. "Hi Mr. Fredrick here's the last item you're company requested, is there anything else you need ? like a drink or something I don't mind spending my credits I got you covered."
   "Actually yes there's something I do need, I've had a very bad day today I need something to calm my mood. Dont you mind if you'll get me some Lavian Brandy ? only 1 so I wont get drunk along the way home." Thats a very strange order especially for a business representative Thought Miller "Um even you don't get intoxicated Fredrick you'll still experience side effects."
  "It doesn't matter that shop right there should sell some it's rare to find such a commodity well besides in the Lave system and the Bar here in Citi Gateway." Miller thought about this "Ok ok I'll get some Lavian Brandy."
   10 minutes later "Sorry it took awhile to decide on the credits I had to pay 44,502 credits for just 1 drink but you're lucky im rich." Miller hopes he just didn't just get somebody killed because of Alcohol. " Thank you Mr. Miller you dont know how grateful we are to get our property back, Im sure sorry about your father I heard he was great in Core Dynamics." Miller feels even worse now since he just mentioned his father. "Yeah thank you for that bye Mr. Fredrick."


Last edit: 03 Jun 2018, 7:01pm

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