Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
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3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

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5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

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We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
14 Jan 2021, 12:04am
i laugh " it funny cause remember i got theta and delta that knows all sees all type shit." i jump out the hatch and take a seat on my tool box "look trade info for info ill you bout delta and theta in return u could tell me who is Myra sound fair?"as i take another drink as i pull out two cubes from my jacket.
14 Jan 2021, 2:50am
"I. . .She." i turn to face RJ. "If its so alknowing why do u need to know more?" i say trying to dodge the topic again. But RJ just just has me locked in a (youre gona tell me one way or another) kinda stare. "I Realy can talk about it" i say seeing 2 gaurds walk by on a routing loop. "If u realy want to know. Strip. .Armor, Guns, Helmet, Gloves. You can strip inside" i say opening the ramp. "Come." I lead RJ inside towards my sleeping quaters. ''You can strip here." i gesture at the bench. "And pls, dont make suden moves. She might just make a mess that i reALy dont want to clean up. And if you TRY and harm her. Ill turn you into a snack for her myself." I say while straping my custom Damacus sword to my belt. "Myyyraa!"
14 Jan 2021, 3:24am
" i would but my armor stays on me but ill leave all my lethal equipment at the door no tricks." i remove all of my equipment and leaves it at the door and take one last drink."i can assure you that no have will happen log as nothing happens to me." as i set down the two cubes and activate them to project delta and theta"the green one is delta he is know as the the AI fragment of logic and theta the purple he is know as the AI fragment of truth and we are her to find out who or what is the alpha." i send her my data log with the word ' find the alpha ' in 30 different known languages. "my origin is sol i was 18 when this happened to me but i was a fed test subject and they put the AIs in my neck and they basically are with me so if i die they die type stuff you know but if u look my name up in any fed logs im deceased the why i avoid them like the plague."
14 Jan 2021, 8:40am
I turn back at RJ after calling Myra, curiousely. "Find the alpha? What do u mean by that? What alpha?" I start worrying at this point. I look at the door and back at RJ Quickly. "She is my friend and companion. Not a creature to be HUNTED! Shes gentle. With me that is." I hear a low long growl by the door. "You see, the way i kept her secret is the fact that she has the ability to give off no life signal. Untracable. The perfect predator. I dont know how they work...Im not willing to cut into her for info iether." I Take a breath. Thinking if this is the right move. The room goes quiet and the growling stops. "Myra?" i her the ramp close and i open the door." Myra? you here girl?" Its quiet. diffrent feelings of fear start blowing over me. "where did she go?" Myra suddenly drops From the ceiling standing In the door way straigh as an arrow. As if shes threatend. "MYRA" i yell exited and move quickly towards her. Hugging her around the neck. But her gaze never shifts from RJ. "Myra. This is RJ. He is the one that brought you the chocolate." A slgiht chirp and a growl comes over through the internal AI speakers. She looks up and changes her position to a sit. still keeping her gaze on RJ. "Come here RJ. Come closer" i was 19 when i found her. stil young exploring the stars. I found her on a green planet. Traped after a recent storm, injured. I bound her and brought her aboard with the intention of turning her in for a HUGE bounty!'' I sigh.." Never got to that. I fell inlove... "
14 Jan 2021, 2:27pm
" i aint got a clue but i pray sol has sum for me. Theta says he is worried cause Myra hasnt broken eye contact at us but id like to say that i aint no hunter remember a bullet for a price you know." as she call me to move closer "i dont think that be a good idea but thank god i kept the armor on you know."
14 Jan 2021, 3:35pm
Myra sniffs the air towards RJ's Hand and makes a disapointed exale with a slight shake of the head. Heat emitting from her mouth seeping through the teeth she started showing. "Myraa" i say with a hightend voice. "I think she wants chocolate" I giggle at her walking back and forth. "Yep its been a while since she was able to taste it...its like her favorite treat. That and...Feds. Dont tell anyone." I say with a evil smile on my face. "You're lucky this is going so well.... otherwis that armor wouldve been you're biggest problem." i giggle sitting down on my bed.
14 Jan 2021, 4:10pm
" if she like chocolate then i dont mind give out my whole supply as a treat u know" i smile as i head to my create of cooking stuff." here dont worry bout me saying anything you know, but both of yall are in a treat if yall aint ever tried Mexican food that i be cooking." i open the lid to the cooking create and pull out a portable refrigerator that keep all my sweets cold i hand it to Kay "if this aint pay for a journey i aint know what will." i say with a kidding tone while smile.
14 Jan 2021, 5:21pm
"Understood command. As stated all the paperwork is in place for my shore leave." I say, almost apprehensively to the women on the other end of the line, Eva Kessik. The disappointed voice of Eva hurt just a tad bit. "Look Eva, I've been working round clock to provide fuel for all the detachments... I haven't left Abyss in almost six months." I reach forward towards the end connection, however I simply cannot bring myself to press it. "Eva, look. I'm the only one in the security force that hasn't gotten a vacation." I pause momentarily, a thought speeding through my mind. "How about this Eva, can I buy your silence with sweets and souvenirs? Huh? Thank you so much!"

"Sucker~" I hissed almost slyly after the call ended. "Now to put this girl down." I said, decelerating the black Anaconda aptly named "Abyss". The hiss of the hydraulics enraptures me, The sound I longed to hear during my travels. "It ain't home, but it's the next best thing." I stand slowly from my seat, the repulsive scent of O-zone lingers around in Abyss, caused by the constant discharge of my FSD.

"Finally, it's time to relax." I say softly, opening the sealed door to Abyss, the mechanical hydraulic hiss, all too sweet to my ears.
14 Jan 2021, 5:57pm
I take the package shocked as how much there is. I look back. Myra leaping up over everything out of exitement. "Myra stop! u GET THIS, when I say you get this. i dont need you running around like a crazy carnivore again. Oh and is the nav unit done yet? And Mexican...Is that a Sol thing too?"
14 Jan 2021, 6:49pm
" so you saying you aint ever tried any Mexican food!" i acted shocked " oh yeah the nav unit is ready and the the container is full of chocolate so you should last for a while." as i put everything back into there containers
14 Jan 2021, 6:51pm
I open the ramp. "Myra be quiet now hey" i say sliding my hand over her back. "So mister candy man... Get dressed, suit up And we can continue outside no?" I Hear loud Haudraulics And see a large ship land right above my ship on landing pad 10. "woah... thats a big ship. Where can i get my hands on one" i say forgetting that RJ is still suiting up. "oh right... U DONE IN THERE ALREADY? DNT GO SCRATCHIN IN MY STUFF NOW!" i say jokingly
14 Jan 2021, 7:46pm
I ambled over to the landing crew, a large smile across my face. "Gentlemen, I thank you for helping in guiding this beast in, even after flying her for several years, I still need just a tad bit help." I extend my hand towards the landing crew, which I was respectfully declined. "Anyways, I need to do a quick inspection of her, so I'll leave you fine gentlemen to your business.

I turned away from them, all of us utterly dwarfed by the Abyss. "Old girl, at some point I'll pamper you, just give me a few more good missions and I'll A-rate you." I whisper softly, running my fingers slowly along the black hull paint, past where the word "Abyss" is etched in glacier white paint. "Beautiful girl." I address the ship, a smile on my face still. "Lets see..." I whisper, logging into a terminal off to the side of the landing pad. "530 units of fuel- gosh that's gonna hurt a bit.. and of course 128 limpets." a sigh slipped passed my lips again, the security force wasn't paying for fuel and limpets, I was. "Damn that hurt the bank a bit... well, I wonder if I could sell a couple of those Hudson Orbital coffee mugs here?" I ask myself, knowing I'm a good bit away from that cursed place.

"Or... I could take up my job of being a journalist again while I'm here." Whilst I'm on the terminal cringing away at prices of fuel and limpets, I heard a voice yelling. At first I'd thought it to be Abyss speaking, but obviously that's impossible. "Don't go scratching in my stuff? What the hell is that supposed to mean?" I shrugged it off, it obviously had nothing to do with me, however it was the fact it was a woman's voice that kept the thought of checking on her fresh in my mind. "Aldon, it's none of your damned business." I whisper softly to myself, then promptly return to looking over the price of A-rated parts
14 Jan 2021, 8:40pm
"Huh.. how lonely must it be to have such a big ship all to youreself." I murmur to myself still waiting for RJ outside while Gazing at the ship. "RJ!? ARE YOU DONE YET?" I Walk back into my ship to see whats taking so long. "RJ?"
14 Jan 2021, 9:48pm
I see the commander of the ship working on the terminal. Thinking to myself if i should say hi...try and make an ally. I pull out my PDA opening my ship controls. "Ship lock down sequence Activated." welp. i guess hell be ok.

I start making my way to the other side of the station walking in a big coat covering my head hiding my identity. I eventualy get close to the ship and start realy seeing how huge it actualy is. I stop to stare in awe. "Woah. How do you even pilot this" i ask myself standing just a few meters away from the dock. "Should i say hi?" I feel like i have to turn around. But i see the gaurds looking at me looking abit suspiciouse with the coat on.

"Damit. Well...here we go." I walk up to the terminal. "Hi. . ."

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14 Jan 2021, 11:50pm
I stood at the terminal, kinda bewilderd at some of the prices of parts, and how low prices of certain commodities were, such as painite and Low Temperature Diamonds. "Gosh, I mean that would explain why the mining corp aint making such in the way of revenue." I sigh softly, thumbing gently at the pockets of my coat. "Well, I guess i can go hit the bar." I say softly sighing

I had started to turn away when I heard the voice from behind me. "U- uh hello?" I replied back, then turned to face the figure, my Skulljack security insignia pinned just beneath my jacket. I approach the hooded figure, a smile on my face. "Lutenant Damiyen Aldon, pleased to meet you." I say, extending my hand foward.

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