Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


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1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

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People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

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We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

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In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
26 Nov 2016, 3:37am
"Hold it!!!" Lilith called before the man stepped out. She had used 'Micahs' moment of inattention pressing the button, to draw her gun and conceal it behind her. Now that the elevator had reached it's stop, she was testing her theory. Pressing the barrel into the small of his back she spoke slowly and deliberately.

"A man, fitting your description, was sat at one of the tables at those cafes over there. That same man shared a lift down to the docks with me." She wasn't being friendly anymore. "Close the door, and hit the emergency switch. We're having a chat..."
26 Nov 2016, 3:47am
Isaiah stuck his hand out to the side slowly, deliberately, showing he had no weapon in his hand. He did as she asked, sticking his other hand out to the side. He mentally chided himself for being careless and turning away from her; he'd let his guard down too much.

You've been out of the game too long.

"Alright. What do you want to know?"
26 Nov 2016, 3:56am
"Stay facing the door." Lilith instructed.

"Why are you following me, what do you know about me and since you obviously lied about just arriving here, who are you really?" She demanded, pushing the barrel into his spine to emphasise her questions. Given recent events, she had her suspiscions, but it would be better to have them confirmed.
26 Nov 2016, 4:10am
"I can see you on the lift cam. Do you want me to notify the authorities? Look left for yes, right for no." Bloodfeather instructed him.

Isaiah looked over his right shoulder, back at Lilith. He narrowed his eyes slightly, unsure of what to say at first.

"Hope you know what you're doing," Bloodfeather admonished.

"Isn't it obvious who I am?" he said, his tone steady and calm. "You're wanted here. Though I'm not exactly sure why. I can understand the systems you have existing bounties in, but here? I'm at a loss. Some doctor put a bounty out on you. Doctor Glaboski or something or other."

He turned to look straight ahead again, his voice lowering. "You're a little new to this whole 'life of crime' thing, aren't you? Not very subtle. You stand out like a Fed tourist in Achenar."
26 Nov 2016, 4:20am
"Figures... You saw an upfront payment and decided it didn't matter what you were getting into." Lilith snorted, "I guess that makes you new to the whole 'bounty hunting' thing."

She grinned to herself at her turning of his statement back onto him.

"I may stand out, but that's how I like it. That way, the only people that approach me are either after something, or after me." She added, "I'm guessing Glaboski had his reasons for the bounty or did you decide not to ask?"

She took a step back, still keeping her gun pointed at him but no longer pressing it into his vertebrae.
26 Nov 2016, 4:40am
"You'd be mistaken. I've been doing this for years. I just haven't been in the game for a while." He shrugged. "But fair's fair. I actually did come here to unwind. Hunting a criminal wasn't on my list of things to do to de-stress, but here I am." He kept his hands outstretched, still facing forward.

"I have my questions about Glaboski. The upfront payment caught my attention, but not for the reason you'd think. Everyone I deal with usually holds the payment until I complete the contract. Only the truly desperate pay up front. He gave me some details, said you'd been injured in the bar after a grenade went off. They were patching you up, you went crazy - supposedly - and tried to kill someone." He paused, looking back over his shoulder at her. "I'm not saying I'm here to help you - that'd be a lie and I generally try to avoid the practice if my life doesn't depend on it. But I know something doesn't seem right about Glaboski, and I know any other bounty hunter would have shot you dead in the corridor."
26 Nov 2016, 5:12am
Lilith paused for a moment, considering what had just been said.

"I'm not a criminal. Certain governments just don't like how I've been going about.... My business." She stated matter of factly. *No need to go into detail Lilith.*

"I was injured, and shot actually, but fortunately for me and unfortunately for him, Glaboski is a damn good surgeon. Crazy? I'll let you judge that, but rest assured the only people I've killed, have deserved it." She exhaled slowly and audibly before turning to her next point.

"You're right, any other bounty hunter would have just shot me. But the fine Doctor wouldn't appreciate that too much. I have something of his, and he needs to know he's got it back. The only way he'll know, is by catching me alive...." She let that hang in the air for a moment then continued.

"Nonetheless, you didn't shoot me so," she reholstered her gun with an audible click, "I won't shoot you. That puts us on almost even footing. You can open the door now, but you're still staying in front of me where I can see you..."
26 Nov 2016, 5:24am
He thumbed the button to open the lift doors, lowering his hands to his sides. "Fair enough." He stepped off the lift and out into the entertainment district, tucking his hands into his trouser pockets."If we're going to be hanging around for a few hours while your ship is fixed, then let's at least get something to drink. I'd like to at least get a good buzz going like I was hoping to do earlier."

He stopped, turned to her. "Oh yeah. Neglected to mention that bit. I'm not working alone. Already know where you've parked your Python at."
26 Nov 2016, 5:42am
*Shit...* Lilith thought, *I really need to get that shitty name changed...*

"InGaBa... Walk.... Now..." She growled as she flipped her trench coat open to reveal her gun, the implied threat quite clear, "I'm already wanted, what's another body to me?"

In her head, Lilith had already considered many ways to dispose of this man. His attitude was grating on her and the fact he apparently wasn't alone didn't serve as endearment in the slightest.

"As for your buzz," She practically spat the word, "Next time check your priorities before chasing money like a common destitute."
>Continued in The Galactic Bar<


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26 Nov 2016, 5:56am
"Lady, if you knew my story..." He bit his tongue, shaking his head.

"She's a real charmer, ain't she?" Bloodfeather said, sounding amused. "Your type of girl. Though if my understanding of human attraction is accurate, Cait would be very angry if you scorned her." There was a pause. "I'm going to keep an eye on things. Just keep doing as she asks and if she looks like she's going to put you down, I'll alert the authorities."

Isaiah gave a slight nod of the head as they continued towards InGaBa.
26 Nov 2016, 2:33pm
"Hm, wonder what those two by the lift had in common.  Or not in common.  Or just to fight about."

Phisto put the observation out of his mind, and continued walking around the docks in the general direction of the Pilot's Market.

"Well, Phisto, you've got nothing to do and nothing to really see here.  Be a shame if you returned with nothing to show for it." Several dockworkers glanced up from their tasks, wondering who this aimless pilot might have been talking to. "Oye, you there, Pilots Market?"  The dockworker lifted an arm, pointing to a sign above their  heads flashing brightly the information required.  "Right.  Sorry, mind was elsewhere as per usual."

The brisk pace resumed.


Last edit: 26 Nov 2016, 3:19pm
26 Nov 2016, 5:50pm
A bulky type 9 jumped out of super-cruise and slowly started to make its way towards the station, deliberately keeping under the speed limit.

"That's right, keep her below a hundred. We get scanned and it'll be all over," Cartlidge said, standing behind the pilot's seat as Ten carefully maneuvered the ship towards the mail slot. "Hopefully they won't expect a wanted bounty hunter to show up in a ship like this."

"I hope I'll be able to fly this thing back out again when we leave," Ten replied as she searched for our designated landing pad. The pair had only been gone for a short while, but Cartlidge needed to come back and retrieve the ship he had left behind. If he waited any longer, the station might ship the Paladin off to who knows where, or just sell it off entirely.

"You'll be fine. Leaving's the easy part. Do you remember the plan?" Cartlidge asked.

"Of course. We figure out if the ship has been moved, I'll disable the restraints while you remove the guards, I'll fly the Merchant back out while you take the Paladin," the cyborg replied, freeing herself from the pilot's seat. Cartlidge handed her a datapad and she began to work. "There is an 84 percent chance that if I am discovered they will trace the tap in their system back to here. Where do you think is the safest place we can go?"

Cartlidge thought for a moment as the pair exited the ship and made their way into the station proper. "The bar is probably our best bet. As far as I can tell there is an unspoken rule there about causing trouble, so hopefully no one will bother us. What's our collective bounty?"

Ten thought for a moment, or at least appeared to do so. "230 thousand between the two of us."

Cartlidge felt a chill run down his spine at the sound of the shockingly high number. "Well, like I said, hopefully no one will bother us."
28 Nov 2016, 4:15am
Making his way to the Pilot's Market, the top of Phisto's peripheral vision caught an enormous, dark shape. His brain incorporated it's accompanying roar just soon enough to inspire some mild cursing.,

"Sajuuk, those fecking Type 9s." Instinctively ducking, "And why do I always duck. Yes, because if one ever did pancake you that would certainly do a world of good." Turning the corner, a din of voices and hurried, ragged commerce overtook his previous annoyance.

"Excellent," clasping his hands together, "surely I can find some trinket of interest. She always likes trinkets, especially interesting ones."
28 Nov 2016, 1:41pm
Arriving at the Pilot's Market, Phisto made a quick lap through the kiosks, seeking the most bored looking person he could find.

"Ahoy!  You there!"

"Hmm?  Me?"

"Yes, you sir!  I have traveled many light years to parlay with you this day."

"Par... what?"

Phisto jokingly sighed, "I have money.  You have things.  I wish to exchange money for at least one thing."

Clearly paying attention now, the merchant sat up straight in their chair, smoothing their greasy hair back over their scalp with an equally greasy hand, "We've got the finest keepsakes and souvenirs you could possibly want, sir!  Anything specific you had in mind?  Gift for yourself?  Family?  A special someone, perhaps?"

Excitedly, Phisto's eyes darted across the inventory strewn about the ramshackle kiosk, "Show me everything!"


Last edit: 28 Nov 2016, 1:52pm
28 Nov 2016, 4:57pm
The lift stopped, and Isaiah glanced up as the doors opened. He didn't want to agitate Lilith further, so he kept his remaining thoughts to himself.

I don't want help, I don't need help... I used to say the same thing too.

Sometimes there was no use in convincing someone of something they'd have to learn for themselves. 

He gestured to the open passageway in front of them, pushing off the back wall quietly. "We should get going, I'll need some time to compose a message to Glaboski."

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