Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
06 May 2021, 11:16am
"Oh, Loki here?" He pets the blue, super fuzzy monkey. "He's a Buurboon, native to the Tewanta system. Us Rangers of the Protectorate are kind of like...game wardens I suppose. We protect their habitats from poachers, but also act as a police and spec ops military force for the Buurian Protectorate as a whole as well."

Aforementioned Loki was preening under the attention, long tail coiling around his handler's arm like a great fuzzy snake.


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06 May 2021, 11:48am
"Nice. Though I'm more of a dog person myself. Loki 'ere looks a bit like my new business partner, 'cept for the blue fur."

She takes another gulp of tea.

"So, these whatchercallems... Sentinels... 'ow 'ard are they to deal with?"
06 May 2021, 12:08pm
"Can very easily kill you if you aren't paying attention." He replies immediately. "They prefer using rapid fire plasma and gauss dual cannons, and are rather fond of cluster rockets that can send an SRV ass over tea kettle very easily." He comments, taking a sip of tea as Loki steals a biscuit.
06 May 2021, 12:24pm
"Ooh, righto. I'll be sure to keep an eye open for 'em, then. Ta for the tip."

Veronica finishes her tea with another gulp, and puts the cup down on the table.

"What d'you want with these alien artifact doo-dahs, anyhow? You just collect 'em? Stick 'em on a shelf or somethin'?"


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06 May 2021, 12:49pm
Knightwolf 1785Coming from the bar

Rain leads Stillgar toward her ship a Krait MKII painted pharaoh black and gold with the name Rocinante in white/silver. "So Stillgar. Mind if I ask where your ship is now? If needed we can take both to my carrier to bring yours along." She said checking for any tracking bugs, or kids trying to stowaway. Rain lost track of the number of times she found both on her ship. "Damn it. When are these punks ever going to give it up?" She growled pulling a tracking bug off her forward landing gear and looked for more.


Stillgar kinda shakes his head for a second and snaps out of his daze.. "Sorry, i get kinda spaced out sometimes.. its a long sorted story.. trackers eh? Well thats annoying. My ship has been sitting in dock for a while its just a T-9 but gets the work done y'know. still working on getting a carrier.. for now I have all my ships parked up in Bokowatico. Looks like Felicity Winters is trying to outflank Mahon up there. I try to stay out of politics.. I'm out in the suburbs of the bubble you might say.. I'm happy to let you drive, i'm kinda sick of the helm for the moment. I can just leave my ship here. I'm worried about your Uncle.. " as he pulls out a hand held scanner and finds two more trackers on the hull.. of different and more stealthy designs. "I don't think its 'kids' you need to worry about... these are not toys." he says handing them over for her to examine.
06 May 2021, 2:59pm
"I tinker, mostly. I like to take them apart, do some research, see if I can apply their technological advancements to our own. That kind of thing. Mostly stuff to keep me busy and entertained than anything else truth be told." He muses with a hum. "Worked with a few brokers in the past to catalog and start engineering a few hybrid systems and components that are out there in the wider galaxy for those that can take the time to understand them and incorporate hybridized tech into their ships like I do."
06 May 2021, 3:50pm
"I see," says Veronica, scratching her nose. "I didn't realise these things were tech. The way my business partner was bangin' on about pickin' up relics, I got the impression it was cracked jars an' rusty belt buckles. That sort of thing. Interestin'..."

Veronica stays silent for a few moments, then stands up. Loki's head whirls round at the sudden movement.

"It's all right, I ain't gunna hurt yer." She looks at her host. "Mind if I use yer 'ead, mate? Only I 'ad a coffee just before I came 'ere, and that an' the tea's gone straight through..."
06 May 2021, 10:51pm
Stillgar777 Stillgar kinda shakes his head for a second and snaps out of his daze.. "Sorry, i get kinda spaced out sometimes.. its a long sorted story.. trackers eh? Well thats annoying. My ship has been sitting in dock for a while its just a T-9 but gets the work done y'know. still working on getting a carrier.. for now I have all my ships parked up in Bokowatico. Looks like Felicity Winters is trying to outflank Mahon up there. I try to stay out of politics.. I'm out in the suburbs of the bubble you might say.. I'm happy to let you drive, i'm kinda sick of the helm for the moment. I can just leave my ship here. I'm worried about your Uncle.. " as he pulls out a hand held scanner and finds two more trackers on the hull.. of different and more stealthy designs. "I don't think its 'kids' you need to worry about... these are not toys." he says handing them over for her to examine.


"Lovely. It looks like someone new is wanting to follow me." Rain said crushing the bugs in her hand. "Well, it's their fault if they get killed. Let's go." She said waving Stillgar to follow her into her ship. Soon they were on the bridge and lifting off without trouble with a smooth flight out of the station. "Next stop. Zeta Wolf's Den and a jump to help my uncle."
07 May 2021, 2:08am
He tilts his head for a brief moment at her before nodding and gesturing down the far hall. "Straight down that way and take a left. Can't miss it." Atlas replies, going back to his own tea and biscuits with a low humming noise deep in his chest as he regards her with an amused grin. He seemed to find her tale of just coffee and tea to be entertaining.
07 May 2021, 10:20am
"Ta. Back in a jiff."

Veronica leaves the mess room and follow her host's directions for the short walk to the head. Once she's taken care of what needs to be done, she makes her way back to rejoin her host in the mess room. Loki the buurboon darts a glance at her as she enters.

"Alert little thing, ain't he?" she says, retaking her seat at the table. "Is he all right with space travel, then? Does he 'ave 'is own flight suit or somethin'?"
08 May 2021, 10:43am
Sam waited at the docking bay in his Asp Explorer, hatch open. He sat in silence for a while reading, but later began to play cards.

He thought to himself, Descartes will show... She said a day or two... It's easy enough to get into the bay. Just enter the comm number and the main gate will open... But... She said, things that may need her attention?... I wonder if something happened to her in the past two days...

He shook his head as if to shake off what he was thinking.

He said to himself, "She'll show..."

He shuffled his playing cards and dealt a hand of solitaire.
08 May 2021, 3:48pm
At the docks I tapped in my access codes, nothing. Again, more carefully, again, nothing.

"Don't make me call for assistance !" 'Did I say that out loud? either way I was determined not to call for help. That would mean a human, that would involve a negotiation and a gratuitly.'

Once more. In!

I checked the docking manifest, pad 47, Asp. Cosy. The docks always smelt of scorched metal, as always. And I'm sure I could still smell rotten fish... Caught a glimpse of four-tails and the non-drunk from the Galactic ,

"Hey, anyone in up there " I swung my kitbag against the steps.
09 May 2021, 4:57am
Descartes "Hey, anyone in up there " I swung my kitbag against the steps.


Startled by a sudden, "CLANG, CLANG," at the bottom of the steps followed by, "Hey, Anyone in up there?"

Sam gathered up the cards he threw on the floor when he was startled by the sudden noise and headed down the stairs.

He finds Descartes swinging her bag at the steps.

"What happened? My comm number not work on the door? You okay? come on up, everything's ready. I outfitted a first class cabin for you and the second captain's chair is yours."

He smiled and offered a hand out.

"Want me to carry your bag for you?"


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09 May 2021, 11:13am
Atlas blinks and nods. "He's more inquisitive than the rest of his kind. Buurboons are naturally rather shy creatures, but he handles space travel well. Knows a few commands that he can follow, such as pushing a few buttons while I'm busy piloting. Just don't trust him with sweets...he eats them all."
09 May 2021, 12:30pm
"Sweets, eh?" Veronica chuckles. "He's a buurboon after my own 'eart, then! Love sweets, I do. An' chocolate. An' biscuits. Specially chocolate ones."

She watches the buurboon scamper around the mess room.

"Mind you, I ain't sure I'd be 'appy to let 'im go pushin' any buttons while I'm pilotin'. Imagine if he pressed boost when you're comin' in through the mailslot!"


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