Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
28 Jul 2017, 3:39pm
Mhera felt the metal floor beneath her rumble as the engines kicked over. Her stomach cartwheeled as the transport ship broke contact with the landing pad. Around her, women were wailing, and pulling on the bars. She was at a loss of what to do. Despair started to grip at her inner being. Her mind flashed to her goof friend, Dr. Drake. Her parents, her brother. She had no idea if she would ever see them again.


Meanwhile, the crazed woman attempted a bull rush. She tried to plant her shoulder into Luke's shoulder to off center the man. In the same motion, as she stooped down, she slashed at his leg while screaming some blood crazed profanity. All around the arena, spectators exploded into cheers and yells adding to the confusion and din.
28 Jul 2017, 3:44pm
Taking the glass from Marra, he follows her. Sipping his drink, he shrugs slightly.

"Got a couple things on my plate, as per usual." He smiles and takes another sip.
28 Jul 2017, 4:06pm
"As well as taking things from other people's plates?"

Marra replies, giving a Phisto a sideways glance as she sips her own wine.
28 Jul 2017, 4:11pm
Phisto chuckles as he returns Marra's sideways look.

"Or just straight smashing their plates." He turns back to the star and grins haughtily.
28 Jul 2017, 4:22pm
The noise from the crowd would be deafeningly loud, but Lukes concentration was on the woman in front of him. All he could hear was a dull roar, some crazed profanities and, most prominently, his heartbeat thudding through his head. Seeing a flash of the blade, and the woman duck her shoulder down, he shifted his front leg back, hoping to avoid the knife slashing him and anchor himself for the charge.

He wasn't fast enough though. The blade swung past his thigh, but he was still off foot when the womans shoulder connected with his torso, knocking the wind out of him and toppling him to the ground. Without thinking, he wrapped his arms around her midriff mid fall, hoping to drag her down with him, the blade he was holding falling to the ground as it slipped from his hand.
28 Jul 2017, 4:39pm
Her body twisted as Twinkle-Toes brought her down onto her side. The impact knocked the knife from her hand, and it skidded to a stop a meter or so away. She brought her legs up, and tried to wrap the man into a scissors hold. Her blood crazed eyes were dilated. Obviously she was on some sort of chemical enhancement. She let out another piercing yell

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28 Jul 2017, 5:04pm
Gasping for breath, Luke tried to hold tight onto the woman, hoping to have a moment to plan his next move. He was stopped in his tracks as the woman wrapped her legs around his torso and locked them tight, his right arm pinned against his side with surprising force for such a small person. His arm being in the way provided some small relief, but didn't fully prevent the woman from being able to squeeze the small amount of breath he'd regained, back out from his lungs.

It was barely seconds before he found himself gasping for what little air he could get, looking around fervently for a way out. He tried punching the womans leg, clawing at it, even pulling at it. Nothing was working as his peripheral vision grew dark. Then he saw it, a blade reflecting in the dirt.

Clawing out at it, he just barely got his fingertips enough purchase to pull it towards him and get a grip of it. Still his vision grew darker as his face turned purple and he mustered what little energy he had left to plunge the blade towards whichever part of the woman he could feasibly reach.
28 Jul 2017, 5:11pm
In her rage like stage, she wasn't aware of the skinny man reaching for the knife until it was too late. She felt the blade bite the flesh in her leg. With a howl, she rolled up and scrambled to her feat. Her chest slowly rising and lowering with each panted breath. The look in her eyes was crazed. She lowered her posture.

Behind Luke, came a whirring noise. Dust was kicked up into a swirling cloud as the modified drone had remade contact with it's target. It chirped and the blue indication light turned red. All around the stadium, the crowds hollered and yelled in a frenzy of excitement.
28 Jul 2017, 5:33pm
Gasping, coughing and spluttering, Luke stood up and glanced at his now bloodied hand. He braced for another attack, still trying to catch his breath when he noticed the change in the womans stance. Spinning on the spot, he saw the robot from earlier buzzing angrily and once again, acquiring its target.

There was a brief pause, which Luke took advantage of to grab the second blade from the floor before charging past the woman, sidestepping her then dodging behind her before pushing on to a full sprint. Reaching a corner, he dove round it and pushed himself up against the wall, in an attempt to give himself a reprieve and think for a moment over what to do about this robot.
28 Jul 2017, 5:39pm
The drone buzzed as it finished resolving its target. the auto-cannon turned and made it's aim for Luke and started spinning up. A moment later the lithe young man had bolted away leaving a confused Havoc.

The last thing she saw was muzzle fire before she was torn to shreds.

The crowed erupted into a frenzy at the sight of blood. Some now were chanting "Twinkle-Toes, Twinkle-Toes."

The drone hovered for a second, before taking chase.
28 Jul 2017, 6:13pm
Marra allows herself a little smile.

"I had my people keep their eyes on your people whilst you smashed plates," she says softly in her Cambrian lilt, taking another sip of wine, "and with so few a number."

She turns to look directly at Phisto;

"Impressive."
28 Jul 2017, 6:19pm
Just as Luke had partially caught his breath, the drone circled round the corner. Spotting him, the telltale whir of the weapon spinning up filled his ears and he did the only thing he could.

Leapt at it.

The bullets tore through the air, then his arm, as he connected with the machine, pulling it to the ground. Landing awkwardly, the machine trapped his leg underneath it. But crucially, the gun was facing away from him and he was able to use his other leg to keep it that way.

Making use of the blade, he located a panel and began working hard to pry it open, fighting against the machine as it struggled to turn, or lift off the ground, anything to shake him off.
28 Jul 2017, 6:33pm
Phisto turns to Marra, masking his surprise at her admission.  He takes a sip of wine, and dips his head respectfully.  He meets her eyes, and smiles slightly.

"Thanks, but I'm afraid you have me at a disadvantage.  Don't like tooting my own horn, but I can think of several smashed dinner sets you might be referring to."  He swirls his drink playfully as his eyes soften to her gaze.  "Care to narrow it down a little?"
28 Jul 2017, 7:26pm
Marra waves her hand dismissively, shaking her head.

"The details are not important. What is important is that you have form."

Her eyes work slowly and deliberately up and down the man's figure.

"Very fine form, indeed."

She smiles, turning away from Phisto and the viewport, returning back to the table.

"And also of interest is your latest contract," she says, taking a seat and smoothing out her kimono.
28 Jul 2017, 8:11pm
Phisto follows Marra's eyes with his own as she inspects his body.  As she turns away, he smiles softly, following the sway of her hips as she walks.  After a moment he moves to take the seat opposite her.  Before he does, he sets his wine glass on the table and begins to remove his suit coat.  Draping it over the back of the chair, he sits, adjusting his cuff links in turn.

Pulling up to the table, he smiles as her hands gracefully brush across her outfit, the fabric playing with soft light of the room and the raging star outside.

"You look absolutely stunning tonight."


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