Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

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Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

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5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

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People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
24 Oct 2020, 11:48pm
JB Threepwood"Cutting your own path, mate. Nothing new to be found on old roads. I guess that's a trait you've passed on to your daughter."

The whole family unit thing was a foreign concept for JB. Parental expectations, sibling rivalries, family meals... it was the kind of thing he'd read about but had no first hand knowledge of.

"So, I take it Spud isn't the family name then?" said JB jokingly, but was too busy taking a swig of the brandy to remember to smile.


"Nah Spud is an old joke that turned into a great and fitting nick name or moniker; Ray Wittington at your service, 34th in line for some damn thing, I don't remember what. I am likely going to head back to Nouvel soon, unless you need something else done here, I will give you my personal comm code and you can hit me up, or if you just ping Major Paddock on the carrier FLS Jupiter-Langley, he can track me down anywhere at any time. Now where can we get some damn good food?"
25 Oct 2020, 1:13am
From knowing him as Spud, Ray didn't seem to fit anymore.

"Buddy, if you need to trap off then fair enough... if you fancy a bit of food then I'm more than up for that. I'm starving. There's a place here in the docks, I've seen them in other outposts, they're good for scran. You eat meat, mate?"
25 Oct 2020, 5:05am
"yes I eat meat, and right now a good plate with a steak on it fits really well."

I put my cup down, straightened up and grabbed my ship fob.

"Lets go eat"
25 Oct 2020, 12:10pm
After leaving Spud's ship, Freelancers Gift, JB lead Spud out to one of the hangers he'd passed on his way to the station.

Before reaching Hanger 14, the smell of food was already in the air. Inside was a T6 whose paint job was a mess of graffiti. JB had seen these "Diner Ships" before but mainly on the smaller outposts. They were a lifesaver where your only other option is the local "Choke 'n' Puke".

The T6 had been hollowed out, all interior units stripped out leaving only the cockpit and one large room. Similar to the other ships like this, the large room had a small kitchen and the rest of the room was all tables and chairs.

"Fancy grabbing something in here?" JB asked.
25 Oct 2020, 1:07pm
Descartes answered Raglans questions with a smile..


"Invented a first-name for my self. No-one else used it, ever.  Don't bother trying to guess." Descartes paused.  She 'd been a quiet child, happy in her own imaginary life, now long gone and half-forgotten.

"And no-charge for the trip, I was going anyway, fuel's free and there always a deal be done to cover the cost if you're not desperate for a profit."


She was comfortable not wealthy, not obsessed by making money. Enough to get by in some comfort, and no debts. That's enough. Her ships were second-hand, only acquired  one when she had enough to buy without borrowing, or selling an old one before the end of it's profitable working life..


"I was thinking of a nebula. Not too far and not likely to be targeted by pirates. Thinking of getting into the the tourist trade. Me, and a co-pilot, doubling as flight crew for two passengers on an upgraded Dolphin. Not challenging, easy money. It's all about appearance. You're a nice looking guy, I can scrub up well."

It wasn't meant be a serious job offer, something to think about.


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25 Oct 2020, 6:05pm
"Sounds like you have it worked out"

Rex wasn't too sure about working for somebody else, or becoming an interstellar bus driver.

"Let's go out there when we can and have a look at the place first, then I'll start really thinking about it"

There was a lot to consider, especially the fact that he wanted to be in control of his own destiny and make his own way. He did appreciate the offer though, and he could certainly think of worse people to work with.

"So, I've seen the crew section, want to give me the guided tour of the rest? or should I just go get my sidewinder and fly her around in the cargo hold?"

He saw a smile play across her lips and he winked cheekily.
25 Oct 2020, 7:39pm
"Wasn't really a job offer, just letting my thoughts run away.. You wouldn't want to fly around with me for long, you'll be wanting excitement, something challenging. But it's worth trying everything at least once.
"

"Not much else to see really, unless you had something particular in mind... What are your long term plans? hope you're not wanting to get out of my clutches too soon." Diverting his attention away from the hold.


'He might be more perceptive than I thought. Don't be such a cynic,' she told herself. Him, me, big ship, big space. Did I just blush-? She thought.
25 Oct 2020, 8:19pm
"Fancy grabbing something in here?" JB asked.[/quote]

"Smells good to me, thats all my spacer gut needs. You get out in the black much or are you stuck here doing your thing?" "I guess I did not ever ask if you were a pilot or not?"
25 Oct 2020, 9:03pm
JB walked up the ramp leading into the T6, picked out an empty table for him and Spud, put his jacket over the back of a chair and sat down.

"Yeah, mate, I still fly. I've got my Keeler a couple of hangers down. Although I'm out meeting folks like yourself, there's still jobs I have to do for the organisation. And, I've got to admit, I still fuckin' love smuggling."

JB smiled. "The Cuckoo, that's my ship, I'm taking her out once we've wrapped things up. Might take a quick flight back to Grandma's House, see how the guys are getting on... collect new jobs then head back over here. What are your plans for the foreseeable?"
25 Oct 2020, 11:31pm
"I'll think about it anyway"

She was right about him wanting excitement and challenges, but then what young pilot didn't?

"How long term do you want me to be? I'm working the cartographic data and a few data courier runs to get the money together for a Cobra, and once I have that I'll maybe do some cargo runs, a bit of bounty work possibly, but I'll still do the exploration when I can as well. Just until I find what I'm looking for"

He raised himself out of the seat and took a couple of small steps toward her.

"I'm in no rush to get away from your 'clutches' yet"

It was true, he was actually quite relaxed and content to be there.

"What do you do for fun on a ship this size?", He asked
26 Oct 2020, 3:43am
JB ThreepwoodJB walked up the ramp leading into the T6, picked out an empty table for him and Spud, put his jacket over the back of a chair and sat down.

"Yeah, mate, I still fly. I've got my Keeler a couple of hangers down. Although I'm out meeting folks like yourself, there's still jobs I have to do for the organisation. And, I've got to admit, I still fuckin' love smuggling."

JB smiled. "The Cuckoo, that's my ship, I'm taking her out once we've wrapped things up. Might take a quick flight back to Grandma's House, see how the guys are getting on... collect new jobs then head back over here. What are your plans for the foreseeable?"


"Ah well there is certain thrill to picking up and delivering goods that you know someone does not want to reach that destination or wants them worse then your benefactor does. I fairly like that thing myself, I try not to let political views tarnish my need to say drop off a load of heavy weapons someplace...:" I chuckled. "I am glad to know you fly, I will add you to the list for my carrier so you can hit her up when needed, after we eat, I am going to catch a few sleeps and then head off to Theta as they have some 'things' that need moved, but I will be about."

"By the way I am buying dinner."
26 Oct 2020, 10:43am
"I appreciate that, mate."

JB waved the waitress over so they could order their food.

"I'll have one of those," said JB as he pointed at a picture by the kitchen, it seemed to be some kind of meat, with some kind of veg, in some kind of bread. "And a coffee, please, black."

The waitress tapped it into her data pad then looked at Spud.


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26 Oct 2020, 4:07pm
Descartes stood up and walked around the bridge - not letting him get too close. When she offered him a place to sleep, she meant a place to sleep.  Young guy, hormones racing, he might have misunderstood her generous nature. She did feel a little vulnerable in just her 'suit, it was necessarily close-fitting after all. 'Note to self, wear something over it next time. '

"That depends what you mean by fun." She said, " This is my place to relax, get away from it all, study, meditate and this is where I usually sleep.  If I want excitement, I try and remember where I left my viper.  It's stripped for speed, no weapons, no shields, no cargo racks.  Boosted engines and thrusters, the lightest FSD I could find.  Cheap as possible,  low rebuy."


She thought of the crashes she 'd had. Once wrecking it trying to land in a hurry.


"With luck lockdown will be lifted soon, maybe has already.  Then we can take off for a little joy ride.  Push the limits.  Maybe get some rest in the meantime."  


She leaned against the edge of a flat control panel, making sure not to corner herself. Maybe one day they might get closer. Not today.


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26 Oct 2020, 5:58pm
He backed away, sensing discomfort in her movements.

"Well, fun to me means a movie, or music, and good company"

He turned and moved back toward the door.

"Hopefully you're right and we'll be able to get in the air sooner rather than later"

Some things about her were easy to read, others were almost impossible. He pondered on this as he reached the door.

Turning back he smiled softly

"Sleep well Miss Descartes, see you in a few hours"
27 Oct 2020, 5:39am
JB Threepwood"I appreciate that, mate."

JB waved the waitress over so they could order their food.

"I'll have one of those," said JB as he pointed at a picture by the kitchen, it seemed to be some kind of meat, with some kind of veg, in some kind of bread. "And a coffee, please, black."

The waitress tapped it into her data pad then looked at Spud.


"I will have the same" looking at the waitress, "there are only so many food cartridge's one can tolerate over time. I will be off to Nouvel soon, last message said 'urgent' so we must have something big to move or I would not have gotten that. Put me on your list of 'folks'. Now lets eat.

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