Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
08 Jun 2021, 7:22pm
Michael halts, turning to the woman, his mouth opening to deliver yet another rebuke. His mouth hangs open, his eyes shifting into something softer.

"Yeah, well..." He closes his mouth, glancing to the side before swiftly returning to meet her imploring gaze. His words finally emerge as an embittered mutter.

"Lot of that going around."
08 Jun 2021, 9:25pm
"I don't think you're 'earing what I'm saying, mate," says Veronica. "So I'll spell it out for yer, shall I?"

Holding her clutch bag down by her side, Veronica places her other hand on her hip and stands with her feet apart.

"The bloke with the blue monkey said he saw me agree to go with you on a trip to pick up some alien knick-knacks. I 'ave absolutely no recollection of you an' me 'avin' any such conversation, but Atlas - that's the name of the bloke with the blue monkey, by the way - assured me that we did, an' I didn't get the impression he was lyin'. Now, I'm sure you're beginnin' to see where I'm goin' with this, so why don't you an' me go an' sit down someplace, an' then you can tell me exactly what 'appened on this so-called trip of yours. Or do I 'ave to call in the cops?"

Veronica glares expectantly at Cafe Man.


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08 Jun 2021, 9:37pm
Michael blinks, shaking his head.

"You and me... we... worked together? To fetch alien trinkets?"

He rubs his eyes, looking downward.

"Just when my headache was about gone, too..."

He looks back up to the mysterious woman, suspicion in his features.

"Alright. Fine. Where do you have in mind?"
09 Jun 2021, 8:36am
"Now we're gettin' somewhere," says Veronica with an approving nod. "I dunno why yer actin' all surprised about it, though. It was your idea to go on a trinket 'unt, remember. An' I still ain't convinced it ain't a euphemism, neither!"

They are standing within Citi Gateway's commercial district. The shopping mall is busy without being crowded, people coming and going between the various clothing and consumer goods stores. A busker can be faintly heard competing with the mall's own piped mood music. Veronica ushers Cafe Man over to a nearby bench outside a popular fashion store.

"Let's keep our business out in the open, eh?"

She takes out her dataslate and gives it a couple of deft taps, then lays it beside her bag on the bench between her and Cafe Man.

"Just so's you know, I'm gunna record this conversation. In view of the circumstances, I think it's a reasonable precaution. Now then, why don't you start by tellin' me yer name, eh? Yer real name, mind."
09 Jun 2021, 11:56am
This ‘garden zone’ thing was quite nice, it was a good place to relax and think; it was also right in the middle of the entertainment district. If Creamy was going to be anywhere, it would be here. The man hadn’t stopped talking about some show he was putting together, and this was the place for shows as far as Citi was concerned.

Vodan took another deep pull on his beer and looked at the list he’d made on his slate. He’d been back stage for the first time in his life and saw the organised chaos that shadowed the ordered routine people got to see out front and couldn’t imagine Goodness being able to wrap his dull senses around all that. The name Goodness however, was well known almost everywhere Vodan had asked about the man. It seemed a lot of people wanted to know if there was still a chance of their acts joining his show.

Another draft of cool carbonated calm helped Vodan piece together the information he had gathered. The thing Creamy was creating was for a Passenger Carrier that was taking a pleasure cruise to Colonia, and knowing what he knew about Creamy, that would be for the company he freelanced for back in Robigo. A quick check of the company’s site told Vodan that the carrier had left for its maiden voyage and the host of the show was not Jonny Bright or Creamy Goodness.

The glass bottle in hand Vodan raised it up to smash on the ground in front of him, but a passing security drone remained Vodan not to draw attention to himself. Being issued a ticket for littering could lead to more questions a wanted man could do with avoiding. Having his former comrades after him was bad enough without adding security to his tail. Instead, Vodan leaned back on his bench and looked around for inspiration.

A woman had taken a seat a few benches down from him. She looked a bit severe, but she seemed to be chilling out enjoying the green of the garden area.

“Hound-dog!” said Vodan snapping his fingers.

If Creamy wasn’t off running a show on the way to Colonia, then he would be looking for company somewhere. The man just couldn’t help himself, he was as eager as a teenager when he saw someone he liked. Tracking the Keelback down to Citi was not a surprise, but Vodan didn’t want to pull that thread on his own. The people that had come to extract Creamy from the outpost had left a lot of bodies behind them and without back up, Vodan didn’t fancy his chances of talking with either of the fake Corsairs.

No, If Creamy was still on Citi, Vodan would have to find him without using his usual channels. Still absent minded eyeing the woman by the tree, Vodan thought to him self ..

Find the legs, find the lordling tryin to hump them.
09 Jun 2021, 1:58pm
Nathalie gets pulled out of her daydreaming session as the man a few benches away talked to himself, and snapped his fingers. She then stretches her back while remaining seated before opening her mouth towards the man.

"Hound dog? What kind of game you're hunting?", she simply asks. "I hope it's nothing inside this station."
09 Jun 2021, 2:17pm
It took a few seconds for Vodan to register he was being talked to. By now he was looking in the woman’s direction, and not really at her.

Only a few of her words actually registered with him, she'd asked about something in the station. He took a moment to get a proper look at the person he'd not meant to engage with. She appeared to be at least ten years his junior with tidy hair making him think military background; but Vodan was still thinking about what he should do next with his new fugitive life. He was completely unprepared for a conversation with a stranger.

"Wot?" is all he managed to say in what he hoped was a casual tone aware that he must have looked like he was staring at her.
09 Jun 2021, 3:21pm
Michael narrows his eyes.

"The name's Michael. Michael Ridge. Captain of the Misadventure. And we're not recording anything until I know you a hell of a lot better."

He folds his arms.

"So let's start with your name."

Ridge leans forward, an almost roguish mockery in his eyes.

"Your real name."


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09 Jun 2021, 3:56pm
Nathalie smirks, as it appears to her that the man was daydreaming at a higher level than hers.

"I was asking what's about that hound dog? You're hunting?", she asks once more, now that she has his attention.
09 Jun 2021, 4:55pm
Veronica presses her lips together and sighs in frustration.

"Fine," she says, and jabs a finger at the dataslate to send it back into sleep mode.

"Veronica Vayle. Commander of the Smelly Egg."
09 Jun 2021, 4:56pm
Michael cocks his head to the side.

"Nice name. For your ship, I mean."
09 Jun 2021, 5:02pm
Nathalie HudsonNathalie smirks, as it appears to her that the man was daydreaming at a higher level than hers.

"I was asking what's about that hound dog? You're hunting?", she asks once more, now that she has his attention.


“Crap, am I that obvious?” replied Vodan looking at the woman.

It dawned on him she was talking with a stranger witch could mean only two things. She was as empty-headed and friendly as Creamy, or she was a hunter about to take Vodan down for a bounty Vengerfield had no doubt put on his head by now.

“Well, he ain’t round here coz he would have appeared like a cartoon wolf by now doin that boi-oi-oi-ng stop after kickin up a dust cloud running at you”

Returning the smirk-like smile on the woman’s face, Vodan tried some small talk while he worked out his chances of making a run for it if this woman was a hunter.

“Don’t spose a holo-star hansom tall blond Imperial lord with incredible dress sense, an empty head, and a fuckin stupid name has tried to chat you up in the past few days by any chance?”
09 Jun 2021, 6:59pm
"I mean... Imperial blondies are really common, 'round here. It could be anyone.", she simply says.

She looks at her behaviour, one that she saw countless times. She then smiles broadly, before inviting the man to come closer.

"Tell me, you're the hunter, or the hunted, here?"
09 Jun 2021, 7:47pm
"Wot a weird-ass question. I'm not huntin the guy, I'm lookin for a friend"

Said Vodan raising the five remaining beers in his six-pack and the small bags containing the food he's got from a nearby vending machine to show it would be a hassle for him to go over there.

"Now you gonna keep shouting at me, or come over here and help me illegally consume this alcohol in a public space?" he said twisting the chemical cooler on the bottom of a fresh bottle then watching the condensation from on the beer, pretending not to care if the woman came over or not.
09 Jun 2021, 8:46pm
"Named after the family duck, innit."

Veronica shoves her dataslate back into her clutch bag, which she then places on her lap. She begins to fiddle absently with the gold wedding band she is wearing.

"So, Michael Michael Ridge, captain of the Misadventure, why don't you start at the beginnin', eh? Tell me what 'appened when we first met, an' then carry on from there. Don't miss anythin' out."

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