Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
20 Apr 2019, 7:41pm
Maul nods in agreement.

"Yeah, I'm adding Majestic Class Interdictors to the no go list for future jobs." Maul says jokingly.

Maul rubs his eyes and lays his head back for a moment then looks at Khlean.

"So, do you take sketchy jobs like this very often? I would have never clocked you as the type when I first saw you back in the bar. I'm also a pretty shit judge of character though if we're being honest."
20 Apr 2019, 8:36pm
Khelan looks over to Maul and laughs.

"Aye Ah agree, let's no tangle wi Capitol ships again, they bastards are too fucking scary"

"Ah'll be honest wi ye that wis the first time ah ever done anything like that ah don't normally make a habit of pissin oaf folk wi big guns or infact any guns, Ah'm a luver no a fighter. But the moolah wis too gud tae turn doon an ah wis strugglin fur cash an tae stay sane hopping back n forth carryin shite frae wan system tae another.
"

He looks over to Maul

" Wan thing ah ment tae ask ye, ye hivnae made a copy of that data hiv ye? The folk wit wanted it were very specific aboot that. "
20 Apr 2019, 9:03pm
Maul shook his head.

"Nah, I deleted the files from the computer I nabbed them from though but I'm sure they have backups off site. So that was probably just a minor set back for them. This kind of data should honestly be destroyed from the source. Stockpiles of personal information and prototypes for ships and weapons that will inevitably bring about the death of normal people trying to make a living. Rich folk and government officials sitting in their comfy homes playing a game of "who's dick is bigger" but never stepping up to the plate themselves. Make the less fortunate do their fighting for them. Pfffft. Don't even get me started on the potentially life ruining information they have on folks. Probably just sitting on it waiting for the right moment to leak it.

Maul stops for a moment before continuing.

"Nah, I don't even care enough to try to make a copy of this data. I'd rather toss it out our new "cargo hole" but it's like you said, the money is too good to turn down in this line of work."


Last edit: 20 Apr 2019, 9:14pm
21 Apr 2019, 4:19pm
Khelan listens and nods in agreement.

"Yer right there mate, chances are the fuckers who want this shite are gonna use it tae get richer an richer while the wee folk like us are oot in the black riskin oor lives just tae earn enough tae keep us in buzz boams."

Khelan looks at the eta on station and smiles

" Five minutes tae go, which is just as weel, we're soakin up enough rads tae gie us a nice healthy green glow. Looks like oor first port of call is the decontamination showurs an if we're lucky we'll still be able tae huv weans aifter this wee escapade. Landin's gonna be innerestin tho we've oanly goat two legs, the thurd's back where we met that cruiser. "
21 Apr 2019, 8:11pm
Maul smiles at Khelan.

"Hey, at least the people on the station will get a kick out of watching us attempt to land. Makes me think back to the first time I ever tried to land my Sidewinder. Cleve Hub sure got some laughs at my expense that day."

Maul runs his fingers through his hair and laughs.

"Speaking of decontamination showers, I fucking reek."
21 Apr 2019, 9:04pm
Khelan grins

"Well Ah wisnae gonnae say anythin but aye ye dae."

Khelan limps the battered python to the station and turns to Maul.

"Time tae talk funny again an nae takin the pish oota me fur it."

Khelan clears his throat, flicks on the comms and winces as static screeches through the cockpit.

"Python 3.141 to Flight control, I'm declaring an emergency, we're heavily damaged and have suffered reactor damage. Request emergency access and decontamination facilities."

"Flight control to Python 3141 request acknowledged, emergency services are prepping for your immediate arrival. Proceed to pad 13."

"Python 3.141 to Flight Control Acknowledged, we've suffered heavy damage to the landing gear and am unable to deploy gear. Be prepared for a heavy landing."

"Flight Control, Python 3141 Rodger that, crash tenders are deploying, try to set her down as gently as possible."

Khelan carefully pilots the Prid through the mailslot towards pad 13, the thrusters spluttering and smoking heavily. He looks for pad 13 and sees it immediately due to the flashing emergency lights surrounding it.

" Ye might wanna strap yersel in an if ye huv an imaginary mate, ye might wanna start asking them tae look oot fur ye!"
21 Apr 2019, 9:50pm
Maul prepares for the impact as they approach the landing pad and screams over the sound of the reverse thrusters fighting to slow The Prid down.

"Only thing I believe in right now is your ability to land this ship without killing us!"
21 Apr 2019, 10:53pm
Khelan hauls on the controls trying to keep the Prid under control, the reverse thrusters struggling to slow down the approach. He manages to get the speed down enough to engage the vertical thrusters to lower the ship down towards the pad. The thrusters on the underside of the hull howl in protest before they stop working in a cloud of thick black smoke, sparks and flames.

"Brace yersel!" he cries as the ship shoots downward propelled by the descent thrusters mounted on top of the hull.

The Prid slams into the deck with a booming crash and the howl of tortured metal as the underside of the ship takes the full brunt of the crash landing.

Fire tenders rush around the wreckage spraying it down with fire retardant foam and medical units rush forward ready to receive any casualties.

"Come on mate time we wurnae in here" he says while slapping the release for his harness.

"Make sure ye get that drive wi the data oan it an keep it someplace safe."

Coughing from the smoke that's starting to fill the inside of the cockpit Khelan yanks on the emergency manual release lever for the cockpit canopy and small charges built around the frame blow it upwards away from the ship.

He scrambles up and out of the ship and slides down the side onto the emergency mats surrounding the sides of the ship.
22 Apr 2019, 2:52am
Maul starts going into a coughing fit. He starts having flashbacks to a similar experience he had before his month long blackout.

He checks that the storage device is safe in his backpack and tightens the straps around him before trying to follow Khelan out of the ship.

His vision goes blurry as he struggles to breath.

Maul makes his way up and out the ship following Khelan's lead and lands on the emergency mats below.
22 Apr 2019, 11:15pm
Khelan gets almost instantly surrounded by medics and authorities trying to check him over for injuries, ask him questions about what caused so much damage to his ship and usher him into decontamination. He does his best to let the medics do their job while trying not to give away any information that could come back and bite him later on.

Once he gets into decontamination he glances around the small room, his cybernetic eye looking for any hidden devices either audio or visual. Once he's satisfied he turns to Maul.

"Hiv ye goat that thing wi ye? Gies it here afor we get oota here an Ah'll go an deliver it tae the folk wit wanted it. Then Ah've goat a couple of wee bits n pieces tae take care of. Once Ah'm dun wi them Ah'll meet ye up oan level 42, there's a wee bar there called "Milliways" it's tacky as all fuck but Ah like it."

He pauses for a couple of seconds and speaks again.

"Oh yeah an don't go getting yersel intae trouble, ye cannae run an hide in the Prid this time."
23 Apr 2019, 1:15am
Maul nods in agreement and hands Khelan the storage device out of his backpack.

"Yeah, no worries this time, I plan on taking it easy for a bit. After that insanity we just lived through I think I'm done for a while."

Maul starts to leave the decontamination area.

"I'll head on up to level 42 and poke around till you finish up. Oh, and be careful around whoever these people are. Anyone wanting this kind of data has to be up to no good. Ping me on the communicator if you need me."
23 Apr 2019, 10:08am
Khelan laughs

"Ye loved every second of it Ah can see it in yer face. But ye dinnae huv tae worry aboot me Ah'm gonnae be careful an anyway Ah'm too pretty fur they folk tae want tae kill."

He heads off out of the decontamination area, gets into a nearby lift and hits the button for the main market concourse to meet his contact.

He walks through the concourse and turns off into a darkened side area wishing he'd brought a sidearm and up to an unmarked door with a single button on it.

"Guess this is the place" he says to himself and presses the button. A small panel opens and he drops the storage device into it. The panel closes and his pad beeps to indicate a credit transfer. He checks the amount and nearly chokes in surprise at the sheer number of 0's after the main figure.

He quickly gets his wits about him and heads off back to the main concourse and to the main elevator cluster. He presses the control and the elevator descends to his destination.

He fires off a message to Maul to let him know that he'll be in the bar with his money in an hour or so and heads off to his destination.
23 Apr 2019, 5:41pm
Maul watches as Khelan leaves the decontamination area before leaving himself.

He takes the elevator up to level 42 and after a brief walk around the market he notices the "Milliways" sign.

He enters enters the bar and sees a man passed out on the bar and recalls the last incident he got himself tangled up in.

Maul laughs to himself.

"Nope, not again."

His communicator chirps notifying him of a message from Khelan indicating he'd be there soon.

Maul looks around the bar and notices a huge pink neon sign and it seemed every table and booth had tacky decor on it.

"Jesus Khelan, you weren't joking when you said this place was tacky."

Maul picks an empty booth to sit in and waits for Khelan.

"Does every booth have to have these huge fucking vases with flowers and...are these pink napkins?"

Maul laughs and shakes his head as he starts flicking the petals on the flowers to pass the time.
23 Apr 2019, 6:56pm
After a while Khelan walks into the bar, looks around for Maul, waves to him before wandering over the barman, talking with him for a brief period and then saunters over to where Maul is sat.

"Well, wit dae ye think aboot the place? Pretty classy ain't it? Ah'm tellin ye places like this are great. Nae fucker wid ever think aboot lookin fur ye in a place as tacky as this. They'd be all busy lookin in shitehole dives or swanky joints, nae fucker thinks of lookin in the tourist spots. Ah mean wid any self respictin fugitive hide oot in a joint like this?"

The waiter brings over two plates heaped with mashed potato, turnip and something grainy, meaty and covered in a sauce. He puts them down in front of them and then puts two glasses with a measure of clear amber liquid in them.

"Cheers matey" Khelan says to the waiter before holding up his glass to Maul.

"Cheers tae ye an all Maul, yer a guid man"

Khelan knocks back the contents of the glass in a single gulp and sighs contentidly.
23 Apr 2019, 8:45pm
Maul looks down at the food on his plate then back up to Khelan.

"Yeah, cheers man"  Maul says as he holds his glass up.

"....this place is...uh...it's really something." Maul says while looking around the bar.

Maul sits the glass back down and takes a bite of his mashed potatoes and looks up at Khelan.

"So, how'd the delivery go? Everything good?"

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