Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
26 Aug 2018, 6:59am
He found it easily enough.

Across the street a shop was being refitted. The smart glass frontage hadn't yet been augmented with adaptive marketing and he took the opportunity to pause at the window while he checked the reflection for anyone tailing him too closely. Then, because there was no one he checked his own reflection.

Although he was sharply dressed, the face that stared back seemed serious and melancholic.

"Smile, this is supposed to be a celebration, isn't it?" He asked himself.

With a smile curling on his lips he entered the Olive Grove.
26 Aug 2018, 9:19am
Suki smiles warmly at the newcomer, and taps her podium display.

"Kon'nichiwa," she says. "Welcome to The Olive Grove. Your pleasure is our pleasure. Do you have a reservation?"
26 Aug 2018, 10:30am
The pretty girl in the lobby smiled and greeted him with a phrase from one of the official languages of the Imperial Court. In response Ouberos bowed slightly and returned the greeting in her own language.

"No, I didn't book, unfortunately I wasn't able to call ahead. I have heard many fine things said about the Olive Grove and thought I should finally come see for myself. Are you fully booked or would I be free to drink in the bar?" He asked.
26 Aug 2018, 12:43pm
Tilting her head and nodding, Suki gives her podium display another quick tap.

"The Olive Grove is always happy to welcome guests to the bar. And we do have a girl available for your pleasure. A very pretty girl, you will be most satisfied. May I take your name?"

Suki's fingers hover expectantly over her podium interface...
26 Aug 2018, 1:37pm
"Of course. My name is Ouberos, Commander Ouberos of Phillips Terminal in the Cd-75 190 system, although truth be told I haven't lived there for a long time,"

"Should I wait in the bar?"
26 Aug 2018, 2:55pm
Suki efficiently enters the man's name on her podium.

"Hai, Ouberos-san," she replies, indicating the door which leads directly into the bar. "You may order a drink at the counter, or through one of the tabletop interfaces. I hope you enjoy your visit to The Olive Grove."
26 Aug 2018, 8:53pm
"I hope so too," he replied with a smile. Then he bowed politely once more and entered the bar.

There were a few people around and some staff here and there. The dark haired woman behind the bar was very striking and he thought about sitting at the counter but chose instead to sit at a table away from the others. After activiating the drinks menu on the table he searched the Rum section and was about to order when he remembered why he was here.

"Champagne it is," he muttered and wondered if the Grand Cru was acually what it said it was. He shrugged, laid his Credit card across the reader and ordered the bottle.

After browsing the menu again he ordered some Olives and bread.

That was the one problem with Ramen. Twenty minutes later he was hungry again.
27 Aug 2018, 9:15am
Carrying a small tray, Monagh saunters across the bar of The Olive Grove. She wears a figure hugging boat neck dress of bergundy lace with an asymmetric hem. She arrives at Ouberos's table and sets down the tray in front of him, then stands with one hand on her hip.

On the tray is a plate of bread rolls, a bowl of olives, a bottle of champagne and two flute glasses.

"There you go," she says. "An' will you be wantin' spread for your bread rolls?"
27 Aug 2018, 3:33pm
Monagh isn't the sort of woman you forget but inwardly Ouberos hopes she doesn't feel the same way about him.

When she asks him if he wants spread he can't help but smile.

"If you have any of Mahons Own Potted Beef I'd take you up on the offer but if not I'm good thanks,"

"Are you joining me?" he asks and indicates the empty chair beside his.
27 Aug 2018, 5:48pm
"That I am," Monagh replies as she sits on the proffered chair. She picks up one of the bread rolls and tears off a piece.

"Lucky for me that I brought two glasses, so it is. I'll be needin' some of that fizz to wash down this bread. Unless you're after knockin' it all back yourself, of course. But I always say that a good bottle of champagne tastes much better when you're sharin' it with friends. An' I'm after hopin' that you an' I will be hittin' it off very nicely, to be sure."

She pops the bread in her mouth and chews.

"Now," she says, "why don't you pour us both a drink, an' then we can be gettin' to know eachother. My name's Monagh."


Last edit: 27 Aug 2018, 8:45pm
28 Aug 2018, 6:00am
"How charming, I'm Ouberos and I always find champagne with a beautiful girl is the best way to toast a celebration," he said and poured a drink for Monagh.

"Just a few days ago I struck a big business deal which has reversed my fortunes. I sold my company for more money than I ever thought possible when I started it and now I'm free to choose a new life for myself," he said and helped himself to an Olive.

"The only problem I have now, is deciding what that life should be,"

Taking care to hold the Champagne flute by the stem so as not to warm the drink with his hand he raised his drink.

"Here's looking at you kid," he said and took a drink.
28 Aug 2018, 2:49pm
Nathalie enters the Olive Grove, talking through her earpiece.

"Yah, I know. -- Well, why not, all the family will be over there? -- Okay, I'll keep you in touch. Gotta go though. Business calls. -- Love you too, Mom."

As she eventually reaches Suki's podium, Nathalie is greeting her with a smile.

"How you're doing, girl?"
28 Aug 2018, 6:09pm
Monagh raises her glass to the toast, and takes a drink.

"Ooh, my!" she says, wafting a hand in front of her face, her eyes widening. "The bubbles are gettin' right up me nose, so they are!"

She takes another sip, and then places her glass on the table.

"So," she continues, "pots o' money burnin' a hole in your pocket, is it? Not a bad problem to be havin', I'm thinkin'. What kind o' business was it you had, might I ask?"

She picks up an olive and pops it into her mouth, whilst gazing intently into Ouberos's eyes.
28 Aug 2018, 6:19pm
"Kon'nichiwa, Hudson-san," replies Suki with a smile. "I am very well, Arigatou gozaimasu. How may I be of service to you?"
28 Aug 2018, 8:03pm
Monagh Mallone "So," she continues, "pots o' money burnin' a hole in your pocket, is it? Not a bad problem to be havin', I'm thinkin'. What kind o' business was it you had, might I ask?"


He smirks.

"Diamonds. I sold Diamonds Monah. To begin with at least. Recently my business partner and I diversified into reality Holologs. We got a lot of repeat syndication and have, sorry had a cult following in some of the wilder systems,"

"Our partnership ended though and I sold the rights to the whole lot. The best bits were over really and I guess the new owner will just try and grind out credits from the creative work we did. Probably try and widen the fan base with sanitised versions and back stories,"

He shrugged and drank some more Champagne.

"How about you Monah, what's your story?"

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