Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
30 Sep 2018, 11:48am
"I guess so," replies Cee in response to Kyla's question.

She rises from her chair and moves to a panel set in the wall. The panel slides open to reveal a small drinks cabinet. Cee pours a glass of red wine and returns with it to her seat behind the desk. She takes a sip, then sets the glass down in front of her and smiles at Kyla.

"So, what's new with you?"
30 Sep 2018, 1:56pm
As she slowly turns around in appearant shock, she notices Zoya's wink towards her, but her mind is overflown with informations, and assumptions to actually answer it in any form. She keeps standing in her darker spot, her eyes wet, and her right hand rubbing her own face. After a minute of deep reflexion, she slaps the wall next to her, before hasting back to the front podium, putting herself right in front of it, showing clear anger at first.

"Yo Jade, why Cee's ass's behind Jem's desk?"
30 Sep 2018, 2:32pm
Startled by Nathalie's blunt approach, Jade blinks her eyes several times before regaining her composure.

"Eee! Ay up, love! That were a right fright you gave me, an' no mistake! You just popped up out o' nowhere, like!"

Zoya Mbangwa passes them, on her way back to tidy the bedroom after the session with her previous client. She nods at Jade as she makes her way to the door. Jade returns the nod with a grin, them looks back at Nathalie.

"Now then, chuck, 'appen you 'aven't heard that Miss Cee's the boss of T'Olive Grove now. Well, 'er an' Miss Suki between 'em. It's a sort o' jobshare, like."
30 Sep 2018, 3:12pm
Nathalie stays stunned at Jade's words for a spare second, before going back at it, refusing the truth so far, roughly slamming the podium with the palm of her hands.

"Bullshit! Jemine would've let me known that big of a move! Where is she? I need to talk to her right now!"
30 Sep 2018, 7:45pm
Jade's smile vanishes, to be replaced by a frown. She takes a step back from the podium and folds her arms.

"Now then," she says, "let's get one thing straight, shall us? It's not bullshit. I don't talk bullshit. I'm from Leeds Colony, and we don't talk bullshit at Leeds Colony. So I'd be very much obliged if you didn't accuse me of talking bullshit. Let's cut t'crap about bullshit, 'ave a bit less of thumpin' me podium, an' start to be'ave like the two mature women that we are, if it's all t'same to you."

Jade takes a deep breath.

"Right, now that I've got that off me chest, let's get oursen down to brass tacks. You can't see Miss Jemine right now, because she's not 'ere."
01 Oct 2018, 7:08am
Cee Klover"So, what's new with you?"




Kyla takes a long sip. "Apart from a self-imposed exile to Kremainn, not a whole lot. It's quite crazy out there, like, more-so than Citi. Never thought a mining joint could be so wild, but there you go."


Kyla slouches, allowing herself to relax a little as the effects of the Toolfa begun to kick in.


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01 Oct 2018, 11:59am
Nathalie heavily sighs, and slowly goes around the podium, in order to face Jade without any obstacles.

"Listen. Maybe I shouldn't  have called bullshit... But the thing is, I have one job. One, simple, motherfucking job... And by hiding shit about Jem from me, you're making this a fuck ton harder to me to do that simple job! And I don't know if it's you, or that beeatch that has her ass down Jem's desk, but someone's messing with me, and that someone will have my fists across the face if that continues!"

She then rubs her face for a moment, taking a deep breath after she took her turn, venting.

Nathalie looks at Jade, with her angry facial expression still, but her wet eyes betraying fear, and sadness.

"Listen, Jade... If you know anything, tell me. Tell me now. Please."
01 Oct 2018, 1:23pm
"Yeah, that's miners for you, I guess," replies Cee. "Spending so much time staring at nothin' but rock? No wonder they go wild, given half a chance. It's a living, I guess, but it ain't for me."

Cee takes a small sip of her wine.

"From your reaction on the Banter Board, it sounds like maybe you've been out of touch with Jemine for a little while. The thing is--"

She glances up at the holodisplay in the corner of the room.

"Well now, what do we have here...?"

She taps a button on the desktop, and a familiar voice is heard being relayed from reception:

Nathalie "Nagita" Hudson"...that beeatch that has her ass down Jem's desk, but someone's messing with me, and that someone will have my fists across the face if that continues! Listen, Jade... If you know anything, tell me. Tell me now. Please."


Cee rises quickly.

"Excuse me a moment, Kyla. Something just came up..."

She leaves the office.


Last edit: 01 Oct 2018, 3:55pm
02 Oct 2018, 11:29am
Kyla watches as Cee quickly exits the office.

"Always happens when they get to the good parts," she says, sipping her drink again. She stands up and creeps toward the door to observe the commotion.
02 Oct 2018, 12:35pm
Cee strides purposefully along the central corridor. Passing through the door leading into the reception area, she moves straight to the podium.

"Okay, Jade," she says, a firm tone in her voice. "I'll take care of Miss Hudson."

Cee gives Nathalie a wry half smile.

"I noticed your little altercation a few moments ago," she says, indicating the security camera in one corner of the room. "Now, speakin' as 'the bitch that has her ass down Jem's desk', I guess I'm the one you oughta be talkin' to. Let's take this to somewhere a little more private, huh? You wouldn't wanna scare away the clients, now would you?"

She turns and moves back to the connecting door. It slides open, revealing the central corridor beyond. Cee beckons Nathalie forward.

"After you, sugar."
02 Oct 2018, 1:48pm
"About damn time.", she throws towards Cee before looking at the camera, smirking half a second, satisfied with her "show" in front of it, before the reason why such thing happened, catches her again.

She takes a last look at Jade, before engaging herself in the corridor with some angry steps.

"I better have my answers.", she says when she walks past Cee, not even glancing at her.


Last edit: 02 Oct 2018, 2:27pm
02 Oct 2018, 4:21pm
Cee shrugs as Nathalie walks by, and then follows her into the central corridor where Kyla is lurking. Cee nods towards the office door.

"Go on in and take a seat, the both of you," says Cee. "I have a feeling that the two of you need to hear what I got to say, so I may as well save some breath and tell you both together."
02 Oct 2018, 4:36pm
Nathalie looks around the office, noticing every bit of Jemine's touch missing, and starting to realise the truth she was denying, only a couple moments ago.

She takes a seat, before roughly dropping herself on it.
03 Oct 2018, 7:18am
Kyla shuffles over to make room for Nathalie. She glances over. "So, I'm not the only one out of the loop huh?"
03 Oct 2018, 11:42am
Perching herself on the edge of the desk, Cee looks at the two women.

"Okay, here's the thing. A couple weeks ago, Jemine stopped bein' the owner of The Olive Grove. She handed the whole business over to me and Suki Hai, and then she and Sam left Inara for good."

She looks directly at Nathalie, and smiles gently.

"That's why this bitch has her ass on the desk."


Last edit: 03 Oct 2018, 11:52am

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