Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
14 Jan 2019, 9:25am
"What?" asks Monagh, staring at Kari in bewilderment.

"What did you just call me?"
14 Jan 2019, 12:37pm
"Enough with the games, Doctor," hisses Kari, "if I had my way about this, you'd be in the back of a DBS right now with a bag over your head."

She narrows her eyes at Monagh, her tone laced with menace.

"But I am under orders to do this civilly. Do the right thing for both of us and spare me the disciplinary board."
14 Jan 2019, 1:48pm
"Gudjonnson," says Monagh, eyes wide. "You called me Gudjonnson. How do you know that name? We never tell anyone our real names. An' what's with all the 'gifted scientist' shite? Under orders to do what, exactly?"

Monagh edges away from Kari, regarding her with ever deepening suspicion.

"Is this all some sort of wind up? Did someone put you up to this? I bet it was feckin' Joollee! She's always tryin' to put one over on me, so she is."
14 Jan 2019, 2:13pm
Kari stares hard at Monagh, watching her reaction carefully.

"You're... not Gudjonnson... are you?"
14 Jan 2019, 3:31pm
A pained look crosses Monagh's face. She leans in towards Kari and speaks in a whisper.

"I'm not," she confirms, quickly adding, "an' I'd appreciate it if you didn't bandy the name about like that. There's a reason why we all use fake names, y'know."

She sits back again and drains the remnants of her drink, then eats the cherry.

"Right," she says, "Let's see if I've got this straight; you've come here looking for... a certain person, with the idea of offerin' her some sort of job at this Prism place of yours, but for some reason you got it into your head that I was her, an' it's only now you've realised your mistake. Is that about the size of it?"
14 Jan 2019, 3:46pm
Kari hears Monagh out, then sits in an uncomfortable silence for a long moment.

She flushes a delicate pink and clears her throat.

"I believe I owe you an apology," she says stiffly.
14 Jan 2019, 4:51pm
Monagh shrugs.

"Apology accepted. Though I'm thinkin' you could've saved us both a great deal of time an' trouble if you'd've just said what it was you wanted to begin with, instead of all this cloak an' dagger shenanigans. Sure an' I thought you were well up for a bit of roleplay, so I did, what with your wee contact card an' all. But if you're actually on the level, then I suppose it means you're not here for a bit of slap an' tickle at all. Which in turn means that I'm not goin' to get any money out of our little encounter. Just my feckin' luck!"
15 Jan 2019, 6:07am
Kari looks up sharply.

"Not so. Point me in the right direction and I'll treble your usual fee."
15 Jan 2019, 9:48am
"Ah, well now," says Monagh, "I'm afraid I can't do that, because she's not here at the moment. She's at home, see. She called in sick a few days ago."
15 Jan 2019, 9:54am
Reaching into her jacket, Kari pulls out her data-slate and a credit stick.

"Give me her address and I'll pay you quadruple."
15 Jan 2019, 10:44am
Monagh glances at the credit stick, then shakes her head.

"Sorry," she says. "Temptin' as your offer is, I can't just go givin' information like that to a complete stranger. I'm sure you'll understand why."

She picks up the contact card once more, and turns it over between her fingers.

"I'll tell you what I will do, though; I'll take this to... the person you're lookin' for, an' tell her you're after speakin' with her. Then she can get in touch with you an' arrange to meet up. How does that sound?"
15 Jan 2019, 11:45am
Kari chews her bottom lip for a few moments as she stares intently at Monagh.

Then she taps the credit stick against her data-slate; a chirp acknowledges the payment transfer complete.

"Deal," she nods brusquely, handing the stick to Monagh.
15 Jan 2019, 1:07pm
"Thanks."

Monagh takes the credit stick and pops it inside her top.

"Look, why should she want to contact you anyway? You're still a total stranger, don't forget. For all I know, you might be looking for her to do her harm, an' I couldn't be havin' that on me conscience. Is there anything you can give me to reassure her that she can trust you?"

Monagh chuckles briefly, though there is no humour in the sound.

"I know that might come over to you as a bit of a faff, but you've no idea how things can be for girls like us. We can't be too careful, you know?"
15 Jan 2019, 1:39pm
Kari tucks her slate back into her jacket and folds her arms across her chest.

"You've taken my money already, so knock it off with your overtures of conscience," her tone is flat and even, "The offer I was trying to propose to you is all true - the stipend, the funding, the security. If Gudjonnson is as smart as my dossier says she is, she'll know the right thing to do."
15 Jan 2019, 3:49pm
"Alrighty," says Monagh. "I'll pass on your message after I finish my shift."

She stands, pats her hair, adjusts her skirt, and then saunters off towards the bar counter.

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