Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
17 Jan 2019, 3:40pm
Kari purses her lips and nods as she listens.

"The Empire doesn't allow many things that still happen in its jurisdiction. That is not an obstacle for us."

Her eyes narrow as she takes a draw from her cigarette.

"But if your research came to a dead-end, there's not much we can do about that."

She chews her lip and flicks ash.

"And you are certain you hit a dead end? No interference, or possible sabotage? Were there competitors or other interested parties?"
18 Jan 2019, 8:24am
"Our work was shrouded in complete secrecy. Sabotage? Unlikely, unless it was by someone within the project. I suppose that's vaguely possible, but..."

Lova drifts into thoughtfulness for several seconds, then shakes her head.

"Well, it is a moot point. And who knows, perhaps the Guardians developed Quantum Pocket technology long ago, and it now lies waiting to be rediscovered in some abandoned base. That would be quite a find for some lucky commander, no?"
18 Jan 2019, 8:36am
"Aliens and luck?" Kari waves her hand dismissively and takes another draw.

"Let's back up a little and stick to tangible possibilities - you mentioned someone within the project could have sabotaged it - do you recall the names of those on your team? Your stakeholders? Contractors?"
18 Jan 2019, 11:06am
"I know the names of all my colleagues," Lova answers, "but that's about it. We didn't socialise much, I'm afraid. Too busy with our work. There were four other physicists besides myself, plus an admin team of three and one technician. But I cannot believe that any of them would have sabotaged the project. We were all carefully vetted and background checked before setting foot in the laboratory."

Lova takes a breath. She shuffles in her chair and rubs gingerly at her left side.

"Our sole stakeholder was the Imperial Navy; I think you can rule out Denton Patreus as a suspect! As for contractors, that side of things was all handled exclusively by Wollemwirten."
18 Jan 2019, 11:37am
Kari listens intently, her eyes narrowing and jaw clenching at the mention of Denton Patreus.

"Never rule out Patreus as a suspect in anything," she hisses vehemently, "especially where the Navy is concerned."

She pauses, her gaze fixed on the rising blue-grey smoke from her cigarette as she thinks.

"Linnea," she says softly, her eyes meeting the scientist's, "I need those names. I promise that you will not be implicated, nor will any harm come to your former colleagues. I just need to ask questions."
18 Jan 2019, 12:48pm
Lova - that is, Linnea - nods slowly.

"Wollemwirten came out of it far worse than the rest of us. We were all paid employees, but Konrad Wollemwirten was the project founder. It was his theory we were attempting to realise. He sank all his money into the research, and when it all went pear-shaped he was left with huge debts. He was forced to sell himself into slavery, and the humiliation of it left him a broken man. Broken and... a little unhinged."

Linnea removes her dark glasses, revealing a pair of blackened, bloodshot eyes.
18 Jan 2019, 1:02pm
Kari grimaces.

"By the Void," she breathes, compassion breaking her steely gaze, "how did that happen?"
18 Jan 2019, 4:09pm
"Wollemwirten was never the type to accept responsibility for error. It always had to be someone else's fault, never his. He needed a scapegoat to blame for the failure of his life work and, since I was the one who identified the fatal flaw in one of our calculations, Wollemwirten's wrath fell upon me."

Linnea begins to tremble.

"He and his master visited The Olive Grove a few days ago. Wollemwirten obviously recognised me, but said nothing. Later he called at my apartment, alone; I guess he must have followed me home. Anyway, when I opened the door he punched me in the face and knocked me out cold."

Replacing her dark glasses, Linnea bows her head.

"And so now I am on sick leave. No one wants to screw a prostitute who has two black eyes, do they."
18 Jan 2019, 5:38pm
Kari glowers as Linnea tells her story.

"Do you know the name of his Master?" she asks, her tone still soft, "or what ship they might have come in on?"
18 Jan 2019, 6:28pm
"Sorry," Linnea responds, "I don't know his name. But it will be in the records at The Olive Grove. Why do you ask?"
18 Jan 2019, 6:44pm
"As I said," says Kari calmly, "I have questions."

She lights another cigarette from the end of her last.

"The girl on reception - she'll have the records?"
18 Jan 2019, 8:53pm
"All visitor records can be accessed on the reception podium," says Linnea. "But there is no need to involve anyone else. I can do it myself. Give me a couple of days. I'll get you the name."

Linnea places her clasped hands on the table and leans forward.

"When I came to Citi Gateway, I wanted to find a new direction in my life. The Olive Grove gave me that. It provided me with a new persona, and with it a kind of stability. No one there, not even the owners, knows that I am a scientist. I was content. But this..."

She raises her hand to her eyes.

"This has unsettled my equilibrium. I feel ill at ease, vulnerable. Now all I want is to get as far away from Inara as possible."
19 Jan 2019, 7:18am
Kari nods in understanding.

"Isaiah sent me here to persuade you to work for our organisation, in Prism. Monagh told you the offer? It still stands. You would be safe, secure, and leading our research division on projects of your choosing. No Navy, no Patreus," her voice drops to a baleful whisper, "and no more Wollemwirten."
19 Jan 2019, 10:52am
"Thank you."

Linnea stands.

"I will miss The Olive Grove," she says quietly. "I have made some good friends there. I will be sad to leave."

A single tear appears on her cheek from under the dark glasses. She brushes it away self consciously.

"But science is my life. It will be good to embrace it once more. And... it will be good to see Isaiah again. So... I will be in touch with you in two days. Until then, Commander Kerenski."

Linnea cautiously leaves the cafe.
20 Jan 2019, 8:00am
"In two days, Doctor Gudjonnson," Kari gives Linnea a stern nod, "and thank you."

She watches her leave, scanning the cafe for another minute to make sure she isn't followed.

After finishing her cigarette, Kari takes out her data-slate and taps out a message:

Yola,

I need your help, camarada -
Citi Gateway, Inara system
2 days from now

Prep holding cell at Lasswitz
DO NOT share with LL Command

KK

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