Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

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3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

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5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
29 Apr 2021, 6:18pm
Holding her clutch bag in both hands before her, Veronica shifts her weight onto one leg.

"An' there you go with another smartarse wisecrack. Been doin' that long, 'ave yer? Blimey, there's knights in shinin' flippin' armour everywhere you go, an' what do I get? A ruddy comedian, that's what!"
29 Apr 2021, 7:16pm
Ridge scoffs, his eyes narrowing.

"No dock puts a ship in lockdown over an unpaid fee, especially first-timers. Unless..."


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29 Apr 2021, 8:31pm
Veronica shakes her head, a smirk on her lips.

"Nah, you've got it the wrong way round, mate. They impounded my ship over some vague technicality. The fee's to let me get back on board, pure an' simple. But like I say, all my money's on the ship, along with the rest of my stuff. They say I should be free to fly the day after tomorrow, once they've done their so-called checks. In the meantime all I've got's what I'm standing up in."

She shakes her head again and then leans against the bulkhead, looking down at her shoes.

"All this over a piddlin' grand..."
30 Apr 2021, 1:33am
Ridge crosses his arms.

"'Vague technicality', huh? That can't be settled until the day after tomorrow? And all involving the only pilot in the black who leaves her ship without a single bit on her?"

He shakes his head.

"You really are used to dealing with White Knights, aren't you?"
30 Apr 2021, 1:43am
Michael Ridge
"'Vague technicality', huh? That can't be settled until the day after tomorrow? And all involving the only pilot in the black who leaves her ship without a single bit on her?"

"You really are used to dealing with White Knights, aren't you?"


ECHOs through the docking bay almost like the announcement speaker..

Stillgar laughs outloud for the 1st time in.. in.. how long??

His laughter echos too.. like every sound in this place..
30 Apr 2021, 2:59am
Atlas walks down the corridor, pausing with a bottle of Old Sol in hand as he tilts his head regarding the odd pair and the general air of this particular hanger door as he was on his way to his own vessel, the Leviathan. The duo couldn't look more out of place in the same area if they tried.

"Well, you two make a rather peculiar pairing. Everything alright?" He asks, though mostly directed at Veronica given her general demeanor as he walked up.
30 Apr 2021, 8:39am
Veronica looks up at the newcomer, noting the bottle of Old Sol in his hand.

"Not really," she replies. "As I've just been tellin' this bloke, some joker at the port authorities has locked me out of my 'angar on a vague technicality. They said that they can hurry up if I pay 'em an admin fee of one grand, otherwise I'm stuck 'ere until the day after tomorrow. I'd 'appily pay, 'cos I've got places I need to be, only I came out without any money, see? But this fella's goin' all Sherlock 'olmes on me, trying to make out I'm some sort of crook."

Veronica glares at the first man, then turns back to the second.

"Was that you we could 'ear laughin' just now? Didn't 'alf sound creepy."


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30 Apr 2021, 11:15am
"I could only hope to one day sound quite as creepy as that maniac in the bar..." He snorts, rolling his eyes before making a faint humming noise. The mechanical eye in his left orbital socket whirred minutely as the man scanned the pair out of habit, snorting faintly before glancing back at Veronica.

"Well, that sounds...odd. Though perhaps they're just being extra cautious sweeping ships at random given everything going down with the NMLA." Atlas continues before shrugging faintly. "Well, if you're in need of a place to crash till then, you can use one of the rooms I have on the Leviathan. It's a pretty big ship, so I have a few to spare."
30 Apr 2021, 12:43pm
"That's very good of yer," replies Veronica. "If I can't sort out something with the geezer at the port authority first, I may take you up on that."

She gives the Old Sol man a smile, then throws a smirk and a raised eyebrow at the Comedian.

"Listen," she continues, addressing both men at once, "I wouldn't normally ask this, but could one of you spot me for a cup o' coffee?"


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30 Apr 2021, 1:44pm
Michael steps closer, speaking so that only feminine stranger before him can hear. He glances to her station terminal, the outline of an Asp Explorer on it. Suspicion lingers in his eyes.

"Tell you what," he says. "Just be straight with me for five minutes and we can do a whole breakfast. Deal?"


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30 Apr 2021, 2:34pm
Veronica rolls her eyes.

"I dunno what you want me to tell yer, mate," she says, making no attempt to keep her voice down. "I've just done explaining, 'aven't I? I'm locked out of my 'angar for the best part of two days, unless I pay a thousand credit admin fee. I can't pay 'cos all my money's on my ship. What part of that do yer not understand? Honestly!"

She turns on her heel and jabs hopefully at the access code buttons beside the hatch to her hangar. A rude buzz and a flashing red light is her only reward.

"I only came here out of curiosity," she says, "to check out some place I saw on Gourmet's Guide to the Galaxy a while back. An' what kind of bright spark decides to plonk a starport almost thirty thousand light-seconds out, anyhow? I mean, 'utton Orbital's bad, but at least you get a bleedin' mug. Not to mention the free Anaconda."

Veronica looks at Old Sol man and gives him a smile, then steps up close to the Comedian. She holds her clutch in both hands behind her back.

"Tell you what, pal," she says, her voice now lowered. "Lend me a grand so's I can pay off this fee, an' I'll make you breakfast. But don't be gettin' any funny ideas. Deal?"


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30 Apr 2021, 2:46pm
Stillgar chuckles slightly as he steps out of the shadows, on the way back to 'the bar' from one of his many trips back n forth from his ships. "A grand? is that all you need? isn't that just about the cost of a cup of coffee these days? You gotta be kidding me." he whispers deftly to her as he passes.

He gently takes Veronicas hand dangling behind her back and presses a 100,000 CR crystal into her palm and closes her hand into a fist around it. "That oughta cover your 'breakfast'" he whispers, chuckling softly as he disappears into the shadows on his way back to 'the bar.'


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30 Apr 2021, 2:53pm
Ridge narrows his eyes.

"Lend you a grand," he says, "so that you can just blast off the moment the lockdown is cleared, laughing your skinny ass off at the rube who forked over a thou because you asked nicely?"

Ridge looks away for a long moment, his arms again folded, his jaw set. Finally he turns back to the woman, sizing her up.

"New offer," he says. "Word on the street says that alien trinkets are about to get hot again. I'm heading out to harvest as many as I can, make some connections with some tech brokers after. Two SRVs gets the job done twice as fast."

Ridge draws himself up.

"If we hustle, it'll be a two day job. Three at the most. We come back, we split the proceeds and you can pay the fee yourself. 70-30... my way."

He leans in closer, his eyes earnest, his thumb jerking to the inebriated pilot further down the corridor.

"Or you can take your chances with Mr. Day Drunk here and hope he comes through."

Ridge steps closer still, one hand moving to the pistol on his hip. Distrust thickens in his tone.

"And no funny ideas."


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30 Apr 2021, 3:34pm
Stillgar snickers as he thinks to himself "she did palm that like a thief... I guess I've still got some skills.. I don't think her mark even saw me??"

A distant chuckle echos in the bay..


Last edit: 30 Apr 2021, 3:43pm
30 Apr 2021, 6:40pm
"Pickin' up alien trinkets?"

Veronica purses her lips and loudly sucks in a breath.

"Mmm, I dunno, mate. I mean, it's not my usual line of work, see? I s'pose I could give it a go, though. Could be a nice change of pace, like. Only, the thing is..."

She glances over her shoulder at the retreating figure of the chuckling man, then turns back to the Comedian.

"You see that bloke? Well, while you were busy expoundin' your master plan about collectin' trinkets, Chuckles there crept up behind me. You must've seen 'im, surely? I could 'ear 'im muttering away to himself, but I couldn't make out a word he was saying. Next thing I knew he was touchin' me up, an' I was all set to turn round an' give 'im a slap. But then he put this into my 'and..."

Veronica brings one hand from behind her back. In her palm is a small, shiny crystal.

"Looks nice, dunnit? Now I'm just gunna pop off an' find out how much this little trinket might be worth. Hopefully it'll be enough to pay that fee and get myself a cup of coffee. But if it ain't..."

She places the crystal inside her clutch bag and snaps it shut.

"There's a cafe on the corner of Central Mall and Eighth Avenue. Meet me there in, ooh, let's say two hours from now, all right? Then we can discuss your master plan in a bit more detail."

Veronica turns and approaches Old Sol.

"Ta very much for the offer of the flop," she says to him, "but it looks like I might've 'ad a sudden change of fortune."

With that, Veronica Vayle hurries off towards the starport's Commercial sector.


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