Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


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People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

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We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
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Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
15 Jan 2021, 12:11am
I Clear my throat gently. ''Ahem... Hi Im Kay-Lee." i take the lutenants hand softly by the wrist and continue with the shake. "No second name. Just... Kay-Lee. Im a . . . Contractor"  I take a step back removing my hood of my coat not trying to look like im hiding. A red skull with a crack painted on the right side of my onyx colored suit i try keeping covered for my heads sake "Is this youre ship?" I ask looking at the huge arrow head like ship. The dark color giving off a shine in the station lights. "Shes beautiful" i comment looking up at the ship. @do you pilot this alone?"

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15 Jan 2021, 2:13pm
"Ay my bad i accidentally knocked out myself as i was putting back on my gear!" i laughed as i step out "im alive i swear what i miss Kay?"i had taken my helmet off to eat some of my ration.
15 Jan 2021, 2:58pm
"Well then I'm glad to meet you Kay-Lee." I say back earnestly, an enjoyable smile streached across my face. "Yes this is my ship, I call her Abyss." I returned the handshake before letting her hand go. I turned towards the majestic ship, admiring it . "She's beautiful aint she? I salvaged her, and built her up. Found her drifting as a piece of space junk." I sigh, then turn back towards Kay-Lee. "Painted her myself." I paused for a moment then spoke up again. "Do you wanna see the inside of the ship?" I ask, motioning towards the open door on the side of the ship. "You're going to have to mind the smell, I don't have the frame shift drive shielded fully yet." I rub the back of my head slight out of a slight bit of embarrassment that I hadn't fully finished the FSD shielding.
15 Jan 2021, 4:22pm
i had notice no one was here in the ship so i stepped out the ship,god im too hungry." i notice Kay talking to a unknown man and began walking to this giant ship" yo what i miss!" by the time i made it there" yo sorry when i was putting my gear back on i pulled my own light tranquilizers on myself, oh sorry mind my manners im RJ id say let me shake your hand but like my hands are full." as i continue to eat my food and hold my custom sniper rifle.
15 Jan 2021, 8:50pm
The hooded man waits at for the lift, casually listening to the conversations between voices in the hanger. He smiles at the brief amount of attantion he recieves, but then quickly curses to himself.

You're not supposed to attract attantion, you idiot! Wait, no... it's fine. I've never been flashy like that, it's not something they'd be looking for.

With a robotic ping, the lift doors open and the hooded man walks inside. He quickly feels for his weapon on his right thigh and the straight blade at the back of his waist. His head nods in satisfaction as the door closes and moves on to the main commons of the station.


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15 Jan 2021, 9:23pm
"Did i not lock my ship?!" i snap at RJ. "How did you. . ." i look just past RJ's shoulder seeing a familiar figuer. Tall and somewhat broad. I stare for a while seeing him get on the lift, he turns around inside the lift and i catch a glimps of his face. "I'm sorry but i realy dont want to intrude but im slightly out of time and i REAly need to get going.. but nice meeting you" I say quickly before turning around and start pacing towards the other side of the station where my ship is. "I love youre ship tho!"

I leave the two men suddenly. Rj looking at me as i walk quickly away and the other not realy knowing what to make of my sudden departure. I look back at the lift seeing its already closed. "What is he doing here... Did he pick up traces of my wake. I was bieng so carefull!" I murmur to myself with my hood up and my face down. "Shit i still havent paid RJ yet. Ugh.. hell survive without it..I gota go...I gotta go...
15 Jan 2021, 10:02pm
I stood once again bewilderd, but by Kay-lee this time. "Something ain't right." I then turn my attention to RJ. "I'd put that weapon away while your dock side. I can tell its loaded. And I'm pretty sure you don't want to fight a member of a security force." I said swiftly, then quickly took off running after Kay-Lee, however in the .1 G environment running isn't exactly what I was doing, I was using the very light gravity to my advantage, by using other objects around me to propel me foward. I hardly weighed anything in the artifical gravity, so really all the working out in 2.3 G's of gravity really helped.

"Hey, Kay-Lee, wait up. If you need to talk, or if you need protection I can give you protection." I yelled, quite hot on her heels, however my foot slipped off the railing of the catwalk, which sent my flying foward at and awkward angle. "Heads up!" I yelled in warning, espically since I was barreling out of control towards Kay-Lee
15 Jan 2021, 11:29pm
"Pff...Protection" i scoff. "what makes you thi.. " My words cut short by a hard thud on my back. I float foward awkwardly unable to recorect intime. "CRAP!" i bounce on the floor lightly on my side hitting a the striking a cargo crate secured against the side of the of the catwalk railing. "Uuugh. . ." My vision goes dark as i see the lutenant moving up to me quickly. "son of a.. ugh" I hear the gun that was holstered in the  rear of my pants clang against the metal as it decends down to the botom of the station walls. I hear my name bieng yelled. I see Damiyen kneeling down and it al goes black.

A dream starts playing off in my head. "Hey dummy!..."
"Sis?"
"What are you upto again. getting lost in daydreaming again" my sister says mockingly
"This.. this happend before" I murmur to myself

A loud explotion erupts with alarms screaming. what was a peacefull moment on the ship instantly turned to chaos "HULL BREACH ATTACK! HULL HAS BEEN COMPRIMIZED" I hear a loud voice "WE HAVE TO STOP THIS KAY-LEE! WE ARE GONA GET KILLED" Everything fades and comes back but not in the same memory. . . a diffrent time. "Kiera?" I find myself holding my dead sister in my arms  in my old ship. Warm, soft, bloody But not alive. I pull her to my chest griping her. "KIERAAAAA" I sob burrowing her head in my chest rocking back and forth "IM SORRYY!" I scream crying Looking out the broken windshield seeing 3 federal corvettes as they slowly circle my ship preparing to board. "Please dont go. . .Please"


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17 Jan 2021, 3:38pm
I sigh watching Kay-Lee float helplessly into the containers. "Well fuck." I murmered softly, slowly getting myself up from that kneeling position. It was then I noticed several things about Kay-Lee, one of which was she owned a gun, which was now on the bottom of thr Station where it would probably never be retrieved. Secondly, she was hiding that insignia on her suit.

I walk closer, my smile replaced with the cruelest of snarls. "Hm, serves me right for trusting anyone." I say softly. Bending down to pick up the almost weightless Kay-Lee. After picking her up I turned around and ran quickly towards my ship, the one place I knew I could question her without problems. As we reached the ship, the door opened, and I smiled seeing the all too familiar interior. I sighed then, a bit upset my day had been ruined, but I'd probably get some cash out of it. The door closed behind me, nothing short of a small nuclear blast could break through the meta-alloy shell of my ship, and even then they'd have to compete with the engineered shield generator.

I placed down Kay-Lee in a chair, and then proceeded to cuff her hands and legs to the chair. "Wake up!" I yelled, before the hand swung towards her cheek.
17 Jan 2021, 5:34pm
A hard hit towards my cheek knocks me out of my slumber. "AAAHH!" my breath quickens from the sudden encounter! Still drowsy i look up seeing the Lutenant stand infront of me. I look around taking in the suroundings but unable to identify anything expect that its a ship interior. "What...Whats going on! WHERE AM I?!" I yell out at the Lutenant only to be met with another strike. "WHAT THE HELL?! I thought we were getting off well?" I laugh softly with a exale. "Did RJ put you up to this." I start to struggle with the cuffs. "You cuffed me...Seriously... Am i that threatning to you?" i say with a smirk. "Sooo you gona let me out or should i beg?" I feel a drop of blood running from the edge of my lips down to my chin and dripping on the chest of my suit. "If i get out of this...I'll rip your throat out..YOU HERE ME?!"
18 Jan 2021, 5:36pm
i had suddenly woke up noticing that no one was around me do to theta complaining and him forcefully shutting me down.
i had noticed that i was floating towards Kay's ship " oh god please be unlocked i need my gun i hate floating."
"wait whats going on!?" i said to myself " damn you theta dont shut me down next time and everything would be fine."
i see that Kay's ship was unlocked and i had floated in and grabbed my custom sniper rifle and began to leave Kay's ship locking it this time.
" ay delta locate the tracker"i look around for a second " damn it theta you was right its in the security dude ship."
i used my gravity boots and had walked over to the ship banging on the outer hull " i know she is in there come on out with here and we can all forget about this but if u dont ill be forced to enter but you are not gonna like the way i enter especially since this a beautiful ship of your! ILL GIVE YOU TO THE COUNT OF 10!" as i get my heated wrist blade that i call the fun way ready to cut the hull to peaces " ay delta scan the hull tell me what it is so i know what to set the blade on." i whispered to myself. "damn the shields alright i guess we need a bigger gun. "
"Delta remove the cloak and prepare the the KRAIT MK II to tear into this dudes shields."
i wait for a response of the man in the ship
18 Jan 2021, 6:19pm
There i am...sitting on a steel chair...Cuffed... captured, helpless. a few minutes go by. my cheek throbbing. I hang my head. "W-what do you want..." I mutter starting to feel abit of fear rushing in.

"No... it just cant be happening again...How does this always happen to me... I always try my best to help people ,to be friendly. Is the status of a PIRATE REALY THAT BAD! WE ALL have to make a livi-..." I feel a slight vibration creeping up. "Why are we here Damiyen...what do you want?"
18 Jan 2021, 7:59pm
I sigh softly, then hand my head slightly. "Well, Kay-Lee I'm gonna give you the straight'n'narrow the federation has quite the tag on your pretty lil head." I pause, taking several steps away towards the wall, only to press a small button which opened a hatch into a cyropod. "The federation has quite the price on your pretty lil head. And its a dead or alive contract." I say softly, my voice no longer that same tone it had been only minuets prior.

"Verity- plot course to Achan." I pause as the system respond back. "Achan is currently 328.55Ly away are you sure you wish to confirm this destination?" I pause listening to Verity read off the long distance. "Verity, set a course to LP 36-115 a confirmed white dwarf." I wait for Verity's response. "LP 36-115 is 44.92Ly away, but with the supercharged drive, you'll be able to jump to Achan in 1 jump." Hearing this response i simply smile.

"There is an alternative however Kay-Lee, you come and work for me at Skulljack security contractors." I pause and turn away after motioning to the cryopod. "The choice is yours." After finishing with Kay-Lee i turned away and walked towards the door leading into the rest of the ship, a content smile on my face.
18 Jan 2021, 8:39pm
" well i tried alright theta we might get to have some fun." i said with a smile
I quickly run to my ship as i take command "delta i need him to hear me." as delta begins to hack into the ships mainframe to get the speakers working on the security dude's ship i begin to take off and pull out my hard points that consist of 3 grade 3 pulse beams and and 2 grade 2 missile racks and aim it at the ship.
" is this thing on i guess it is but hello this commander Richard Juarez you can call me RJ and you are holding a friend of mine hostage but if u do not let her out your ship i will force entry into you ship and i love the shield gen you have on but with these pulse beam ill make quick work of it same as your hull, one way or another i will gain entry to your ship, i will give you to the count of 3."
18 Jan 2021, 9:19pm
"Uh oh... RJ what are you doing!!? RJ NOOOO! THE FSD!! ITS NOT SHIELDED RJ!!!!!! CRAP!" I start to panic knowing what the risks are. i managed to get loose banging on the door as hard as i can. "LET ME SPEAK TO HIM! OPEN THIS DOOR! RIGHT NOW!"

I start crying softly.. "Myra" Thinking that my life is about to end. No more fun and games. "Ill do it!. . .ill do it.... i lay my back against the door waiting for a response.

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