Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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Other Notes:
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15 Apr 2017, 1:45am
Bryan had exited the docking supervisor's office and had stopped in the middle of the street to gawk at the commotion above. 

"what on earth.......?" he trailed off.

Maybe the station orphan beggars managed to steal the access codes off of a drunken pilot and decided to have a joy ride or something?

Or maybe it's just an idiot he mused although he knew it took a lot of work to get an Anaconda so that was unlikely.

Bryan watched as the SLF clanked around the station interior like some kind of ungraceful interpretive dancer in an enclosed space portraying 'conflict'

He watched as a second vessel a Federal Gunship came to the rescue of the flailing Taipan and whizzed out the mail slot. Maybe it actually is an idiot. with the distraction gone from sight, Bryan was jerked back to his train of thought. Bryan had just been to see the docking supervisor to extend his hanger reservation for another day and to leave a deposit in case it needed to extend to a long term lease.

He looked down at the cartridges that were still in his arms from the bar earlier. "right. time to leave you back at the ship before I forget AGAIN and end up carrying you around all day." Bryan had a tendency to talk to inanimate objects from time to time when no one was around. He couldn't tell if it was a quirk or if it was because he spent so much time in deep space. He'd studied psychology when he was younger as an extra subject in flight school and was currently half seriously trying to assess whether he had crossed the line between quirk and disorder. He shrugged it off as paranoia. 

As he made his way back to his dock he contemplated the offer Leif had made. If Bryan could manage to prevent the deal falling through it could be mildly beneficial to both parties. It would help him get back on his feet so to speak and Leif would be able to have him take even more high-value passengers on a second tour potentially doubling profits.
He must remember to use that. it was his best selling point for this deal.

Bryan made a mental note to call his trading network contacts before he decided to accept to tell them to keep things running till he returns. He stopped mid-thought as he realised he had forgotten to get Leif's ship name or dock no. off of him, he'd need to send him a message on ship comms to find out before he could track him down.
15 Apr 2017, 3:05am
Turning his head at Leif, he mulled over the offer. He'd already been in Marcus' ship today, which made him anxious enough. Smiling, he nodded at Leif, hoping he'd understand.

"Um, don't take this the wrong way, but I'm usually a bit antsy about going into another person's ship. Old habits, and all that. I'd like to see it, though. Lead the way?"
15 Apr 2017, 1:46pm
Leif gave back a confused look at the response.

"Do you might explain that a bit further? I don't understand that, as my ship is something I'm proud of," he started as he gestured into the direction of his ship, "and I'm not afraid to show it. It's a passenger ship, after all, and there haven been a lot of people on it. It's made for other people aboard."
15 Apr 2017, 2:22pm
Phisto nodded in response, smiling at Leif,

"Passenger ships are meant for passengers, no doubt.  But for me, my ship is not just my home but a sanctuary.  I just don't know you well enough yet to go in yours," his smile turned up into a jocular grin, "Like they say... it's not you, it's me."

Following Leif, he continued,

"Besides, I'd rather get a good look at the outside.  Usually just get a solid gander at their engine exhaust," he chuckled.
15 Apr 2017, 3:03pm
"So you're just caring about the outsides, but not the inner values?" Leif chuckled.

"But I won't bring you a snack outside." He winked.
15 Apr 2017, 3:46pm
Phisto's eyebrows drooped along with his face as he looked down at his stomach.  Smoothing out his shirt and patting himself on the belly, he moved his face back up and cracked a smile,

"That's fine. Even on vacation, I should watch my figure a little bit.  How long you've been flying this thing, anyway?  If you told me, I've forgotten."
15 Apr 2017, 4:22pm
"Just two weeks. My last exploration trip paid the most of it, and people go crazy about an Elite Explorer flying them."

Leif looked directly into Phisto's eyes.

"You haven't told me what you're flying. And for how long, that it grew so personal to you?"
15 Apr 2017, 7:58pm
"I own a few ships, but my main is a Fer-De-Lance.  Been flying that for about... two years now?  As far as her importance, well, the ship itself is meaningful of course but it's more just how I was raised.  Respect your ship, treat it like an extension of yourself.  Considering the lives we lead as pilots, we're nothing without them.  They are in so many ways us."

His pace slowed slightly, his neck arching back and around as he took in all the different ships moving around the Citi Gateway's docks.

"I know most don't see it this way, but going in someone else's ship?  Kind of an intimate thing."


Last edit: 15 Apr 2017, 8:05pm
15 Apr 2017, 9:31pm
Leif turned to Phisto, continuing to walk sideways.

"Ah. I grew up with ships being not much more than tools. Used to get from one place to another, to prevent others to do so and prevent others from preventing," he let it fade. "You know, what I mean."

Clearing a narrow path through a group of people, he continued, "See, I grew up knowing about spaceships, but never got near one until I was sixteen. But then," he chuckled, "it became really intimate, in your words. I learned ship mechanic in the local space station. Got all the Eagles and Vipers from the security force to work on. This also helped me to my piloting skill. Test flights around the station, hey, I even flew down through the valleys on the outside of the station."

He stopped in front of a closed hangar door.

"And considering where I've come from," as he spoke, he opened the door, "it was quite a path I went."

Leif stepped into the hangar, where the Moto Meli was docked, standing with its high raising back fins over the huge engine exhausts to the two, gesturing Phisto in.



Last edit: 15 Apr 2017, 10:07pm
15 Apr 2017, 9:59pm
Following Leif into the hangar, he gazed up and across the enormous ship.  His jaw went slack as he took in the sight.  He'd never seen a Beluga up close in person.  They were much more impressive this way.

"And I even like the color..." trailing off, he gave the ship a another once over, "A path, huh?  Tell me a little about it."
15 Apr 2017, 10:20pm
"Ah, where should I start?"

Leif scratched the back of his head.

"So, umm, I got ship mechanic on the space station, worked there for two years and some bit, put money aside and bought an old Sidewinder. Before I was allowed to head out, I had to get a licence, but given my experience with the ships 'twas easy." He shrugged. "What then followed was pretty boring, earned my living by trading, was hard at the beginning and pirates wanted me now and then, but luckily always made it out alive."

He took a breath, just as he wanted to speak on, but kept silence instead for some seconds. Then he turned his head at Phisto.

"From there it gets quite a story. Are you sure you don't want to get inside? When I tell you my entire story here outside your feet are gone by the time I finish." He laughed.
15 Apr 2017, 10:43pm
Phisto raised an eyebrow at Leif, looking back up at his ship.  Without looking at Leif, his tone turned level, serious,

"You keep asking if I want to go in there.  Man of my background, having told you what he has, your insistence might make him a bit nervous."

Shifting his eyes like lightning back in Leif's direction, they narrowed.
15 Apr 2017, 11:22pm
Leif got nervous at Phisto's look, and put on a smile to cover it.

"It's cool man, I don't mean no harm," he stammered, intimidated, and looked away, back to the ship.

He took a good breath, closed his eyes and felt the air leaving his lung again. Then he opened his eyes and turned back to Phisto.

"See, I Invite you to get aboard. It'll be just fine if you say no."

After another breath, he continued: "You take ships that personal, okay, but after all, this is my ship, my private zone, so to say. I'd really appreciate if you came aboard. I haven't had that company for quite some time."
15 Apr 2017, 11:27pm
The right side of Phisto's mouth cracked up into a slight grin while his eyes remained fiery,

"Already declined, far as my reckoning. If you need that specific word, then fine. No."

He clenched his hand into a fist, then released it, breathing out in sync with his relaxing hand. The fire in his eyes dimmed and his grin grew on the other side of his face.

"Or are you just hitting on me?" he laughed.
15 Apr 2017, 11:43pm
"Oh, you just seem like a nice guy," Leif laughed along, "You got stories to tell, and you listen to mine, I didn't see a problem there."

Leif came back to a more serious tone.

"Would you still like to hear that story?"

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