Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
15 Sep 2018, 3:29am
looking around with exagerated head movements, Bernard eventually points at an empty table near the wall "thhhhhere, thats a nice spot". Fumbling his way towards the table, giving a lazy wave to one of the serving girls, he sits down heavily and gestures to the other chair for his new companion to sit in. The tables and chairs are too made of wood, though the floor is multi coloured tiles.

"thiiiis, thiiiiis is what I need" he says with a almost insanely large grin, pointing at a dish on one of the table menus "Imeutsu Fire Beef Stew. Made with....4...6....9.....many spices! See anything you like? Everything thats spicey is marked out with *snicker* a red dot hehe" he says, showing a menu to Fendisteel, on which all entries have a red dot.
15 Sep 2018, 3:49am
"I'll have a glass of water and whatever he's having," C12ASHD points to Fendisteel, "and a seat if there is one available..."
15 Sep 2018, 5:03am
Fendisteel gazes over the menu, he found the red dot added to each item was a tad amusing. "I think I'll try the Xeni Maia Chili, says here of having three exotic spices from outside the bubble....annnnnd I'll have dome Milk with that.


Assuming C12ASHD is speaking with one of the waiters, the table Fendisteel and Bernard were sitting at has four seats in total.
15 Sep 2018, 3:16pm
C12ASHD grabs a seat at the table with Bernard and Fendisteel and paitently await for the arrival of the food, " So fellas how ya'll doing today?"
15 Sep 2018, 10:11pm
Tuns his head towards C12ASHD as he suddenly walks up and pulls a seat to the table "Ah, it's you again...Eh, fine i suppose. I've had the pleasure of meeting..." Fendisteel gestures over to his drunk acquaintance sitting across from him "This...Fellow here a few minutes ago."

Last edit: 16 Sep 2018, 5:13pm
15 Sep 2018, 11:30pm
"Well Hello! name's C12ASHD and you are?"prompting the guy across the table to respond. "Well Fendisteel, how's your day going today?" C12ASHD shrugs his shoulders and sighs, " I made a good few credits on my last run, but als spent them all on the cost of insurance before I could return unscathed." C12ASHD smirks and shrugs again, " win some loose some I suppose."
16 Sep 2018, 1:22am
"Ahh" C12ASHD looks up to see the waitress coming with the food, " Guess your friend is passed out or something," waitress sets food on the table and politely states to enjoy the food then walks off, "well, dig in Fendisteel"
16 Sep 2018, 9:50am
Crashd Lambeth"Ahh" C12ASHD looks up to see the waitress coming with the food, " Guess your friend is passed out or something," waitress sets food on the table and politely states to enjoy the food then walks off, "well, dig in Fendisteel"


'*snort* huh? oh food is here, and some other guy. Where you expecting anyone freindo?' he says raising his head from his arms. Grabbing a spoon and fork he begins work on his stew.

between mouth fulls he looks at the new arrival and says 'sooooooooooooo whats you story? and what are you getting?'
16 Sep 2018, 5:06pm
Crashd Lambeth "Well Fendisteel, how's your day going today?"


Well, as you previous asked I've met..." Gestures over to the man he's sitting across from again "This man and now I'm here..."

C12ASHD looks up to see the waitress coming with the food



Fendisteel also looks up towards the staff member delivering "Oh! Well, service around here is pretty fast!" He flashes a smile. He examines the bowl as it's placed in front of them and looks around for some utensil "I. need. a - Oh! Here we are" He finds a spoon on a piece of cloth.

"Well, dig in Fendisteel"


Fendisteel chuckles "Don't need to tell me!" despite the courage in his tone, he looks down at the bowl's contents a second longer. He was looking for the right bite to try first to ease him into this meal - which may very well be more spicy then he's been led to believe. Finally, he sticks his spoon in and picks up a scoop of meat, some chopped up peppers. He sticks it into his mouth, chews and finds it to be very mild, tasty, but overall not that sp- "Oh goodness!"

The spice kicks in and fendisteel jumps up, he puts on a tough face "Mmm, Gentlemen, if you'd excuse me." He walks off to the nearest restroom of the restaurant, leaving the two to talk.
16 Sep 2018, 8:35pm
"Names C12ASHD, and you are?"C12ASHD notions to the ranger across the table.
17 Sep 2018, 4:45am
FendisteelThe spice kicks in and fendisteel jumps up, he puts on a tough face "Mmm, Gentlemen, if you'd excuse me." He walks off to the nearest restroom of the restaurant, leaving the two to talk.


Bernard slaps the table hard with the palm of his hand hard "HAHahaha yeah, the mirror of my first time here hehe"
Then turning to Crashd he says "My name is Bernard. Im just back station from a job. What about you? how did you shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhtumble upon our merry group? oh wow this time my speech ish coming back alot fashter, did she add another spice?" he looks hard at the contents of his bowl
17 Sep 2018, 1:09pm
C12ASHD raises his eyes from the bowl food to Bernard, " met Fendisteel in the bar before my last job, shared a few drinks and a few stories and then was on our separate ways" Anyway," C12ASHD takes a breathe and finishes his meal, throws some money on the table and stands up, " tell Fedisteel that i hate I couldn't stay longer, but I heard they were in need of pirate removal services in Munshin so I'm off to collect some heads; and some credits. So long Bernard." C12ASHD exits the restaurant and fades into the crowd.
17 Sep 2018, 3:10pm
Letti walks in. A small transport ship had docked and she was first off it. She walks into the bar and stands at the counter. She held a sign. She turns to face the tables and holds up a large display board. She clicks a button and a video on a loop plays. Images of dying manatees flash and a message speaks loud " join the protest of the manatee megaship build. We can eat synth meat. We dont need to do this to defensless animals. Get in your ship and fly to ocrinox orbiter and stand with those who wish this barberic behaviour"

The video pauses and begings the loop again

Letti stood silent. And just lets this play over and over for all to see.
She was the mechanic from Na'Nis crew. She doesnt speak. Even if she wanted to she couldnt. Every now and then she checks her wrist com and types back and continues on her stand
17 Sep 2018, 5:43pm
Na'Ni parks her ship and walks in seeing letti standing there protesting. She sighs and shakes her head.."dont bother. These morons cannot see why we are bothering" she sighs and sits down. Letti turns off her board and sits. " i dont mind that people dont agree. Or care. But when they openly mock me. Attack me. For doing nothing. Why help, i should stop helping the human race and hunt them instead. The thargiods are right. Were not worth this life we have" she motions the barman "where are my kittens?" She asks as he arrives. He tells her they are recovering and will be back in a day. Na'Ni orders spiced rum for her and Letti. "Maybe we should join the thargiods and wipe out this verse. Since the humans in it dont care about simple things like..kindness and respect. Everyone just bullies and beats there way though life without considering the life around them"

Letti looks worried and shakes her head as she pats Na'Nis head

"I know..i know..im just upset" Na'Ni mutters and sits silently drinking her rum once it arrives
17 Sep 2018, 7:05pm
Na'Ni finishes her drink as JJ walks in. Holding three adorable kittens. He places them on the table and they leap at Na'Ni. The barman walks over and pours JJ a drink and smiles

"Guess there all better...again im so sorry you caught a cold from them" he says as he turns and grabs some milk from the bar, pouring it into a bowl he places it down for the kittens on the table

"Tell me barkeep..where can i find the far god supporters...im curious as to..why they seem to revear these creatures"

Letti and JJ choak on there drinks as the bar man goes pale and stutters.

Na'Ni explodes laughing "im kidding..come on..im not that pissed off that i would suddenly throw everything away and become a fargod worshipper" she snorts and laughs

She pets the kittens and smiles "but i will admit..id like to know there thinkings..but i guess we will bever know. For there hiding. And those found..will surly be killed" she sighs and orders a meal. "Steak and chips for us all..synth meat please.." she looks at her tiny crew who are still giving her a worried look

"Seriously?!" She laughs

"Eat up" she says when food arrives. " i feel interesting times lie ahead" she adds and gives them a playful smile,pointed teeth glimering as she begins to eat

Once the crew are fed she goes to the barman. "I need my ship restocking. Drink food and milk. We are leaving for a while. I got some payback to deliver" she says and slideds the man a credit slip. She picks up the kittens. And with a click of her fingers the two follow. She pauses to observe the people around and smiles a cold smile.

Once restocked the large ship leaves the dock and as they boost out the rear landing gear falls off and crashes to the ground
The ship flys off out of view and onto the next adventure

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