Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
20 Jan 2019, 10:01am
Understood.
21 Jan 2019, 10:11am
Kari waits in the lobby of the Blue Comet Hotel for Yola, sipping a strong coffee with her obligatory cigarette between her fingers.
21 Jan 2019, 10:28am
Yolanta, still dressed in her purple flight suit and green sleeveless jacket, makes her way from the docks to the starport's Entertainment District. She strides purposefully through the malls, pausing briefly twice to get her bearings on her dataslate. She soon arrives at the Blue Comet Hotel, and enters the lobby.

She spots her comrade at once, and approaches her at an unhurried pace.

"Hola," she says as she takes a seat.
22 Jan 2019, 8:24am
Kari gives Yola a nod in acknowledgement and slides her data-slate across the table, a dossier file open on the screen.

"This is Doctor Linnea Gudjonnson, former researcher with the Imperial Navy. Evanson sent me to requisition her, but there's been an interesting development,"

She takes a sip of coffee.

"Gudjonnson found a critical flaw in the matter compression project she was working on. The project lead didn't take critical thinking too kindly and he's been giving her grief since. Seems her turned up at her apartment a few days ago and..."

Kari grimaces and taps on Linnea's image.

"Well, she's not looking as good as she does there, now."
22 Jan 2019, 12:04pm
Yolanta studies the image for a few seconds.

"An attractive woman. And Evanson wishes her to join the Legion, you say? Well, I am sure she will be a valuable asset."

The faintest hint of a smirk crosses Yolanta's face, to be replaced by a frown.

"But what of the cabrón who struck her?"
23 Jan 2019, 6:56am
"He's in indentured service, but I intend to persuade his master to transfer his ownership. He will be our guest at Lasswitz for a short while. Gudjonnson will be providing us with the master's name within the next few hours, and from that we can check the docking manifests and get a ship ID."

Kari leans forward, her eyes stern.

"It would be best to keep Evanson or any of the others out of the loop on this one, camarada; this is Night Witch business."
23 Jan 2019, 10:45am
"I understand," replies Yolanta. She orders a coffee.

"My padre kept twenty slaves. Most of them worked on his vineyard next to our villa. I knew them all by name, which is more than my dear padre could ever claim. Whenever he was away on business, I would go down to the plantation and chat with them. My padre would have been furious with me if he knew. My sisters and I were under strict instructions not to fraternise with the slaves, you see. Padre said it would undermine his authority over them. As ever, my sisters dutifully obeyed his command, but it merely made me all the more determined to rebel."

The coffee arrives.

"Are you thinking of taking on this man as your own slave, mi amiga?"


Last edit: 23 Jan 2019, 12:26pm
23 Jan 2019, 10:03pm
Kari shakes her head.

"No. He is quick to blame others and lacks control of his violence. He would make a poor employee. No, I intend on questioning him."

She pauses for a quick draw of her cigarette.

"He was the executive on the project and as such would've been in direct contact with the Navy sponsors. It would do us good to know key names, budgets, command structures, risks... you know how it goes."
23 Jan 2019, 10:42pm
"Si."

Yolanta sips her coffee.

"And after you have questioned him, what do you intend to do with him then?"
24 Jan 2019, 12:55pm
"I will transfer his ownership to Gudjonnson and leave his fate to her," says Kari flatly. "That seems like the right thing to do."

She nods to herself silently and checks the time on her data-slate.
24 Jan 2019, 2:36pm
Lova Gudskold steps out of The Olive Grove by the main door. She is wearing a dark blue trouser suit and a pair of dark glasses. A shoulder bag hangs at her right side, and in her left hand she carries a large (and evidently fairly heavy) green holdall.

She takes a few paces, then pauses and turns to look back at the neon sign above the door of the pleasure house, her eyes glistening. Then, with a sigh, she sets her shoulders with an air of determination, and walks briskly along the mall.

After going a short distance she stops, takes out her dataslate, and taps in a message:

Commander Kerenski,

I have obtained the information you requested without complication. I have said my goodbyes at The Olive Grove, and I am ready to leave Citi Gateway.

Where should I meet you?

Linnea Gudjonnson


She hits the send button...


Last edit: 24 Jan 2019, 2:47pm
25 Jan 2019, 1:20pm
Kari's slate chimes.

She reads the message and taps out her terse reply:

Do you have a lead on Wollemwirten?
25 Jan 2019, 4:06pm
Yolanta takes another sip of coffee as she watches the comings and goings of people in the hotel lobby.

Last edit: 25 Jan 2019, 4:12pm
25 Jan 2019, 4:09pm
Linnea raises an eyebrow at the question on her dataslate, then taps in a reply:

Nej, I do not. But I presume he will be with his master.
26 Jan 2019, 7:49am
Kari breathes a sigh of frustration and begins jabbing a reply out.

Her fingers pause as her attention is caught by the screens in the lobby, broadcasting an interrupt bulletin on events on Capitol.

As the report plays out, Kari's face turns pale, her eyes widening in shock and disbelief.

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