Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
10 Jun 2021, 8:54pm
Veronica watches Ridge for a few seconds, then puts her dataslate back into her clutch bag and stands up.

"Fair enough." She walks over to Ridge. "I'll go an' try my luck at the starport admin office. You never know, eh? Maybe I'll get someone who's in a good mood. Where are you stayin'?"
10 Jun 2021, 8:57pm
Michael turns to her.

"GL put me up in the Starlight Estates here on Citi. Level seven, unit nineteen. Not the best, not the worst. It's home until my ship is returned."


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10 Jun 2021, 9:17pm
"Okay," says Veronica. "You get yerself there now, an' I'll be over as quick as I can. We'll get to the bottom of this, one way or another."

Veronica gives Ridge a nod and an encouraging smile, then turns and walks off towards the Citi Gateway starport administration centre.
10 Jun 2021, 9:43pm
Ridge nods, watching the woman stride away. He looks down, an irritated frown spreading across his features.

Guess a change of clothes will have to wait.
11 Jun 2021, 6:33am
VodanMoving his beer and food over, Vodan shuffled up, to make space for the woman and inspected the packs he got from the vending machine. He’d pressed the button for anything that looked good so he didn’t know what was in the bags.

“Bagels” he said “Argh, cream cheese and chive. You can have that one; I’m all about the spicy meatball”

Putting the beer and unwanted Bagel beside him next to the vacant seat, Vodan pulled the tag on his Meatball Melt and chatted while it heated.

“You know how it is. Ya go out, meet people and have a riot; same again next weekend. Ya swear ya gonna remember to get contacts, but never get round to it and it doesn’t matter till they don’t show up ya know?”

Turning his Bagel over so the gravy didn’t soak the bottom half, Vodan looked at the woman now she was much closer.

“So what’s your deal? Most people on this station are twitchy as fuck; ready to react to the slightest threat instantly. It’s a wonder they got any hair left on their heads. Your ‘hey what's up guy’ thing is well out of place. Ya new, undercover and bad at it, or just don’t give a shit?”

He nudged the beer with the bagel on top with his elbow to let the woman know it was cool to help herself.


"Oooooh, answer B, for sure.", Nathalie answers, before chuckling. "See, people know my name 'round here, for different reasons actually. Some people may say that I'm a great customer around this district, some may say that I claimed way too many bounties for one person."

Nathalie then proceeds to take a cold beer out of Vodan's bag, before cracking it open.

"But don't run just yet. I'm a big game type of hunter.", she says cockily, with a wink addressed to the man.
11 Jun 2021, 7:27am
“Good, not in the mood for a fight right now”

The big game comment landed after Vodan had a moment to think about what the woman had just said. It was enough of a sting to make him stop taking the next bite and address the issue.

“Up to a few days ago, I was big fuckin game” he said with mild offence in his voice “I had my own carrier with a big ass fleet and an army of men and woman under my command. The cock sucker in charge of us aint the kinda guy to let a Commodore retire peacefully”

Vodan used the forbidden rank of Commodore that Vengerfield had dropped after his second-in-command and lover had betrayed him. It was a pointless and petty shot, but it made Vodan feel better.

“Now I’m just a shmuck with a fuckin fleet support Asp Ex. May as well be a god damn Fuel Rat. But hey, I gotta be worth something big-game-like right? Look me up”

He eyed the woman up and down as he thoughtfully chewed another bite of bagel.

“While ya at it, look ya self up on the raider networks yeah? I reckon I could take you as long as you give me time to limber up and don’t pull any karate shit on me while I’m eatin my bagel” said Vodan with a half-smile as he thumbed a few crumbs off his lips into his mouth.
11 Jun 2021, 5:55pm
One hour later

Veronica is standing in Michael Ridge's rental apartment, having just arrived a few minutes before. She begins to tell Ridge about her visit to the Citi Gateway Administration Centre...


"No luck with gettin' to see any security footage," she says, removing her hat and laying it on top of a utility unit, "but I did manage to glean two useful snippets of information."

Veronica sits on the sofa and takes off her shoes.

"First off, they'd apparently impounded my ship the day before yesterday, while I was... conductin' my business. It seems I'd called 'em from down in the docks an' got a bit shirty, then went up to see 'em in person to get it sorted out."

She starts rubbing the sole of her right foot.

"Turned out it was an administrative error," she continues. "They'd only been an' gone an' impounded the wrong ruddy ship, 'adn't they! So naturally they'd offered me a profuse apology, an' gave me a gift voucher to spend anywhere on the station."

Veronica sits back on the sofa and crosses her legs.

"Now, I don't remember nothin' about any of this, but, from what the bloke told me, it must 'ave 'appened shortly after I was at the InGaBa, an' I know precisely what time I was there. I reckon I must've left the InGaBa, gone to the docks, found myself locked out of my 'angar, and called the Admin Centre to find out why. So, at the very least, we can now pin down the time my memory loss began. An' I'm willin' to bet that that's when I first bumped into you an' Atlas."
11 Jun 2021, 9:44pm
Michael nods.

"Good to see that you're establishing some kind of consistency. But an admin error doesn't explain why you got an deposit for five mil with a note in Iberian. And it doesn't explain why we're both so hazy about the last few days."

He turns to one side, leaning against a bulkhead with one arm, staring out into the holo-window's brilliant view.

"Tell me, Vayle: you Pilots Fed?"
12 Jun 2021, 8:05am
Veronica blinks in mild surprise at the unexpected question.

"Yeah. Yeah, I am. Why d'you ask?"
12 Jun 2021, 1:22pm
Nathalie chuckles at Vodan's comment, before chugging a good sip or two of beer.

"Well, that's the problem, man, you "were" a big fish.", she replies with a smirk, playing the sting game with enjoyment. "And I know I have my name somewhere in your buddies' kill list. By buddies I mean... Pirates, in general. But hey, I'm not here about work, otherwise I wouldn't share a beer with you, don't you think?"

She took another sip of beer, before frowning at the can itself, finding the beverage low quality.

"Why you got dumped by your dudes anyway?", she asks in a simple, direct manner.
12 Jun 2021, 1:51pm
Looking up at the stars slowly wheeling by as the hab-ring rotated, Vodan thought about how he actually came to be a highly motivated translocational freelance pilot.

“Humm. I’d put it down to a dickless grifter, his tugging-sock of a murderous girlfriend, and a backstabbing goth bitch I should have kept a better eye on. That and a badass boss that gets real pissy if'n he don’t get his own way”

He sighed and looked at the surprisingly nice younger woman that was talking with him. It could be a confidence trick to get him off guard, but Vodan really couldn’t give a shit right now. They had a 'lunch break' vibe going on, and Vodan didn't want that spoiled.

“Kept sayin I should fix up a nest egg in case it went south, but never did” he said with a shrug.

“Hey come on now, your ok to search the pages where honest people shouldn’t go. See if you can find out where one Creamy Goodness the Third may have tucked himself away and I’ll give you.. “

Vodan patted his pockets finding almost nothing of value.

“Umm, my thanks and respect” he finished laughing dryly.
12 Jun 2021, 2:55pm
Michael nods, his gaze still upon the simulated starfield.

"Well, I'm not. If I lose my ship, that's it. No insurance, no second chances–even if I've survived whatever happened."

He turns to the woman, his arms folded.

"And now here I am with a strange woman, mutual memory lapses, and some rando insisting that we've worked together."

Ridge gives Veronica a long look.

"So," he says. "Tell me about yourself."


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12 Jun 2021, 5:32pm
Veronica returns Ridge's look with her own, then shrugs dismissively.

"Ain't much to tell, mate. I'm a trader. Small-scale stuff, buyin' an' sellin' whatever takes my fancy. I don't deal slaves, mind. That's a line I draw very firmly indeed. But pretty much anythin' else is fine. I'll also take the odd courierin' jobs, not bothered who for. I work on my own, an' I go where I please. An' that's the way I like it."

A wry smirk appears on Veronica's face.

"An' like you, I 'ate dealin' with authority an' all. But needs must sometimes, know what I mean?"

Veronica's expression turns quizzical.

"Why ain't you in the guild, then?"
12 Jun 2021, 5:43pm
Michael leans against the bullhead, his arms crossed. He pauses before answering.

"Never exactly went to flight school. And my ship, well..."

Another pause. Another long gaze.

"Let's just say that she became mine."
12 Jun 2021, 7:11pm
"The Misadventure," says Veronica with a nod. "Which brings us back to the matter at 'and. You remember I said I'd learned two snippets of information? Well, I've only told you one of 'em so far. The second snippet concerns your ship."

Veronica uncrosses her legs and leans forward.

"When I got to the admin centre, I said I'd just called in to let 'em know I was back on the station earlier than expected. Now, the bloke I spoke to very kindly confirmed that a Krait two named Misadventure left Citi Gateway approximately three hours after the time I reckon you an' I first met. But the most interestin' thing is this; accordin' to their records, it never came back. So, wotcher make of that, eh?"

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