Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
11 Aug 2020, 4:58pm
Ao heard the scream and before his mind had caught up, his reflexes had taken over, turning on his heel and forcing his way past Amata and Jason back into the cupboard...

August Arquette
"THAT'S THEM! REMEMBER I WANT THE CAPTAIN AND THE YOUNG DOCTOR ALIVE! AND UNHARMED! KILL THE REST!"


Why? Why was he here?! And what did he want with the doctor? how had the demon that had stalked Ao's nightmare for years come be tangled in this web?!

Ao stepped out into the corridor blocking the advance of the attackers.

August skidded to a halt, sword raised...

"Guards, leave this one to me, as soon as there is an opening, get the girl! Finally! you filthy slave scum! Finally grown a backbone to face me have you?!" August growled, his white coat, similar to that of Ao's, dripping blood from the cuff of the hand holding the rapier to the floor.

"You're the one who relies on sabotage and dirty tricks to win the day August, always have, always will..." Ao replied, gritting his teeth.
This was bad! very bad! That armour was top of the line, designed to resist against even the strongest of hand held weaponry, and in the tight confines of the corridor, a Katana was practically useless, relying on heavy, wide slashes, whereas the rapier, was far more suited to the jabs and lunges required.

"Why are you after the doctor August?!"

August smiled;
"I see you are still taking pity and putting lives on the line for complete strangers that you know NOTHING! about! Now, be a good little slave, lay down your weapons, and stand aside..."

"If you want to get to them August, you will have to go through me! I will not let you spill another drop of blood while I still breath!"
Ao drew his Katana, the blade glinting in the light, taking up a lunging stance, feet wide, sword, cutting edge up level with his eyes.
He lunged, the thrusters in his armour propelling him forward, burning holes through his jacket.

With a flick of his wrist August swatted the blade away and firmly planted a left hook with an armoured fist across Ao's jaw crashing him against the wall.

Ao retaliated lashing out with the hilt of his blade catching August in the throat, he stepped back into the corridor between August and the cupboard, he brought the Katana up high over his head, and cut straight down with a heavy two handed strike.

August...smiled...

August raised his arm over his head...the blade connected...and shattered...

Ao, eyes wide in alarm, mouth agape leapt back, but too late, once more August's fist connected with Ao's jaw sending him sprawling to the floor.

Ao rolled back to his feet, turned and threw the broken sword into the maintenance area, that clattered to the floor at Nery's feet, and began to run back towards them....

"RUN! GET THAT TO THE WOLVES! THEY'LL HELP YOU!" Ao yelled, panic filling his voice, his face contorted with pure fear.
August screamed something behind him but Ao couldn't hear over the pounding in his ears.
A bullet ripped through his side...Ao cried out and hit the floor as two of the armoured figures ran past him...the world seemed to slow down...Ao clutching his side in agony drew his revolver, and fired three shots, one into the backs of a knee of each of the figures, the two fell forwards sprawling into a heap inside the maintenance corridor dropping their weapons....
The third hit the locking panel of the access hatch...a sired sounded, Ao had just enough time to yell;
"RUN YOU FOOLS!" before the door slammed closed...and and the damaged lock deadlocked the door.
13 Aug 2020, 3:06pm
Amata watched the scene which just unfolded in disbelief before turning to Jason. "Remind me to buy a sidearm once we are at my place." She then turns towards Nerys again. "Where is the nearest cart? Thanks to your 'friend' insisting on this 'lone-wolf'-stunt we just lost almost all of our advantages, the last one remaining is they don't know about my ship yet. And now that one of those guys saw me we're running out on time on that one as well." She then mumbles to herself. "Next time I meet this idiot I'll make sure he regrets being this pig-headed."
16 Aug 2020, 3:59pm
The best Jason could manage was some covering fire for Ao. His revolver barked a few times before the other made his "valiant" charge towards their pursuers, and Jason grimaced as he followed Amata and Nerys through the door. The sound of the deadlock behind him made him shake his head.

"A shopping trip sounds like just the sort of thing we'll need," he said to Amata as he checked his weapon. Two shots left. He had one reload with him, as he tried to be prepared for emergencies when he was off-ship, but hadn't expected quite this much activity.

He looks to Nerys, also wanting to know where the nearest cart is. The sooner they were off this station, the better.
16 Aug 2020, 6:43pm
16 Aug 2020, 10:44pm
Nerys was shocked.

Who were those assailants? Why were they hunting her? And how had they been able to discover their position so soon and so precisely?

She looked at the sealed panel. Ao was on the other side, probably injured, if not worse. He knew those people. And he had attacked them to allow her to escape.

Why? Why is everyone looking for me? Is it because of something my father did?

"Cart" she mumbled, almost automatically. "Nearest cart. Yes". Her fingers danced on their own on the tablet, recalling the map and the codes sent by Prewalski. "It should be..." She followed the corridor for some meters. "Yes. Here".

Automatic Freight Transport System. Access to tubes is strictly prohibited. Danger of death!

The service keyboard accepted the override codes, and the maintenance door opened to reveal a circular, dark tunnel, less than two meters in diameter, with rails inside.

Override accepted said the screen. Freight carts #423, #763 and #345 arriving in 42 seconds.

From the tunnel, a woosh of air announced that something was actually arriving. The first cart braked hard in front of the panel, with two others right behind it. It was a metallic cylinder on wheels ("just slightly bigger than a coffin" Nerys thought), definitely not suitable for people with claustrophobia. Normally the loading and unloading of the goods was automated, but there was of course a manual door, just wide enough to allow a man to crawl inside.

"The carts are programmed to go directly to the docks" Nerys said. "But... what if someone is waiting for us at the other end?"
16 Aug 2020, 11:02pm
"Can they send us directly to the dock the Astarte is currently in or only into the general docking area?" Amata asked while inspecting the carts. "And since Jason is the only one left with a weapon I guess he goes first to secure the hangar if needed, then me so I can open the Astarte's airlock and then you. This should be the fastest method to get us onto my ship."
16 Aug 2020, 11:30pm
Despite the fact that he was still in the tanktop and utility trousers he'd been wearing for ship maintenance before everything happened, Jason couldn't help but feel a little exposed now that he was the only armed member remaining in the party. He was very much missing wearing the Remlok hanging in the Astarte, to say nothing of his grandfather's flight jacket. Still, at least he'd had the forethought to carry a weapon with him despite the seemingly mundane task of some material trading and engine tweaking.

"I agree," was what Jason said, rubbing the back of his neck and hoping that maybe, just maybe, some part of this whole getaway plan might finally go right.
17 Aug 2020, 12:33pm
Amata Lirein"Can they send us directly to the dock the Astarte is currently in or only into the general docking area?" Amata asked while inspecting the carts.


"Not sure..." Nerys said while checking the map. There were dozens of "train stops" associated with automated storage rooms, designed to move goods with maximum efficiency. "The docks are scattered over the entire internal surface of the station, so probably... Oh, yes, here it is. There is a storage room for each large landing pad and another one for each couple of medium and small pads. Tell me the pad number and I'll should be able to send us to the nearest one".
17 Aug 2020, 12:44pm
Amata nods. "Good. The Astarte is parked on pad 25, it's one of the medium ones. The closer you can get us, the better."
17 Aug 2020, 1:10pm
"Here"

Nerys typed a code in the pad. "Substation 25... selected. They take the number from the corresponding medium pad. The trip should take only three minutes."

A yellow warning started to flash on the tablet screen. "We cannot keep the carts stopped for too long" Nerys read. "Let's hope that they are waiting for us at the wrong pad..."
17 Aug 2020, 1:24pm
Amata turns towards Jason. "Well, we better hurry then. You first."
17 Aug 2020, 7:54pm
18 Aug 2020, 8:44pm
Jason nodded. He moved ahead of the others, keeping his hand near his sidearm but leaving it in the holster. There was no need to be overly provocative unless it was necessary. He took his place on the lead cart, waited for the ladies to mount theirs, and they set out on their fast and, hopefully, peaceful journey to Amata's waiting ship.

Last edit: 19 Aug 2020, 4:36pm

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