Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
03 Jun 2018, 2:43pm
Jellicoe strolled through the entertainment district, his wariness gradually fading away in this, one of the few oases of safety he had left. He wanted to drink, drink till he could drink no more then pass out for a few more hours of numb oblivion. But not here. Appearances had to be maintained and a carefully cultivated self image preserved. He leaned on a wall, lit a cigar and considered the options, he had been here before but not often or long enough to become familiar with more than a couple of bars.
11 Jun 2018, 11:10pm
Adam Firethorn continued his trek around Citi Gateway, passing by through the entertainment district. He stretched his arms beneath his Commander’s Jacket, tilting his head from left to right, neck cracking slightly. A content sigh escape his lips as he still wandered, passing by places like the Olive Grove and the numerous bars and nightclubs that lined the streets.

He did have plans to leave Citi soon, but couldn’t quite make it back to the Docks to do so. A lot of his crew even still remained at Citi, most having taking a liking to the “out-of-the-way” nature of the station. Adam smirked at that.

Spying a small bar, Adam took a seat in one of the outside tables.
15 Jun 2018, 3:43pm
It had all happened so quickly.

For Stryker it was an intense searing pain ripping through his shoulder as the bullet penetrated the muscle. He could remember watching in a kind of slow motion Jubei grabbing Inspector Ibara's kinetic pistol and yelling some sort of order.

Ibara wasn't sure what to do and the mechanic had told her to provide the Inquisitor back-up.  She reached for her communication device and called for a medical crew before taking off after the Imperial.

Stryker mustered up strength and dug a talon like claw from his cybernetic hand into the wound and dug the offending piece of metal out before tearing his shirt and stufifng it into the weeping injury to staunch the flow of crimson liquid. Painting he waited for the authorities to show up.

Now, board to tears sitting in a medical-ward waiting for the progenative technology to finish it's thing, he passed the long hours away mucking around on the holo-boards. Not a particularly satisfying endeavor, it did provide a small distraction.


Last edit: 15 Jun 2018, 3:55pm
16 Jun 2018, 7:55pm
Rolling his shoulder experimentally the bodybuilding ex-enforcer walked the corridors of Citi. He hadn't been in communication with the Imperial Inquisitor, nor the Inspector from the Pegasi region, but he knew from first hand experience that Jubei was more than capable of handing the situation.

A bustling crowd of people parted before him. A phenomena that Stryker had come accustom to, and a small way, he enjoyed the power it gave him. He moseyed on and soon found himself at the Olive Grove. The last time he had visited the place, the owner Jem had evicted him. She had absolutely every reason in the universe to do so. Especially after what he had done to her. But he found her bar-tender easy to talk to, even if it was over the holo-boards, and he felt like talking.

He passed into the establishment and stood in front of the reception podium, absent-mindedly scratching his arm with his cybernetic claw waiting for Suki. He would have waged everything that she would know who he was, and consequently barred admittance, but it didn't hurt to try. He wasn't there to cause problems. Heaves knew the troubles that came from the last brothel he visited prior to this one, and the memory still pained him.
16 Jun 2018, 8:22pm
Suki looks down at her podium, then slowly raises her eyes to regard Stryker. There is a cool smile on Suki's face.

"Stryker san," she says, "it is the will of Miss Jemine that under no circumstances are you to be permitted entry to The Olive Grove. Therefore I must ask you to leave immediately. It is my hope that you will comply."
16 Jun 2018, 8:45pm
"I understand Suki. I'm not here to cause trouble. Could you relay a message to your bartender, Cee"

He shifts his weight, "I'd like to talk with her. I understand that here wouldnt be a venue, but there is a nice coffee shop just down the walk there. Someplace public, for saftey."
16 Jun 2018, 9:11pm
After a few moments pause, Suki nods.

"I know the place," she says. "They serve a very acceptable iced coffee. Very well, I shall relay your request to Cee san. Her shift ends in two hours from now. If she wishes to meet with you, she will come to you at the coffee shop. If not, then I will let you know. I can do no more."
16 Jun 2018, 9:24pm
His reply was simple, "Thank you."

Stryker turned and left the establishment. He wandered slowly towards the little coffee hut. He didn't really have anything else to do, so he found a quite corner, made himself comfortable and opened a very boring and technical holo-manual.
17 Jun 2018, 8:39am
Having completed her shift, Cee leaves The Olive Grove by the staff exit and walks along the alley into Second Avenue. She strolls casually along the mall towards the Citi Cafe coffee shop.

She enters and walks to the corner where a large, muscular man sits alone reading a holo-book. She glances at the man's cybernetic arm and its crude-looking metallic claw.

"Stryker Aune?" she asks, taking a seat at the table. "Suki said you wanted to talk with me."
17 Jun 2018, 11:48am
Stryker peers up and over his tech-manual before setting it down on the table and shutting it off with a dying flicker.

"I did," he said, then adding in a dash of manners, "let me get you a drink or something."

He felt awkward. It wouldn't be a very natural conversation, but he needed to talk to someone, and Cee seemed friendly, but honest. The kind of person that would set you strait and point out where the issue lied.

"I know this isn't normal. I would have just spoken to you at your bar, but Jem has barred me from her brothel. And with good reason." He shook his head.


Last edit: 17 Jun 2018, 1:25pm
17 Jun 2018, 12:06pm
Cee orders a gingerbread latte and a lemon muffin.

"Well," she says to Stryker, "I guess she must've had a good reason for barring you. And I also guess you wanna tell me what it was. So... I'm listenin'."
17 Jun 2018, 6:15pm
Solemnly, he nods.

"I haven't told anyone, and it's eating away at my soul. There are days that I can't stand being in my skin. What I did to her, defies any bounds of normal human decency or morels.”

He shook his head, struggling with the words.

“I defiled her.” He raised his mechanical hand and extended a wicked hooked claw. “I implanted something into her. I don't know what it was. I’m still-” he took a breath, “-what she did to me was bad, I've been coming to terms with it, but what I did to her was worse.”
17 Jun 2018, 7:04pm
A barista drone arrives at the table. It efficiently serves Cee with her latte and muffin, then whirs off to attend another customer. Cee picks up the cup.

"Yeah. Y'know, I think maybe I can see why she barred you."

Cee takes a sip of coffee and then puts down her cup. Picking up the knife, she proceeds to cut the muffin into quarters.

"You said you haven't told this to anyone. Why're you tellin' me? And what d'you mean, 'what she did to you'?"


Last edit: 17 Jun 2018, 7:14pm
17 Jun 2018, 7:37pm
Stryker shrugs as he watches the drone whirl away.

"I donno? Maybe 'cause you're a bartender. You listen to people's shit all the time. You remind me of someone I once knew. No nonsense, sound wisdom."

He shrugs again, "She killed someone I loved."


Last edit: 17 Jun 2018, 8:00pm
17 Jun 2018, 9:35pm
Cee's eyes widen in doubt.

"Wait a minute, now," she says. "Are we talkin' about the same Jemine Caesar? Because believe me, the one I know sure don't seem the type to go around killing folk. You gotta be mixin' her up with someone else."

She takes a bite of her lemon muffin.

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