Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
01 May 2021, 7:24pm
Meanwhile, in "Uncle Stinky's Diner", a scumbag infested, unlicensed bar in The Warrens...

JB swigged on his beer, watching the news on the grate-covered screen above the bar. There was a gentle murmur of hushed conversations throughout the half-filled, poorly lit room. Several members of his organisation sat at another table aswell as there being the usual mix of visitors and denizens of The Warrens.

Sat with JB was his android copilot, Panza. The tall android had a synthetic mask, aviator glasses and a trucker cap pulled down to hide his android face. Panza sat there silently staring at the door.

JB was getting ready to call it a day when a message flashed up on his Comms Unit.

[Gaffer, we've got a collection job for you from some Insurance Company.

They need you to pick up their client from a possibly hostile situation.

The last known location of the client has been sent to your ship's Nav System.

This is a Tier 5 level payed job if you need to hire a team.

The client's name is Creamy Goodness III

Lucky Numbers, Gaffer.
]

JB closed the message and sighed. He downed the rest of his bottle and got up out of his chair.

"Cookie, Dutch..." JB called to two of his organisation's pilots at the next table, "You're with me and Panza. We've got a job on."


Last edit: 01 May 2021, 7:48pm
01 May 2021, 10:01pm
Two hours after her encounter with the Comedian, Old Sol and Chuckles in the Docks, Veronica Vayle sits alone in the cafe at the corner of Central Mall and Eighth Avenue.

She now wears a standard grey flight suit and a black flight jacket, both of which are trimmed with blue. Her hair is also different, no longer the platinum bob it was earlier. On the table in front of her is a cup of cappuccino (with chocolate powder sprinkled on top), half a blueberry muffin and a dataslate.

Veronica takes a sip of her coffee as she looks around the room at the assorted patrons.
02 May 2021, 1:24am
Michael Ridge walks up to the cafe. It's near the docks, a place for pilots and crew. The decor is a decent imitation of something planetside; its prices are as outrageous as anything else that caters to spacers. It's busy but not crowded; in the corner is a woman with familiar features but entirely different clothes and hair. A wry smirk lifts Michael's lips as pauses, his back deliberately turned to her as he orders a coffee. Once he has it, he turns back, advancing toward the woman, sitting across from her at the tiny table. He raises his cup in mock salute.

"So... is this the part where you ask if I notice anything different?"


Last edit: 02 May 2021, 1:32am
02 May 2021, 8:35am
Veronica looks across the table at the Comedian and arches one eyebrow.

"Nah, not really," she says. "An' neither is it the part where I look all 'orrified an' say, 'Oh my! However did you manage to recognise me so quickly?' It wasn't much of a challenge for you, mate. Look around. There's what, about twenty people in 'ere, not countin' the staff. More than 'alf of 'em are males, and none of the females look anythin' like me by any stretch of the imagination. Especially not the little girl in the stroller. Besides which, I'm the only woman sittin' on 'er own, an' I did tell yer I'd be 'ere, didn't I. Still, seven out of ten for observation, mate. Now, why don't you stop bein' a ruddy smartarse, wipe that smirk off yer face, an' tell me more about this master plan of yours."

She takes a deliberately loud slurp of coffee, then bites into her muffin.
02 May 2021, 10:46am
Ridge leans back, sipping his coffee.

"Not much more to say other than what's been said. We fly out to one of the known Guardian ruins, pick up what relics we can, and fly back. I have a contact here who wants them. You get thirty percent. We're looking at a two day trip, maybe three if it's a good enough haul."

He nods at her flightsuit and new hairstyle.

"Unless, of course, all your problems have been solved these past two hours..."
02 May 2021, 11:39am
"You mean that pretty trinket Chuckles pushed into my 'and in the docks?" says Veronica with a smirk. "Let's just say it turned out to be worth more than enough to pay the admin fee and buy this coffee and muffin. Which is delicious, by the way."

She takes another bite from her muffin, then sits back in her seat and studies the face of the Comedian.

"Thing is," she continues after swallowing the morsel, "problems never really go away, do they? No sooner do yer solve one problem than a new comes along in its place. An' my new problem is the terms of this little venture you're proposin'. A seventy thirty split of the proceeds, in your favour?"

Veronica shakes her head.

"I dunno, mate. Seems a bit inequitable to me. Dunnit it seem inequitable to you? I mean, if you were in my shoes, would you take a thirty precent cut for doin' fifty perecent of the work? Fifty fifty sounds far more equitable from where I'm sittin'. An' I'm sure you ain't the kind of bloke who'd try to take advantage of me just 'cos I'm a woman. That would be very disappointin'. So what do you say? Call it fifty fifty?"

She holds out her right hand to shake.
02 May 2021, 12:32pm
Ridge returns her gaze, deadpan.

"My ship. My air. My SRV. My wear-and-tear. My risk if things go south."

He leans forward, his eyes still locked with hers.

"Standard crew rates are lower than thirty even if they're Elite. It's a helluva deal- and you know it."
02 May 2021, 1:49pm
At The Olive Grove...

"You know what?", she asks while focusing back on Dalila-May. "Try to squeeze me into her schedule, next time you're on shift. Oh, and, do you have one for yourself?"

She then punctuates her question with a smirk, and a deep jug on her drink.
02 May 2021, 4:05pm
Veronica withdraws her hand, then leans forward to return the Comedian's stare.

"Yeah, true... if I was standard crew, that is. But the way I see it, you an' me would be workin' as partners in this shindig. Still, if you're that worried about getting a scratch on yer ship's paintwork or blowin' out a tyre on yer SRV, I'll compromise. Sixty forty, final offer."
02 May 2021, 4:09pm
Michael's gaze intensifies. He takes a long sip of coffee, his eyes never leaving here.

"An even third," he says. "And that's because I'm doing you a favor."
02 May 2021, 4:45pm
"I do indeed!"

Dalila-May gives Nathalie a broad grin, then rapidly taps a code into the tabletop's holo interface. A pair of booking schedules appear, showing a list of vacant sessions for the next three months.

"This here is Jade's schedule, an' this mine. You pick when you want, an' I book you in."
02 May 2021, 5:06pm
"You're doin' me a favour?" Veronica gives a short laugh. "You're gettin' things the wrong way round again, mate," says Veronica. "It's me who'd be doin' you a favour. 'Two SRVs gets the job done twice as fast', you said. An' who's drivin' the second SRV? Me!"

Veronica leans back.

"Sixty forty's pretty generous, under the circumstances."


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02 May 2021, 6:05pm
Michael cocked his head to the side.

"Miss," he said. "If you can find a captain who's parting with forty percent of his haul because you asked nicely, I suggest you crew with them. I can stroll down to the crew lounge right now and hire someone at fifteen who'd do just as good a job. I know it. You know it."

He glances downward.

"That damn muffin knows it. So what do you bring to the table that they don't?"


Last edit: 02 May 2021, 7:42pm
02 May 2021, 8:34pm
"A winnin' smile?"

Veronica's face contorts into a tight-lipped grin that is completely devoid of humour.

"That's the second time you've accused me of 'asking nicely'," she continues. "I recognise your game, mate. Talkin' down at people, tryin' to make 'em feel inferior to get the upper 'and, always needin' to 'ave the final word and prove yer superiority. I know all those tricks, an' you ain't foolin' me for one second, 'cos I reckon the truth is you need me more'n I need you. If that weren't the case, you'd've already found yer fifteen percent 'elp an' be out of 'ere long before now. The question I'm askin' myself is, why?"

Veronica crosses her forearms on the edge of the table and leans toward the Comedian.

"You've piqued my curiosity, mate. You're a challenge, an' I like a challenge. So okay, one third it is. But if we're gunna work together, do not attempt to patronise me again. Clear?"
02 May 2021, 10:46pm
Ridge's features harden. He holds up a warning finger.

"The only thing that needs to be clear is that on a ship, captain's word is law. Do your job and you'll see a hefty payday. Forget who's working for who and I'll space you out the airlock myself. I didn't come up from backwater nothing to owning my own ship just to be screeched at by some shrew."

The man rises, straightening his leather jacket. Their conversation has attracted the gazes of a few around them, their eyes wide. Michael ignores them, producing a passkey. He places it on the table, sliding it toward the defiant blonde.

"Hangar seven. Dustoff is in one hour."

He turns to leave, pausing to look over his shoulder.

"The name's Ridge, by the way. Michael Ridge."


Last edit: 03 May 2021, 12:14am

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