Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
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We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

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Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

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We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

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People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
05 Sep 2020, 9:57pm
Amata Lirein"Wait a second... Isn't that the guy that assaulted us in that hotel?" She moved to the side so Jason could take a look as well. "Why the hell is he suddenly working together with the man who just a few moments ago shot him in the leg? Has he been working for him all along, leading them right us?"


Nerys swallowed hard. Had been a trick all along? Amata was right to be worried, but...

"He had had many better opportunities to betray us" she said, dubious. "And if this is a trap, it seems... well, too much bloody... but I am no expert of ambushes" she added quickly, blushing.
06 Sep 2020, 12:09pm
Ao and August had begun to gain ground, slowly pushing away from pad 25 and towards the large pad where the Yamato was currently under siege from within.
Progress was slow, but the two had now made it level with the door to the maintaince tunnels.
Ao placed his back against the support pillar and discarded the empty rifle breathing heavily.
Even with Leo blocking his pain receptors and pumping him full of adrenaline, the fight was taking it's toll.
If the doctor, jason and Amata didn't arrive soon he and August would have no choice but to withdraw, or be killed holding the street.
The door hissed open a few inches and faintly over the gunfire voices could be heared.
Ao glanced in and saw Nerys looking back.
"Glad you could join us doctor, everyone else ok?"

"AO!" August called, getting Ao's attentiom before kicking and handgun towards him, a silver plated affair with a mahogny grip, in the now near ancient but still wildly popular style of the 1911 Longslide.
It clattered across the deck and came to stop at Ao's feet, he picked it up, heavy and solid the .45 was a solid choice for personal defence.
He dropped the mag to check the ammo, then slammed it home and checked the chamber, full.
"Doctor you guys need to move now! We can't hold them back much longer"
He spotted Amata glancing from August to Ao, rightly suspicious of how they had found themselves fighting side by side when not long nefore they had tried to kill eachother
"I'll explain later, all that's important right now is that he's on our side"

Ao leaned out of cover, spinning on his heel, gun in his dominant left hand and fired four shots, each, with Leo's assistance of course, finding their targets, and the three armoured figures and one of the huntsmen hit the floor.

Ao darted back to cover as more bullets whistled past.
"If you guys are going now would be a very good time leave!"
06 Sep 2020, 5:15pm
As soon as JB entered the second airlock, an array of strange feelings got to him. Something was off ... For whatever reason he just couldn't shake of that primal feeling of being watched. With a corner of his eye he caught an almost motionless figure of a man standing right next to him. Smuggler carefully turned his head to the left side. There indeed stood a man,  resting his back against the wall. He was of average height, somewhat athletic posture, arms crosed and, in open defiance of station regulations, holding a lit cigarette in his right hand.

-"You."

The man finally spoke, as soon as he caught JB looking at him.

-"Where did you get those?"

He spoke again, this time pointing his finger at the face of his interlocutor.


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06 Sep 2020, 7:09pm
JB stopped. Without taking his eyes off the stranger he checked his periphery to make sure they were alone.

"My scars?" asked JB through gritted teeth. "They're from asking nosey questions in dark hangers."

JB wasn't touchy about his scars... but he was touchy about his privacy. He checked the guy over, it was dark in the docks and he couldn't see any other clues to his identity. JB may have been caught off guard but, if it was just the two of them, he felt he could handle the situation. He unclenched his fists... it's never a friendly way to start a conversation.

"Do we know each other, mate?" JB asked the cigarette smoking man.
07 Sep 2020, 7:52am
Upon hearing the JB's banter, a wide grin appeared on the Batu's face, followed by a chuckle.

-"Nah, not really. Does it matter?" He responded.
-"Anyway, why not just slap some progenitor-cell-gel on them? I'm sure you can afford it. Ain't that Keelback yours?"

The man leaned forward to get a full view of the docking area, and nodded with his head at the direction of what he presumed was JB's starship. This small gesture was enough to bring the man's face into the light, revealing his unusual, if not exotic, appearence, and a scar, just as ugly as JB's one, running across the right side of his face.
07 Sep 2020, 12:06pm
"Yeah, she's mine," replied JB, nodding in the direction of The Cuckoo. He noticed the stranger was sporting a large scar along his face too and continued; "Her paintwork's a little battered... but sometimes you need to carry that damage as a reminder of what you've been through." JB hoped the metaphor answered the stranger's other question.
"So what are you flying?"
07 Sep 2020, 5:51pm
Batu nodded in confirmation upon hearing the anegdote about the paintwork. The grin disappeared as quickly as it came to be, and now, his eyes were radiating a dose of understanding and respect.

-"I fly what royalty wants me to fly, like the work of art over there." Batu responded sarcasticly, and pointed his finger at the Imperial Courier, the Seraph, latched to pad number three, still in process of refueling, which was extended drastically due to the fact that the ground crew was unusually slow and carefull with their operations. Whoever owned that ship was close here somewhere, and a single scratch on the paintwork would bring a ruined shift to the culprit, if not a death sentence outright.

-"But, I've finally managed to piece together something of my own. Found a bargain deal for a Chieftain." He continued. "Not that there's anything wrong with the fancy-pants, that ride ain't pure looks and nothin'. You'd be surprised to see the s*it I managed to pull off in one of these. It's just.. not mine. I'm looking up to start something up on my own. You get the idea?"


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07 Sep 2020, 7:56pm
JB knew exactly what it was like to start something up, he helped his organisation start from the ground up... hell, he was still in the process of growing it's operations.
Couriers and Chieftans don't come cheap so this guy must be doing something right. If the stranger was starting something up himself then maybe they could be mutually useful.

"The name's JB, by the way," he started, "So what line of work are you getting in to? Trade? Bounties? Something a little more... felonious?"
07 Sep 2020, 9:36pm
Nerys Nymei
Nerys swallowed hard. Had been a trick all along? Amata was right to be worried, but...

"He had had many better opportunities to betray us" she said, dubious. "And if this is a trap, it seems... well, too much bloody... but I am no expert of ambushes" she added quickly, blushing.


Jason shook his head.

"If it's a trap, their chance to snap it shut on us is really small. We're close enough that we can sprint to the Astarte." He raised his revolver and thumbed off the safety. "Go. I'll cover you."
07 Sep 2020, 11:43pm
Amata nodded. "You're right. Besides, they seem to move away from the Astarte right now, not towards it. I guess this is our best chance." She opened the door completly and ran towards the forward landing gear, taking cover behind it. She quickly entered her access code and waited for the ship's lift to decend before jumping onto it, trying to take cover behind the small guardrails on either side of the lift, however little they had to offer while waiting for the others.
08 Sep 2020, 8:11am
-"Felonious?" Batu responded, faking shocked expression as well as he could. "What makes you think I'm into that kind of thing? Don't I look like a model citizen for you?" The grin reapeared on the pilot's face. "Seriously though, my line of work? Well.. that depands on whose askin', and what does he have to offer." Stranger moved a cigarette from his hand and unceremoniously placed it in his mouth, holding it with his teeth. His right hand, now free of obstructions, has been given to the JB for a hand shake.

-"Call me Batu."
08 Sep 2020, 10:57pm
JB shook Batu's hand.

The sound of gunshots could be heard in nearby hangers, they were away from where JB and Batu were talking but it was attracting a lot of attention from the station security.

"Look, I've got some work I might be able to push your way if you're interested, but it's getting a little noisy out here... do you drink?"
09 Sep 2020, 8:37am
-"I am, and I do, but..."

Batu paused for a second to grab and unsecure his side arm.

-"It looks like I have work to do."

Pilot reached for something in his pocked with his other arm. A portable terminal.

-"Here, take this, and gimmie' a holla when things tone down a bit."

Batu said, and tossed the device immedietely to JB. Not making sure his future contact caught it, the pilot turned around, spitted out his cigarette on the floor, crushed it with his boot, and then rushed trough the exit as soon as the blast doors were open wide enough to allow him to slip trough.
09 Sep 2020, 12:16pm
JB caught the device and slipped it into his pocket. He watched Batu as he disappeared through the doorway. The nearby fight sounded as though it was getting closer and station security were shouting down their comms as they raced along the corridors, boots clanging along the metal gangways.

JB quickly hopped up into The Cuckoo and darted towards his cabin. Once inside he started bundling job sheets into a folder, peeling off the small data chips from the paperwork. JB grabbed a large handful of smuggler's rings from a draw and stashed them into his pocket with the data chips.

JB hopped down from the back of The Cuckoo and slipped the folder of job sheets into his jacket. His plan was to incinerate them on his way towards the bar... no point risking the local law department getting their hands on them.

JB waited for the nearby patrol to dash past the hanger then slipped out himself and headed towards The Ingaba.


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11 Sep 2020, 3:31pm
Amata LireinAmata nodded. "You're right. Besides, they seem to move away from the Astarte right now, not towards it. I guess this is our best chance." She opened the door completly and ran towards the forward landing gear, taking cover behind it. She quickly entered her access code and waited for the ship's lift to decend before jumping onto it, trying to take cover behind the small guardrails on either side of the lift, however little they had to offer while waiting for the others.


When she was a teen, Nerys had played softball at school for a season or two. She was not particularly good as a catcher... those eyes allergic to eye drops gave her problems ever since... neither as a batter, but she was fast. So when the Astarte's ramp came down at a reasonable angle, Nerys ran towards it at full speed.

The difficult part was ignoring the massacre all around her. The corpses, the blood... the detached head on the floor. She was a surgeon so she had a great respect for blood. Her instinct was to stop, to help the survivors.

Instead, she ran.

And when she finally threw herself into the open access ramp, she was crying.

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