Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

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If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


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1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

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We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
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People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
08 May 2019, 2:50am
"Wow, tickler of goat testicles. Just when you think you know somebody." Maul says, ribbing at Khelan.

Maul joins them in raising their cups. He takes a sip and coughs.

"Blah, sorry, cough....cough...never been big on alcohol...cough.....cough....kinda funny considering I was a bartender." He says, laughing between coughs.

Maul sits the cup down, clears his throat and looks at Shin.

"Sorry about that. Anyway, uh sir, I was hoping you could help me out with something. See, Khelan and I met at a bar in Citi Gateway. I woke up outside on the streets and wandered in. I have no idea how I got there and I barely have any recollection of the month before that. My credits were drained and I'm assuming my ship is still back home where I left it. I seem to recall being tied up and I think there was a group of people. It's all really hazy."

Maul pauses for a moment.

"Ah, well, I'll just cut to the chase. This group that's been fucking with me, I call them The Corporation. We believe they may have put a tracking device in me or maybe an explosive. I don't know. But I'm hoping you could help me out with figuring out whether they have or not. I can't really just waltz into a hospital all willy nilly asking them to check me for explosives."
09 May 2019, 12:23am
Shins eyes narrow as he listens to Maul's story.

"It would seem that you have been fortunate to meet with Khelan when you did, something tells me that if it weren't for his influence then you would most likely be already dead."

Khelan smiles "Ah've came close tae killin him a cuppla times, Ah caught him messin wi the Prids systems an then ah fired him oot an airlock at an Imperial capital ship."

"Ahh yes the INV Duval heist, you exceeded our expectations with that one." says Shin smiling.

"Wait a wee minute, how d'ye know aboot that? That wis all hush hush, Ah didnae even know who Ah wis working fur......Unless.... Ya crafty bugger it wis you wisn't it?"

Shin smiles. "I needed someone I could trust to pull off a job like that. You should know that you never truly leave us. You have performed several tasks for us over the last few years, didn't you think it odd that when you were down on your luck fate smiled upon you?"

Khelan looks confused and angry but then smiles.

"Ah shuda known ye hid somethin tae dae wi it, yer a bugger ye know that? But if ye don't mind ma askin, why did ye dae it?"

Shin looks directly at Khelan.

"You are like a son to me which is why you have gotten away with as much insolence as you have done over the years and I have a duty to make sure you you are provided for."

Khelan sits in stunned silence.

"Ah hid nae idea Yodama san, all ah can say is Thank you"

Shin waves his hand dismissively.

"Your thanks are not needed although they are appreciated."

He looks at Maul.

"As for your friend, I will get my best people to check him over as soon as you leave"

He looks at Khelan

"When your business with this corporation is done I would like for you both to return here, I have need of your services."

Khelan gets up and bows to Shin

"Dōmo arigatō Yodama san, Ah'll be stayin oan the Prid while Ah'm here, once ye have made the necessary arrangements ye will find us there. But furst we're goin tae visit the Golden Palace"

He motions to Maul.

"C'mon mate time tae gie yet tastebuds a night they'll never forget."


Last edit: 09 May 2019, 7:12am
09 May 2019, 2:03am
Maul stands up and bows to Shin then turns to follow Khelan.

He waits till they are out of earshot of Shin before speaking.

"Wow, this Shin guy really cares about you. Someone like that having your back out here is pretty rare."

Maul pauses for a moment and hesitates before asking.

"So, did you really just grow tired of working for these people or did something else happen?"
09 May 2019, 8:12am
Khelan stops and turns to face Maul.

"It's ancient history mate, Ah'll explain later oan. Right noo it's time to get some grub."

He pauses only to change back into his maglock boots, he heads out the shop and straight into the bulk of the thug from earlier.

The thug grabs Khelan, spins him round and pins him against the wall while the second thug grabs Maul from behind in a bear hug lifting him off the ground.

"You should not have come here Gaijin" he hisses while holding a blade to Khelans throat "If I see you again I'll kill you and your boyfriend where you both stand!"

Khelan stays quiet and looks straight back into the thugs face.

"Not so mouthy now are you?"

"Ah'm jus wunnerin why yer still alive? Shin disnae usually tolerate behaviour like this frae his Ashi no heishi."

"What do you know of my uncle? he's a senile old fool, he clings to the old ways and refuses to get involved with ventures that would ensure we would control not only this system but the entire sector."

A woman's voice interrupts.

"What is the meaning of this? Do you want to draw attention to us? Theodore release him immediately!"

The thug moves back a step and notices the knife in Khelans hand right at his crotch.

Khelan tilts his head back and brings it forward violently his forehead flattening the thugs nose with a sickening crunch. The thug staggers back blood pouring down his face.

"Thank you Omi, it's good tae see ye again" he says to the woman. "Ye look as beautiful as ever."

He turns to Maul.

"Noo ye see why ah cudnae stay here?"
09 May 2019, 6:55pm
The thug immediately releases Maul from his grip when Khelan busts the other thugs face.

Maul looks down at a splatter of blood on his boot and then back up to the thug that was holding him.

"Yeah, I get why you left now. Looks like the new blood have no respect. No brains either."

He turns his attention to Omi.

"So, this is the Omi you've been talking about. Um, thank you for helping us out there."
09 May 2019, 10:23pm
Omi smiles and shakes Maul's hand.

"It's nothing, Theodore is all muscle, ambition and no intellect. Unfortunately it's a dangerous combination."

She stops

"Where are my manners? I am Omikuma Yodama but you may call me Omi. I assume you have already met my father and obviously you know the tickler here."

Khelan looks mildly embarrassed

"We're jus headin tae the Golden Palace tae gie Maul here a taste of the gud life, yer welcome tae join us"

"I would love to but I have to talk with my father first, I might stop by afterwards. If my waistline will forgive me."

"Magic, well we'll see ye later ah hope."

Khelan turns to Maul.

"C'mon matey let's go get fed."

He waits until he's away from Omi before talking again.

"That there wis another reason Ah left."
10 May 2019, 1:40am
Maul smiles.

"Found yourself falling for her, did ya? Falling for the bosses daughter seems like a dangerous game to be playing, that's for sure."
10 May 2019, 8:21pm
Khelan nods

"Kinda mate, we wur an item fur a wee while. Shin wis cool wi it an all but some of the other guys wurnae so unnerstannin an wee Omi wis gettin a hard time so Ah did wit ah thought wis right fur her an called things aff. It wisnae ma best move but Ah cudnae stand tae see folk giein her shite."

"So enough aboot ma sob stories we're here."

Khelan points to the ancient flaking sign that says "Golden Palace" and heads inside.
10 May 2019, 10:53pm
Maul follows Khelan inside the Golden Palace and notices the flaking sign.

"Uh, you sure this is the right place? I was expecting a lot of...well....gold stuff for some reason."

Maul shrugs and gestures towards an empty table and puts on a terrible royal accent.

"Well Mr. Goat Tickler, shall we have a seat?"

Maul laughs and flops down into a seat and looks around.

"I've never been to a place like this. What do you recommend?"
11 May 2019, 12:13am
Khelan grins.

"Hiv Ah ever given ye reason tae doubt me? And dinnae say the whole firin ye at an Imperial ship thing."

"It depends, Ah'm goin fur Sashimi which is raw fish an meat sliced thin like an ye pit a wee bitty soy oan it an it's fuckin delish. Oar Ah'm thinkin ye might want tae go wi the Katsu, it's a mild curry wi meat an literally translatid means" Tae win" oar "Tae be victorious" which givin whit we're gonna dae might bring us luck oar it could be a load of bollocks but ye never know. Oar ye can be a big wuss and jus go wi ramen like ever other tourist."

Khelan laughs and places his order in the screen in front of his seat.

" Just dinnae order fugu, knowin yer luck ye'll end up gettin yersel poisoned an then Ah'll huv tae find a new mate tae fire at capital ships."
11 May 2019, 3:38am
Maul laughs and thinks for a moment before ordering the ramen.

He looks back up at Khelan.

"Does it still make me a wuss if I've never had ramen before? I've always been a pizza and burgers kind of guy. So, this is me being adventurous."

Maul chuckles.

"I really need to get out more. I've dabbled in exploring out in the uncharted black but I hardly take the time to visit stations and enjoy myself."

"You ever think about getting out there? I've always heard Anacondas make great ships to go exploring in, so you'd be set! The solitude and silence though, that shit can drive you fucking crazy but it always made me feel safe. Really helps clear the mind."

The waitress interrupts by bringing Maul his ramen and sits it in front of him.

"Well that was fast. Did you just warm this up in the back." Maul says, trying to joke with the waitress but receives no reply.

He looks down at the bowl.

"Okay, I can already tell I'm going to hate this but I'm fucking starving."
11 May 2019, 7:28am
Khelan sits in silence for a few moments

"Ah've thought aboot it but tae be honest Ah dunno, Ah mean Ah've heard stories of folk comin back frae spendin too lang oot in the black an goin a wee bit peculiar. Ah widnae want that tae happen tae me."

"Plus known ma luck Ah'd probably end up gettin abductid by Thargoids oar somethin an spend the rest of ma days getting gang probed."

The waitress puts Khelans food down in front of him and he smiles at her

"Domo Arigato." he says to her, she smiles and walks away.

"So hiv ye thought aboot wit yer goin tae dae once this is all sortid?"
11 May 2019, 7:00pm
Maul takes a bite of his ramen and speaks in between chewing.

"Well, part of me wants to go back home and visit my parents and see some of my old pals but I feel like that's unlikely. Even if I somehow come out of this with enough proof that The Corporation exists and that they set me up, I'll still be wanted for the other crimes I've been involved in."

He wipes his mouth and thinks for a moment.

"Maybe I'll just keep on doing what I'm doing. Take on some jobs, make some credits. I've thought about trying to find others who are willing to put their lives on the line and work together just to expose some of these rich assholes for who they really are. The Corporation is just one group. There has to be more like them out there."

He smirks and shrugs.

"Or I might just get a cat."

"What about you? Think you'll go back to hauling cargo around?"
11 May 2019, 9:18pm
Khelan puts his chopsticks to one side of his plate

"Ye shud go haim, see yer folks, they'll maist probably be missin ye. Unless ye were a horrible wee shite as a wean an then they'll probably still be missin ye though they'll probably think yer up tae something."

"Ah dunno wit Ah'll dae. Ah mean ma folks arnae wi us anymaire so Ah've only goat the Prid an Leo. So Ah shud probably be the wan gettin a cat tho wi ma luck the wee furry basturd wid probably kill me in ma sleep oar shit in ma cereal."

Khelans pad beeps and he glances at it.

"It's wee Omi, Shins made the arrangements tae get ye checked oot frae his ain doc so yer gonna be in gud hands."

He stands up from the table

"Time's a wastin mate..."

He pauses

"Ye can pick up the tab fur bein a cheeky shite tae the waitress."

Khelan heads out the door and stands waiting for Maul to join him.
11 May 2019, 10:36pm
Maul smiles and pays for the meals using the screen in front of him.

"Some people just don't respect good old sarcasm."

He chuckles to himself and meets Khelan outside.

"Alright, we're good to go."

They begin walking to go see the doctor.

"So, you ever think of seeing if Omi would be willing to join you on The Prid after all of this? I know it's probably complicated with everything she has going on here but you never know."

Maul smiles at Khelan.

"I could see it now. You two out there adventuring. Maybe a few little Khelans running around The Prid and Leo being the A.I. nanny."

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