Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
15 Jan 2019, 4:03pm
Kari scowls as she watches Monagh walk away.

She unties her hair, running her fingers through the lank blonde tresses with a sigh.

"For fuck's sake," she mutters to herself, lighting up a cigarette, "get a grip, Kerenski."

She stands and makes for the exit.
16 Jan 2019, 10:58am
The next day, Kari sits alone in the lobby of a hotel where she has rented a room, browsing the GalNet on her data-slate.

A frown knots her brow as she reads the latest developments on the insurgent Nova Imperium.

"Misogynist pricks," she mutters to herself in conclusion of the article.


A few moments later, her slate chimes an incoming message. Kari swipes the screen and reads:


Gudjonnson here.
Let's talk.


Leaning forward, her fingers tap out her reply:

Blue Comet Hotel
30 mins


After sliding her slate on to the table, she lights a cigarette and turns to gaze out of a nearby viewport.
16 Jan 2019, 11:34am
Lova enters the Blue Comet hotel, cautiously checking her surroundings as she moves through the lobby.

She is wearing a dark blue three quarter length coat and a pair of black low heeled boots. Her eyes are concealed by a slightly oversized pair of dark glasses, and a plain white headscarf covers her hair. A shoulder bag dangles by her right side.

She makes her way to the hotel's cafe bar and takes a seat at a table. The cafe is fairly busy, animated chatter drifting across the room. After a few moments, during which she studies the people around her, Lova reaches into her bag and takes out her dataslate. Activating it, she taps out a message to Kari Kerenski:

I'm in the cafe. Come alone.
16 Jan 2019, 11:56am
The data-slate chimes.

Kari reads the message and calmly puts her cigarette out in the ashtray that has mounted up over the past 30 minutes.


Entering the cafe area, she finds an empty table and takes a seat. Another message is quickly tapped out on her slate:

Here. Table left of the viewport.

Her finger poised above Send, Kari considers her recent debacle of mistaken identity, and quickly adds:

Blonde hair. Dark green jacket. I'm smoking.

With that, she gives a final tap and lights up.
16 Jan 2019, 1:00pm
A beep.

With a casual, almost languid motion, Lova picks up her dataslate and reads the new message. Her eyes flick up towards the solitary blonde woman seated to the left of the viewport. Hesitantly, Lova stands and walks over to her.
16 Jan 2019, 1:44pm
Kari looks up.

"Gudjonnson?"
16 Jan 2019, 2:49pm
"Ja," answers Lova with a curt nod. "And you are Kari Kerenski, who sometimes likes to be called Lisa Ryzhaya. It is usually best to speak plainly, I think. It saves a lot of avoidable confusion."

Lova takes the seat opposite Kari.

"So," she continues, "in the interests of plain speaking, who sent you?"


Last edit: 17 Jan 2019, 7:56am
17 Jan 2019, 8:39am
Kari studies the woman carefully as she takes a seat.

"I couldn't agree more," she replies, "I believe you're familiar with Isaiah Evanson?"
17 Jan 2019, 12:48pm
A faint smile plays on Lova's lips.

"I met him once. We had a very interesting conversation."

She leans back in her seat, evidently more at ease.

"It was an interesting conversation you had with my colleague, too, by all accounts. Monagh was very happy with the generosity of your payment for her time, though she was somewhat offended by your description of The Olive Grove. A 'sordid den', you called it. A little uncharitable, I think. The Olive Grove and places like it mean a great deal to girls such as us."
17 Jan 2019, 1:00pm
Kari exhales smoke.

"As I'm sure it does to your clientele. Those lonely spacers are really shaping history and driving progress forward."

Her flat, toneless drawl does nothing to mask her sarcasm.

"So what about it made you choose to work in a bed instead of a lab? Don't you feel a little overqualified here?"
17 Jan 2019, 1:20pm
"I take it Isaiah didn't tell you all the details of our conversation. That was very discreet of him."

Lova shrugs.

"I chose to work in a bed out of pure curiosity. And because I needed the money, of course. As for qualifications... I have none. They were revoked by the Empire. I have no licence to work in a lab in any official capacity whatsoever."

A short, bitter laugh comes from Lova's mouth.

"There are girls at The Olive Grove who have turned to prostitution so that they can fund their way through university. They have dreams of becoming doctors, engineers, even politicians. I, on the other hand, have taken the opposite path. I am a university educated quantum physicist who lost it all and became a prostitute. Ironic, no?"
17 Jan 2019, 1:27pm
Kari's face and tone become sincere.

"What happened?"
17 Jan 2019, 2:21pm
"I can sum it up in just two words. The same two words which so mystified Monagh when you dropped them into your conversation with her. Two words which have occupied my every waking thought for the last several years."

Lova sighs.

"Two words: Matter compression. A very simplistic term for a process which would have revolutionised cargo transport. A process in which the Imperial Navy took an interest, recognising its military applications rather than its intended commercial ones. Additional funding for our research was suddenly authorised at the highest level. Denton Patreus himself visited our laboratories to see how his credits were being spent."
17 Jan 2019, 2:26pm
Kari glances around and leans forward.

"I know your field," she says softly, "but how did you come to leave the project?"
17 Jan 2019, 3:28pm
"I didn't leave the project," Lova replies. "The project ended. You see, I discovered a flaw in one of our calculations, tiny but insurmountable. It meant that matter compression on any meaningful scale was not possible. We had failed. The powers-that-be were understandably unimpressed; retribution for our failure was swift and effective. Our laboratories were closed down, our notes confiscated, and our licences revoked. We were all suddenly out of work."

Lova makes a clicking noise with her tongue.

"I am not allowed to be a scientist any longer, Miss Kerenski."

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