Elite roleplay: Citi Gateway

CITI GATEWAY

The Orbis station is a center of activity. Within the station a myriad of places can be found.
  • The Warrens: Where the poor plebs of the station live. It's is a breeding ground for the most unscrupulous. Keep an eye on your wallet when traversing the corridors of these areas.
  • Habitation Complex: For those workers and pilots that can afford it, this area provides closer to 1G gravity for more earth like living.
  • Commerce Divison: and Administration Where the larger corporations make their home. Station administration can be found here.
  • Industrial Complex: Where industry manufactures their various goods.
  • Entertainment: District Bars, theaters and night clubs, tattoo parlors and other establishments can be found vying for a commanders credits in exchange for a bit of fun.
  • Station Security: A high tech brig used to house law breakers until they can be tried, and or deported off station.
  • Medical Ward: Where commanders can get patched up, enhanced, or fix existing cybernetics.

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
02 Jun 2021, 4:26pm
Veronica takes another glance at the stranger, then resumes reading from her dataslate. The waiter bustles over to her again, a professional smile on his weary young face.

"Excuse me, miss, but are you done with these?" he asks, indicating the cup of cold coffee and the abandoned muffin.

Veronica gives the waiter a curt nod.

"Would you like to order anything else, miss?" the waiter asks.

Veronica looks up at the waiter. "No, ta."

"Are you sure, miss? Only we're pretty busy, and, well..."

Veronica sighs. "All right, mate. Tell yer what, leave the muffin, eh?"

The waiter picks up the cup and saucer, then bustles away to tend to another patron. Veronica concentrates on her dataslate once more. However, after a few more moments she appears to give up on whatever it is she is attempting to read. With a heavy sigh she puts the slate into sleep mode and stuffs it into her clutch bag. Then she rises and briskly leaves the cafe, holding her bag in her right hand against her stomach.

The heels of her shoes make a clacking noise as she walks to the centre of the mall. She stops, looking this way and that, as though trying to decide which way to go.


Last edit: 03 Jun 2021, 10:09am
03 Jun 2021, 10:18am
Michael watches the woman rise and walk a little ways away, seemingly a little unsure of her direction. He turns back to his coffee, once again dwelling on his own situation.

Everything I own was on that ship. If I'm going to be stranded here for a month...

Michael checks his credit balance. It's healthy in the way that regular citizens see all pilots as wealthy, seeing only the credit balance, not realizing the true overhead of maintaining a ship. Still, it's enough for him to get by.

Finishing his coffee, Michael rises. He has only the clothes on his back and the dataslate in his jacket pocket.

It's time to go shopping.


Last edit: 03 Jun 2021, 10:26am
03 Jun 2021, 9:39pm
"Well...I didn't expect you back this early." Atlas hums quietly, looking at Veronica as he was on his way to the café to get a bite to eat after finishing up work on the Leviathan for departure. "Your trip for those artifacts here and back again that quickly?" The man hmms as he keeps a respectful distance, but definitely took the stance of a man familiar with the woman.
03 Jun 2021, 10:02pm
Veronica turns to see a tall, bearded stranger looking at her expectantly.

"Artefacts?" she repeats, then shakes her head. "Sorry, mate, I think you might 'ave got me mixed up with someone else. I don't know anything about any artefacts."
04 Jun 2021, 10:35am
"...does the name Loki mean anything to you?" Atlas asked after a moment, his eyes having narrowed in thought and concentration. The jovial man was slowly leaking away in favor of the pirate. "You did have dinner with us after all. Just last night."
04 Jun 2021, 10:53am
"Oh!"

Veronica blinks, then gives the stranger an embarrassed smile.

"Yes, of course! Oh! D'you know what, my mind's been all over the place lately! Sorry for not recognisin' yer straight away, only I've always 'ad an absolutely shockin' memory for faces. An' names."

She gives the stranger a wide-eyed grin and a self-deprecating shrug.

"Artefacts, yeah... No, I didn't bother in the end. Not my cuppa tea, know what I mean? It'd slipped my mind until you mentioned it. Silly me, eh?"


Last edit: 04 Jun 2021, 11:18am
04 Jun 2021, 11:32am
"Right...quick question then so I can tell him you didn't forget about him after last night. What kind of food does he love the most?" Atlas asks with a wry grin...but a glance in his eyes would say something different. An almost predatory look, a man on the hunt for an answer and already partially knowing what the response would be.
04 Jun 2021, 12:01pm
Veronica shifts her weight from one foot to the other.

"Hmm. Now then, let me 'ave a think."

She ponders the question for a moment, then wrinkles her nose and shrugs her shoulders at the stranger.

"Nah, sorry. I forget. Honestly mate, I can be such a ditz sometimes! Anyway, lovely bumpin' into yer again. Sorry I can't stop an' chat, only I've got somewhere I need to be. Must dash, or I'll be late. Ta ta!"

Veronica turns and walks away from the stranger, but stops after just a few paces. She takes a deep breath, then turns and, with a perplexed expression on her face, walks back to the stranger.

"Look, mate," she begins, calmly but hesitantly, "the truth is, I dunno who you are at all. As far as I'm concerned, I've never clapped eyes on yer in my life. So either you really 'ave got the wrong person, or you're trying somethin' on with me, or..."

Veronica's frown deepens as she continues.

"Or I've 'ad some sort of accident which made me forget yer. An' that is a possibility I don't care for at all. So suppose we start again, eh? Just now you said somethin' about me bein' back from a trip... somethin' to do with artefacts... What was that all about?"


Last edit: 04 Jun 2021, 2:35pm
05 Jun 2021, 7:10pm
Rhodesia walk like a man with purpose, but who is still quite lost. Sensing danger, the local vermin give icy stares with their eyes, but wide berth with their feet. “You there, where is the infirmary?” Rhodesia barks at a particularly suspicious urchin. No answer. He turns away in disgust, the air in his wake ripe with old blood and sweat.
05 Jun 2021, 7:59pm
"Well...you were going off with someone else that had been interrogating you as to if you were some form of con-artist or not to find some artifacts that were alien in nature..." Atlas trailed off with a huff, glancing at her. "And you don't look particularly dazed enough to have lost what amounts to a day's worth of memories with blunt force trauma. You definitely weren't drunk when we met or when you came aboard for some fun." He shrugs a bit. "Which leaves a few options, none of which are good."
06 Jun 2021, 2:51pm
A scornful expression flashes across Veronica's face at the man's comment about 'some fun' aboard his ship.

"Yeah, I know what the options are," she says, "an' one of 'em could involve you, for all I know. Anyway, I ain't a total blank. I can remember potterin' around Citi Gateway, an' doin' a bit of readin' on my ship..."

Veronica pauses to reflect, but then the sudden movement of someone leaving the cafe catches her eye. It is the man who spoke briefly to her in the cafe earlier.

'Weird morning...' he had said.

She sees him set off along the mall, then turns her attention back to the matter at hand.

"So," she says, "the bloke you said I was supposed to be goin' to look for alien artefacts with. You wouldn't've 'appened to catch 'is name, would yer?"
06 Jun 2021, 2:56pm
"No...but he's over there." He points out Michael Ridge. "If you want to talk to him, he might remember?" A blue monkey creature, Loki, then popped up and chittered happily on his shoulder. "Oh, there you are you little scamp."

The man grins over at her. "He's the fun I was talking about by the way." Atlas thumbs up at the monkey. "You seemed to really enjoy feeding him. Too bad little Loki here will be heartbroken you don't remember him."
06 Jun 2021, 3:25pm
Veronica's head is on a swivel as she divides her attention between the stranger and his pet, whilst keeping track of the man from the cafe.

"Oh!" she says, visibly softening at the sight of Loki. "He's adorable! I ain't never seen one of these before."

She looks up at the stranger and returns his grin, then glances along the mall to follow the progress of the man from the cafe.

"I 'ave to catch that bloke," she says to the stranger. "Lucky for me I bumped into yer when I did. I might never 'ave found 'im otherwise. Listen, thanks for yer 'elp. What's yer name, anyway?"
06 Jun 2021, 4:52pm
"Atlas." He responds with a hum, giving the woman a nod. "Well, I guess for the second time in recent memory then, take care and safe travels."
06 Jun 2021, 5:13pm
"Yeah," replies Veronica with a smile. "You an' all, Atlas. You an' all."

She looks at the blue monkey-like creature sitting happily on Atlas' shoulder.

"Ta ta, Loki."

Veronica turns to chase after the man from the cafe. After a few paces she spins round to face Atlas and, walking backwards, calls out to him.

"What is 'is favourite food, anyway?"

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