Elite roleplay: Off station

OFF STATION

Your ship, deep space, anything that is not happening inside the Citi Gateway or Ingaba...

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6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


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Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

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In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

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19 May 2019, 11:59pm
Maul thinks for a moment before turning back to the terminal to check something.

"Leo should still be able to send you an alert if anyone enters the ship without authorization but he won't be able to stop them."

He turns back to Khelan.

"If I had that device that I used back on that Majestic Class Interdictor we could remotely control the Prids systems ourselves while we are gone and possibly shut any intruders down before they do something. I've been looking for a new one ever since, but I haven't had any luck."

He picks his backpack up and straps it around him.

"So, if you get an alert we will just have to get back here quick, or I can just terminate the scan now and run it later. Although, if someone did tamper with the systems, odds are they will be able to bypass the security systems if they came back anyway. It's your ship though, so we should do whatever you feel is best."
20 May 2019, 11:41pm
Khelan looks around thinking about what Maul's said.

"Ah suspect it wis just Omi but ye never know."

He smiles slightly as an idea enters his mind.

"leave the scan runnin, Ah've goat an easy way tae tell if someone's been onboard."

He leads Maul out the ship and closes the access door. Khelan then turns to face the door and reaches into his pocket taking out a roll of thin clear tape. He tears a length off the roll and puts it low down and across one side of the door and onto the frame.

"Who needs high tech?" he asks "Chances are if anywan decides tae open the door they'll no see the tape doon there an it'll rip aff when they open it. We come back an it's torn aff, some fuckers been onboard. Still there an it's all good." he heads down from the access door and out into the hanger.

" Time tae go visit Shin, he disnae appreciate it if he's kept waitin."
21 May 2019, 1:01am
Maul stands speechless for a moment as he watches Khelan put tape on the door.

"Shit, I uh, I guess that works. I would have never thought of that. Now I'm starting to see why I'm so bad at planning things."

Maul shakes it off and follows Khelan out into the hanger.

"Yeah, let's not keep him waiting."
21 May 2019, 7:31am
Khelan smiles at Maul.

"Yer no bad at plannin things, yer just too reliant oan tech stuff like a lot of folks. Ah remember wan time creepy Auld Uncle Albert telt me ma Ah wis too reliant oan tech stuff an Ah telt him "Naw, yer too reliant oan it." Then Ah turnt aff his life support machine."

He starts to laugh

" Ah'm oanly jokin. Creepy Auld Uncle Albert actually died in an Imperial prisoner of war camp. Ye'have tae unnerstan back in they days the Empire an the Feds where always at each others throats an occasionally they'd scoop up escape pods after a stooshie. The poor fucker inside wid then go tae an interrogation facility fur a wee "chat" tae find oot wit they knew then they'd get sent oot tae some pow camp oar another. If they were lucky it'd be oan an M class world an wid be reasonably hospitable, if they wurnae it'd be some hellhole where ye'd need tae put oan an E.V.A. suit tae go ootside."

"Uncle Albert wis lucky, he wis oan an M class place so he didnae need breathin gear but it wis high gravity so ye couldnae move too fast."

The two turn into the Alleyway and head towards "Yodama's Curios and More" two different men stand outside the door this time and step aside as Khelan and Maul approach.

"Shinshi arigatō" he says as he walks past and nods to the men.

He turns to Maul while he's taking his boots off to put on the slippers that are waiting for them.

"Time tae see wit we're here fur."
21 May 2019, 4:03pm
Maul follows suit and begins to take his boots off to slide on the slippers.

"Yeah, I guess it's hard not to rely on tech these days when everything relies on it so much."

"So your Uncle Albert wound up a slave?"

Maul shakes his head.

"I hate that. Forcing folk to be slaves. Just isn't right."

Maul finishes changing into his slippers and looks to Khelan.

"Okay, let's go see. I just hope we aren't here to receive some sort of bad news or something."
21 May 2019, 7:32pm
Khelan looks at Maul.

"Ah never said he wis a slave, the stupid auld fucker goat pished oan duty and fell oot the guard tower!"

Khelan doubles over howling with laughter.

"Ye know wit Ah love aboot ye Maul? Yer so easy tae wind up."

He pats Maul on the back.

"That an Ah yer wan of the few folk Ah trust."

He opens the door to Shin's office and walks in.

Inside Shin is sitting behind a large wooden desk a stern look on his face, Omi stood behind him and to his right. Theodore stands to one side of the table, his head bowed in shame.

Shin speaks.

"It's came to my attention that this Baka" he points to Theodore "Has been causing you and your friend problems and if it were not for my daughter intervening there would have most likely been bloodshed outside and you introduced him to your infamous Glasgow kiss. I was then informed that he attempted to assault Mr. Montresor. Such behaviour is not to be tolerated. I am willing to accept that you were acting in self defence and teaching this child some manners. Theodore has brought shame upon both himself and the Black Dragon Society by his actions so let me offer my deepest apologies."

Shin opens a drawer in his desk and takes out a wooden box. He pushes it towards Theodore.

"Open it!" he commands and Theodore obeys and gulps at the contents

"You know what to do Theodore."

"But uncle, this man is a gaijin he has no right to even be here..."

"SILENCE!!!" Shin barks "I don't want to listen to another word out of your mouth. This man has done nothing but bring honour to us during his time with us and has saved us from being destroyed on more than one occasion. He IS one of us and you will learn your place. Now do what you need to do or will I shoot you where you stand?"

Theodore drops his head and takes out a towel which he carefully folds and places onto Shin's desk. He then takes out a tantō blade and puts his left hand facing down onto the towel and puts the blade to the middle knuckle of his pinkie finger.

"Witever ye dae, keep yer mooth shut and dinnae turn away" Khelan hisses at Maul

Shin watches Theodore with his steely gaze and he brings the blade down severing the digit. He wraps it in the towel and presets it to Shin.

Shin grunts at Theodore.

"Get out of my sight"

Theodore bows his head and scurries out of the room clutching his hand tightly.

"Now Mr. Montresor I know it is not enough to make up for the indignity you suffered at the hands of my nephew but I your criminal record has been expunged. If you still intend to go after this corporation then please let Omikuma know what equipment you will be needing and we will endeavour to supply you with it."
21 May 2019, 9:37pm
Maul enters the room expecting Shin to be angry with him for the altercation earlier. He is pleasantly surprised that Theodore is the one in trouble.

He watches with a smirk as Theodore severs his own finger. His smirk melts away as he thinks back to when he nearly lost his pinkie a few months ago.

He gives Theodore a dirty look as he runs out of the room and looks back to Shin.

"Thank you sir, for everything. With the help that your doctor gave me and you giving me a clean slate, well, I can't think of anything more to ask for. I have all the equipment I should need back home and with this tracker business sorted, it should be easier than ever to return home and plan my next move. The only thing I can think to ask for, is a safe place to stay after all of this is finished with The Corporation. Hopefully I can sort this out peacefully but on the off chance that things don't end well, I may need a place to lie low afterwards."
21 May 2019, 10:16pm
Shin listens to Maul's words.

"As you wish, I will make sure that you are always welcome in Hondo City. I am sure that my successor will also honour the agreement."

Shin looks to Khelan.

"I am sure that Omikuma has already informed you about my health while she was on board The Prid. I have named her my successor and I would like you to be her Wakagashira when she takes over. Consider it the request of a dying man."

Khelan looks at Shin

" Ya sneaky bastard ye know that Ah cannae refuse that request so Ah will honour it but Ah made a promise tae Maul here that Ah'll see this thing wi him through tae the end. Once that's done wi then Ah'll take ma place at Omi's side."

Shin nods. "I would have it no other way. Good luck gentlemen."

Khelan bows to Shin "Dōmo arigatō Yodama san"

He turns and walks out of the office.

"OK mate, let's go take doon some narco peddlin scumbags"
21 May 2019, 11:02pm
Maul quickly bows to Shin. "Domo..uh, Thank you sir. Thank you."

He turns and follows Khelan out of the office and smirks.

"Well I guess that solves the mystery of the disappearing Omi."

Maul reaches back and grabs the GPS device out of his backpack. He hands it to Khelan while he changes back into his boots.

"So, since The Corporation is tracking this thing now, I figure it's best to deal with this first. After that I can go home and load up on some of the gear I have stashed in my apartment. That is, if it's all still there. I also need to get in touch with Vega. She may be using me but she is the only one who has the information I need."

He slides his boots on and takes the device back from Khelan. He then leans against the wall with his arms crossed and smiles.

"Well, I have no idea what a "Wakagashira" is but it sounds pretty important. I'm just glad you get to come back here and be with Omi. You deserve that much after all of this shit."
21 May 2019, 11:28pm
Khelan quickly changes into his boots and heads outside.

"Roughly translatid it means Furst Lieutenant. In order words the only person Ah'll answer tae is Omi. As far as Ah know nae gaijin has ever held a rank like that afore. It's no a joab Ah wantid but Shin's a crafty auld bastard an he knew fine well that Ah widnae turn doon the request of a dyin man."

He looks at Maul

"Ye know if yer goin tae be spending a bit of time here aifter this is over, ye might wanna y'know learn a bit aboot the culture and some of the lingo incase ye inadvertently call someone a goat fucker oar something."

He heads back towards the hanger bays and towards the Prid. Noting that his "high tech" intrusion detector hadn't been disturbed.

"Right, get yer gear stowed and get intae yer flightsuit. Ah wanna be gear up as soon as possible. Assumin there's nae surprises waiting fur us in Leo's code fur ye tae mend that is."
22 May 2019, 12:16am
Maul nods in agreement.

"Yeah, if I end up staying here I'll be sure to learn more about the culture. I just need to know I have a place to stay if things turn out bad. I'm hoping that isn't the case but it's always good to have a backup plan."

He follows Khelan onto the Prid.

"Okay, I'll go get changed and meet you back in the cockpit. The scan should be finished by now, so we'll check that and see if everything is okay."

He walks to his cabin, straps his gear down and changes back into his flight suit.

As he is leaving his cabin he stops at the mirror and looks at himself.

"Don't. Fuck. Up." He says to his reflection and then leaves the room.

Maul enters the cockpit and accesses the terminal to check the scan results.

"Hmm, nothing. I guess it really was just a fluke." He says slightly confused.

He unplugs the device from the terminal and looks over to Khelan.

"The scan shows nothing, so I guess we are good to go. I would still keep an eye out for anything weird though."
22 May 2019, 11:58pm
Khelan nods in agreement.

"Anythin weird huh? Oan this ship how cud we tell?"

"Ah mean just look at us an ex bartender turnt technerd/assassin wi mair self doubt an insecurities than yer average teenage gurl, an a Scotsman wi a short attention span who's just been made wan step away frae bein heid honcho in an organised crime syndicate?"

"OK Leo start launch procedures, it's time we were oota here"

"Unable to comply, launch procedures are currently locked" responds Leo

Khelan looks to Maul.

"Wit the actual fuck?" he asks

"Leo who or wit has locked the procedures? In fact dinnae answer that, Ah already know....."

He sighs

"Ye can come oot noo Omi"

Omi steps out from the door to the escape pods and smiles at the two of them.

"Ye really need tae stop daein that Omi. Ye coulda givin Maul here a heart attack oar something."

Omi walks across the bridge and sits down on the console between Khelan and Maul.

"I wanted to see you before you left, I'm sorry for leaving like I did earlier but I had to take care of a few things before meeting with my father."

Khelan turns to Maul.

"Yer seein her right? She's no in ma heid like number 6 wis wi Baltar right?"

Omi laughs

"I assure you that I'm real..... Or am I?" she says mischievously

She shrugs off the pack she had on her back and opens it. She reaches inside and takes out a tanto blade. She flips it around and offers the hilt to Maul.

"For you, I know you said you didn't need any more equipment but I want you to have this. It's got a mono-molecular cutting edge and will probably cut through just about anything with the possible exception of Khelan's accent. It also has a small compartment in the hilt which is completely shielded against scanning which might be useful to you."

She turns to Khelan.

"And for you lover, stop off at Ohm city in the LHS 20 system before you go to Diaguandri. One of my father's agents will contact you there."

She stands up from the console.

"Leo transfer Master Level access from Omikuma Yodama to Khelan and remove Omikuma Yodama from the invisible list"

"Acknowledged, Commander Khelan now has Master level access to my systems and Omikuma Yodama is now visible to the ships internal sensors."

"Safe journey boys, don't die on me or I'll kick your arses." she smiles and walks off the bridge and into the main elevator.

Khelan turns to Maul.

"As ah wis sayin how cud we tell if weird shit wis goin oan?"
23 May 2019, 2:20am
Maul watches as Omi leaves.

He turns back to Khelan with a surprised look on his face while still holding the blade.

"Okay, I see your point."

He unsheathes the blade and admires it before sheathing it again and strapping it around his thigh.

"That was nice of her. I think you've got a keeper on your hands, buddy."

He looks back at Khelan and smiles.

"You called me insecure a moment ago. I would say that hurt my feelings but I think that would just solidify the point you were trying to make. So, I'm just going to shut up." He says in a semi-serious tone while trying to hold back his laughter.

"Anyway, I'm ready when you are. I'm itching to see my apartment again."

He thinks for a moment.

"I wonder if that pizza I ordered is still on the counter? I think I threw it away. At least I hope I did. Jesus, could you imagine the smell?" He says with a disgusted face.
23 May 2019, 11:45pm
Khelan smiles at Maul.

"Aye mate, that it would, but dinnae let it bother ye, Ah still love ye."

Khelan checks the various displays indicating the condition of the ships systems.

"Green across the board, Leo begin auto launch sequence."

"Acknowledged commander, Automatic launch engaged." responds Leo and the hydraulic rams under the hanger start moving the massive bulk of the Anaconda to launch position.

The Prid of Ankh-Morpork lifts gracefully off the landing pad and takes up its position in the queue to leave station. After a brief pause it slides out through the mailslot and into the darkness of space.

"Flight control to Anaconda Whiskey Tango Foxtrot, you are clear to proceed under your own navigation Anzen'na tabi"

Khelan flicks on the comms system.

"Anaconda Whisky Tango Foxtrot to Flight control, Dōmo arigatō control I'll see you again soon."

"Leo calculate the best route tae LHS 20 and engage Frameshift."

"Acknowledged commander route plotted, estimated flight time 24 hours."

The Prid lines up with the first system on the journey and jumps to witchspace.
24 May 2019, 4:35am
After a few moments of silence Maul turns to Khelan.

"So, are you feeling any bit nervous about this "Wakagashira" stuff? It seems quiet the leap from hauling cargo around the galaxy."

He nods.

"Still, I think Shin chose the right people to run things after he is gone. With you two running things, I have no doubt that the Black Dragon Society will prosper like never before. That Omi seems to have a good head on her shoulders and I'm sure you'll find some way to be helpful."

Maul laughs.

"Nah but seriously, you guys will make a great team."

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