Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
24 Oct 2018, 12:56pm
Returning to the bench where the day's adventure in Citi began, Adam sat down with a long and slow exhale. He smiled. It had been a rather interesting, but enjoyable experience. Leaning back the Explorer stretched. His arms lifted above him and his head rolled slightly around on his shoulders. As his stretch ended, Adam placed his hand on a small warm box beside him. There were no plans to let the bountiful shops of Citi Gateway get away from him on this trip.

Warm cookies always made everyone happy, especially Adam.


Last edit: 24 Oct 2018, 1:08pm
05 Nov 2018, 10:22pm
Having left before the bar fight truly became a mess, Stryker and Amar made their way through the streets of Citi until they found themselves at the Olive Groove. He opened the door for Amar and followed him in.
05 Nov 2018, 10:57pm
Suki smiles at the new arrivals, and bows her head in greeting.

"Konbanwa," she says. "Welcome to The Olive Grove. Your pleasure is our pleasure."

She taps her podium display once.

"It is Stryker-san, hai? I did not expect to see you here again."
06 Nov 2018, 4:10pm
Nathalie walks casually through the crowd inside the Entertainment District, wearing nothing but her pilot suit, and having her helmet under her left arm. Making her way to the Olive Grove, she steps in, only to fill the queue at the podium, led by a bulky man, and his companion.
07 Nov 2018, 5:01am
Stryker's face remained passive despite swallowing down a pang of annoyance.

"No, I suppose you wouldn't." He said shifting his weight. "But here I am. Look. I'm not here to cause any problems. Just a place to spend my hard earned credits on booze, some easy sights and an environment that is a hell of a lot better than InGaBa."

He paused for a second, then gestured to Amar. "So, two please."
07 Nov 2018, 11:16am
Suki, her smile steady, regards Stryker for a few moments.

"Miss Jemine ordered that you were not to be admitted, Stryker-san, But she did not specify the reason for her decision. However, Miss Jemine is no longer the owner of The Olive Grove, and I cannot deny you entrance if I have no reason for doing so."
08 Nov 2018, 5:48am
Stryker considered Suki for a moment. Was she curious?

"I think it would be best to honor her decision in non-disclosure. It is a personal matter."

He folded his arms, "I had read a small blip in the Citi Gateway Tribune about that. I figured that since the Grove has changed management, it would be worth checking it out. Honestly, I'm not here to cause trouble. 2 seats at a bar would be fine."
08 Nov 2018, 8:30am
Amar looked back and forth between the two. Hair on his neck pricking as another stranger entered behind them and stood in line. He turned slightly to look over his shoulder, and seeing woman in a pilots jumpsuit, holding a standard remlock under one arm he relaxed, turning his attention back to the hostess.

"Yes that would be fine," he responded in agreement with Stryker, looking beyond he saw a mostly empty bar, and felt a little under dressed in comparison to the decor of the establishment. He after all was only wearing a faded forest green jacket, pants, and a frayed tan tee-shirt. He decided to follow Stryker's lead, and waited patiently for the hostess. In the meantime he occupied himself with gazing around the rest of the Grove.
08 Nov 2018, 11:24am
"Of course, Stryker-san."

Suki taps her podium display twice, and then looks up at the two men.

"The Olive Grove holds many fine attractions besides its well stocked bar, gentlemen. It is hoped that you will extend the pleasure of your visit by sampling the delights we offer."

She looks at Stryker's companion.

"May I take your name, onegaishimasu? For the records, you understand."
08 Nov 2018, 1:11pm
Amar diverts stops studying the decor and turns towards the hostess. "Of course he says, Amar Epsilon." he says before turning  his attention to the bottles on the wall behind the bar, mind wandering. The bartender is oddly beautiful along with the other "employees" walking back and forth between the tables and booths.

Thinking back he remembers a time where he used to case places just like this for his quarries. Now here he was willingly requesting to utilize the services for himself and not just as a ruse to draw his prey in.


Last edit: 08 Nov 2018, 1:25pm
08 Nov 2018, 2:20pm
"Arigatōgozaimashita, Epsilon-san."

With a few deft taps on the podium interface, Suki enters the names of the two men onto the records. Then she turns and indicates the door which leads from the reception area into the bar room.

"If you would like to make yourselves comfortable in the bar. You may order drinks at the counter, or through the interactive menus on the tables. To request a companion, press the red button on the menu. Enjoy your visit to The Olive Grove."


Last edit: 09 Nov 2018, 9:22am
08 Nov 2018, 4:16pm
Stryker nodded as he passed through the threshold.

The bar was busier than it seemed on first glance. He made his way to the bar and pulled out a stool. Settling himself upon it he picked up the interactive slate and ordered a Leesti Evil Juice.

Then turning to Amar, "Sorry about that. The last owner... She didn't like me much. And I don't blame her. It was my fault." he pinched the pointer finger and thumb of his claw together as if lost in some memory. A moment later he snapped out of it and scratched his chin. "This is a nice place."
09 Nov 2018, 3:00am
Amar looked around as he followed Stryker, pausing to hand his faded jacket to one of the attendants before continuing to the bar. Taking a moment to seat himself beside Stryker, he leaned forward and flicked through the menus until he settled on an unusual concoction of alcohols dubbed the Orbital.

Satisfied with his decision, he turned his attention back to Stryker. "Don't worry about it, I'm used to getting a cold shoulder wherever I go. She said Jem used to own the place? Never expected her crew to front a legitimate business." he said absentmindedly.

Crossing his arms he leaned forward before adding, "Much nicer than the normal establishments I find myself in."
09 Nov 2018, 5:59am
Stryker raised a brow, "You knew Jem?" he asked taking the glass of spirits and rotating it upon the smooth bartop surface with his clawed hand, watching the liquid swirl. "And why would people give you the cold shoulder?"
09 Nov 2018, 7:16am
"Just in passing," Amar replied, looking at the attractive young lady who brought him his drink. Cautiously he raised the glass to his lips smelling the mixture. A strong aroma of Lemon and Oranges assaulted his nostrils. Smiling as if in remembrance of a pleasant memory he took a long drink of the glass before returning it to the counter.

Turning back to Stryker he said, "No one could ever collect enough credible information to post a legitimate contract on her, and even if they did, even fewer would be willing to attempt such a foolhardy assignment. I personally found it best to just avoid people like her. You know: tip you hat, nod your head, but continue on your way. Unless they make an offer you can't refuse..." His voice trailed off laced with regret.

He stared into the glass before answering the second question. "Most people, those who don't venture beyond the confines of a single system that is, see my kind as a blight on the galaxy. Believing we no longer give human life any value, there are places I can't even go anymore because I collected on someones head from there. Eventually word gets around, your crew abandons you, bars turn you down, even the bounty brokers view you with contempt."

He lifted the glass to his lips again, taking another drink. A small bead of the orange liquid slipped down his chin, before being wiped away by his hand. "So, why did Jem blacklist you?"

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