Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


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6. Perfect characters are boring.
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Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

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In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
29 Jan 2021, 4:09pm
Turning the corner at a fair click, she slowed to more casual stroll. “Mustn’t look too keen!” She thought to herself as she sauntered up to his ship.

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29 Jan 2021, 5:03pm
“So, it’s just you and me then, Jim” said Kate. “Shall we go?”

The two shipmates headed down the ramp and as they reached the bottom, there was a middle aged guy standing right beneath their ship, having what appeared to be a coughing fit, or a seizure of some sort.

“Are you alright?” Kate asked. “Can we help you?”

Jim placed a hand on the man’s shoulder. “Looking for someone, matey?”
29 Jan 2021, 7:01pm
Atlas waves off the concern with a chuckle, getting the coughing under control. "Sorry." The man elaborated as he pointed to his throat. "Legacy of a misspent youth...and a poorly over engineered Vulture." He elaborated before nodding over at Jim.

"Anyone in particular, not really. Even if I did nearly get bowled over by a missile of a human being that tore down the hall." That had been a close call really. Only decades of instinct and swift reactions had gotten him out of the way.

"In truth, I saw this beautiful mess here and got curious about how it got in the mess it's in." Atlas pauses. "Ah, but I'm getting ahead of myself, apologies. Commander Atlas Farron, pleasure to meet you." He offers a hand in greeting.
29 Jan 2021, 8:04pm
“Good to meet you, Atlas” said Jim, taking the man’s hand. “Jim Hawdon and Kate Earnshaw.”

“Our ship? Would you believe that she’s less than a month old.” Said Kate. “We were double crossed and got jumped by two Corvettes in the middle of nowhere.” She continued, “It seems that our last mission was not quite as routine as we had been led to believe.” She smiled. “Still, we’ve survived worse!”

“Fancy joining us for drink?”

Jim subtly checked his sidearm was present, just in case. Clearly Kate wasn’t carrying, there nowhere in that outfit to conceal as much as a penknife.
29 Jan 2021, 8:39pm
Following the message from Batu, JB decided to stop wallowing in his pit and get cleaned up.

He moved out of his small bunk and took his gear into Cabin 3, the smallest of the 3 luxury cabins he had installed in The Cuckoo... not that you'd expect any luxuries from looking at the outside of the ship, with it's paint peeling and armour dented. But his clientele tended to be accustomed to certain level of comfort but didn't want to attract any undue attention, hence the rat-rocket appearance.

JB had showered, ran the clippers over his stubble and pulled on fresh clothing.

The bruising on his ribs and back had gone down, still, he threw back a couple of painkillers and washed them down with a swig of mouthwash.

He walked up to the minibar and filled a fresh hipflask with Peppermint Schnapps... the Day-drinking Businessman's choice of breathmint replacement.

JB sat in the comfy armchair in the cabin, opened a bottle of bourbon, activated the room's music system and waited to hear back from Batu.


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29 Jan 2021, 10:33pm
Atlas chuckles at Kate, shaking his head good naturedly. "Well, I just got from the bar actually, where I was being delightfully regaled with the fact that I'm a lowly freelancer that has to have respect for Sol." The man even made airquotes on that last bit, making sure to try and very badly recount the accent of the delightful Admiral. "And my, you certainly have I'd suspect." The freelancer grins. "Still, surviving an ambush by two corvettes is no laughing matter. That takes skill and luck in equal measure."

The cybernetic eye whirred in it's optical mooring for a moment, his gaze flicking down to Jim with a faint downturn of his lips before letting out a low, rumbling note in his chest. Some odd mix of a purr and distant thunder, truthfully. "That said though, I would like to join you actually, since you made the offer. Drinks are always better with company, after all." Atlas smiles for the pair, making an 'after you' gesture while shifting his stance to show he intended to walk alongside, and not behind.
30 Jan 2021, 12:17am
Effie was standing beneath The Cuckoo at the access panel. She tapped the screen and waited for an answer.

Nothing.

“Perhaps he’s not onboard?” she thought. “Perhaps he’s asleep?”

She tapped the screen again...

“Perhaps he’s in the Bar?”

She turned to head out toward the Station’s transit system...
30 Jan 2021, 1:07am
The Cuckoo's computer automatically lowered the music in JB's cabin as the screen on the wall flicked to the camera on ship's access panel.

JB stared at the screen, he wasn't expecting to see Effie.

He had previously asked his contacts to keep an eye out for her Mark 4, The Cygnus X-1... either his contacts had dropped a bollock or she had come in on a different ship.

JB straightened himself up as he made his way to the access ramp.

The ramp dropped just in time for him to see Effie turning away.

"Hello, Red," he growled.
30 Jan 2021, 8:58am
A different Effie, the Effie she knew, would have played this much, much cooler. This Effie however, stopped dead in her tracks when she heard him call out, “Hello Red”.

She turned and saw JB standing at the foot of the ramp, smiling at her. Uncontrollably, she ran toward him and leaped into his arms, wrapping her legs around his waist and her arms around his neck. “I missed you” she said.
30 Jan 2021, 1:12pm
A lightning bolt of white-hot pain shot through JB's side as Effie leapt on him.

A beating he'd taken from prison guards a little while back had left him with bruised ribs that were still healing.

JB had a lifetime of taking beatings and had techniques for dealing with pain... closing his eyes and pulling Effie closer to him as he felt the pain wash over him without letting out more than a slight wince.

It wasn't that he was a hard bastard that didn't feel pain... just that he'd had to find ways to just get along with being hurt.

Conscious that they may be causing a scene, JB carried Effie up the ramp, closing it after them.

With her still wrapped around him he said, with a smile, "Wasn't expecting to see you today."
30 Jan 2021, 5:08pm
"OK" said Effie, "You can put me down now, you big brute!" she laughed, so pleased to see him again. "So, what's a girl have to do to get a drink around here?" she asked and as he placed her gently back down onto the floor she noticed a slight look of discomfort on his face.

"Are you OK tough guy? I didn't break you did I?" she smiled at him as she said it, but she was also genuinely concerned. JB looked as though he'd been run over by a Steer in a Rodeo. She placed an open hand against his cheek. "Damn, it's good to see you!"
30 Jan 2021, 6:02pm
JB held her hand against his face for a second or two... glad of gentle human contact.

"You too, Red. Now let's get you that drink."

JB led the way through to Cabin 3 and stood next to the small bar.

"I had been keeping an eye out for The Cygnus, I didn't see you come in..." JB took two tumblers from the counter and gestured towards the drinks, "What can I get you?"
30 Jan 2021, 7:28pm
JB Threepwood

"I had been keeping an eye out for The Cygnus, I didn't see you come in..." JB took two tumblers from the counter and gestured towards the drinks, "What can I get you?"


“Hmm, whatever you’re having” Effie said, feeling brave. “Yes, Cygnus is in storage. We dropped a few credits on a Gunship for our last mission, the guy that chartered us demanded a ship with space and weaponry beyond the MKIV’s ability. It’s that big yellow wreck outside!”

“Then the bastard double-crossed us at the drop off and we barely escaped with our lives.” Effie sat on the end of the bed and looked up at JB, who was standing at the mini bar. “Nice Cabin” she said, kicking off her boots.
30 Jan 2021, 9:26pm
JB nodded and looked around the room. He was usually happy in his small bunkroom but, occasionally, it was nice to use the cabins.

He remembered seeing Effie's yellow Gunship as it entered the station, it seemed like it was mainly the bright yellow paint that was keeping it together. Fair play to them for making it back in, more or less, one piece.

JB browsed the bottles of booze. He picked out a bottle spiced rum and poured it into the two glasses. JB passed Effie the tumbler and sat down next to her on the bed.

"So this stitch-up job?... What happened?"


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31 Jan 2021, 10:40am
Taking a sip of Rum from her glass, “A simple VIP transfer. A hired ship with no names mentioned. You know the gig” she replied. “Trouble is, I was complacent. New ship. Big ship. Big guns. What could possibly go wrong, right!”

She emptied her glass and passed it to JB, indicating a refill was required and then continued, “We were met by not one, but two Corvettes of the Imperial Navy. That was our first hint that this VIP wasn’t just your typical ‘Mr. Smith’ type”

“We watched the group of Marines escort him onto one of the Vettes and were ready to get the hell out of Dodge. One of the Navy ships beat us into orbit though and jumped us before we could even spool up our FSD.” Effie took the refreshed glass from JB’s hand and took a huge gulp.

“You’ll need to talk to Kate to find out more than that though JB, because I don’t remember what happened after we took the first volley. I spent the next few days in the Med Doc in an induced comma. Apparently a part of the bulkhead decided to say hello to my noggin!” She giggled.

“Kate thinks our ‘guest’ was something to do with Core Dynamics. She only saw his face briefly as he disembarked, but she seems pretty certain that she had seen him before, at Charity Dinner we attended a few years ago, before we both went, erm, rogue.”

Finishing her second glass, she sighed, “Whoever he was, he meant to ensure that we never returned and if it wasn’t for Kate and Jim, we surely never would have”. She took JB’s glass from his hand, set it on the table next to hers. Turning, she pushed him back onto the bed and stood up in front of him. Reaching behind her, she unzipped her dress and wriggled to let it fall to the floor. She stood there for a moment in just her underwear, so that he could look at her and she smiled at him, before slowly and deliberately crawling up up onto the bed like a Panther and on top of JB...

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