Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

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6. Perfect characters are boring.
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Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

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In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

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05 Jul 2024, 11:04pm
Willow's demeanor made him want to apologize for apologizing but that felt excessive.

"Honest, I stepped through that door half expecting you to blast a round through my skull, so shouting is the better outcome from my perspective. Besides, you're right. I was an asshole then, prolly still am in some way but that...what I did...what you went through...should have never happened."

Maul spoke from the heart, his face confirmed it. He'd been placed in a shitty situation himself, not all too different many years ago and walked away with a pit full of hate inside as well. It was only natural. There was nothing he could do or say to make her feel better. That was something she'd have to deal with on her own terms.
05 Jul 2024, 11:12pm
"So like, what do you want from me? Oh, its okay, it was like, ages ago. It's all bedda now, don't worry about it dog"

"Or how about NO!" shouted Willow slamming her hands on the counter. The fingers on the hand that got shot through, opening and closeting; her fingertips feeling for the hole in her palm that wasn't there any more.

"And how about you get the fuck out of my shop shit slice?"


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05 Jul 2024, 11:48pm
He smirked and nodded, it was clear she still had things to work out, just as he once did...and still does.

"Yeah, I'll go but I wanted to give you this first." reaching into his jacket pocket, he flashed a small device that didn't look too dissimilar from a standard memory chip.

He tapped the device on the counter a few times and looked at Willow, thinking if this was sound decision or not before sliding it over to the edge of the shield barrier.

"I know that feeling you're feeling right now. I'll tell you the same thing a friend once told me, "killing them won't fill the void", and trust me, as someone who didn't take that advice, I can assure you that it does nothing but make you feel emptier...and you may already know that."

"That though.." he said, gesturing towards the small device. "..That's an invitation to another world, one you're probably not even aware of. It's served as an outlet for me and countless others, utilizing our abstract skills. Judging by this place and the things you're capable of, I'm certain it'd do the same for you."

"It's how we met, it's how we were put in touch."

Looking at Willow through the shield, he changed his composure and lowered his voice.

"If you want that, if this life proves too mundane, plug this into your personal terminal and follow the instructions to a T. If not, well, that device goes defunct after an hour of activation, and it's just now been activated."

He stepped back from the bar more relaxed now.

"Accept the offer or don't, regardless, I'm here if there's ever an issue I can assist with. At no cost. Ever. I owe you that much considering everything you've been through."
06 Jul 2024, 12:21am
From my perspective, the exchange unfolding in front had been... somewhat heated, at least on Willow's side. Didn't know the background between those two, though, so I could only speculate. Which I wasn't really here for, anyway, and it was between them, so it had no reason to concern or interest me.

And I'd probably not mention it... assuming I got my turn, and the woman wasn't too annoyed to talk to another person now.

At least, missing me would be hard. No thanks to my extravagant figure, but also that I was basically sitting in direct line of sight to the shop. Still waited my turn, patiently, though - there was enough going on, without the woman with the funny disproportionate curves showing up, asking for a tool to be fixed. Or at least looked at.
06 Jul 2024, 6:53pm
He laughed at her anger, and had to have last word, like guys always do, and left an SU on the counter as if doing her a fucking favour. If she could have grabbed it, she would have smashed it under her magnetic boots, but the shield stopped her.

Turing off the shield, Willow snatched the SU and threw it at the floor. The low gravity and lightness of the device meant it hardly even made a noise, let alone do any damage. It bounced up slow enough for her to catch without needing reflexes. Getting a good look at the SU, Willows technical interest overwhelmed her mood.

The thing looked like more then a storage unit, it looked as if it had a transmitter arial, impressive in such a small package. Finding out what it did when it was plugged into a terminal maybe interesting if nothing else. Turning the shield back on, Willow went outback to find a terminal to interface with.
06 Jul 2024, 7:40pm
Now the woman had disappeared behind the store somewhere again. I sighed, stood up, and walked inside, clearing my throat when I was close to the hooded man from the bar.

"May I?"

I got some distance between us and then placed my bag on the counter, leaning on it with the left arm, facing him... though I said nothing, my gaze clearly indicated awareness that there was some personal history between them, just from observing the exchange.

Not that I was too interested in a conversation with the "mysterious stranger", though, at least not here, and not right now. Which was also reflected in my look.
06 Jul 2024, 8:01pm
The door indicator told Willow that someone had come in. She left the terminal to boot up with the SU beside it.

"Come on Willow, get it together"

Seeing the hacker again had dredged up so much she felt she had grown beyond. It was clear she was wrong. Maybe it was just him hitting her with memories out of the blue, but at least Alice didn't have anything to say about it.

Walking back into the shop area, Willow saw the padded person from the bar. She'd offered her name when they had talked in the bar, but Willow couldn't recall.

"Oh hey, like, its you right? So what can I do for you today?"
06 Jul 2024, 8:23pm
"Jana.", I offered as a friendly reminder, turning to her. "And, well, I got a bit of a problem with this thing."

I opened up the bag and pulled out the plasma cutter, placing it on the counter.

"It sometimes just decides to cut out randomly, and I can't figure it out. Replacing the power cell didn't do it, and, well, that's about as far as my tech skills go. Figured your spot would be a good place to visit for that."

I looked around the shop. Better not to mention that I also just had the curiosity and interest to come looking because I could, and the tool problem was more a convenient excuse to.

"I'm... not your first actual customer, right?"


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06 Jul 2024, 8:31pm
Jana RazekiNow the woman had disappeared behind the store somewhere again. I sighed, stood up, and walked inside, clearing my throat when I was close to the hooded man from the bar.

"May I?"


Maul nodded at the woman and stepped aside to let her approach the counter as he left the shop.

A little ways down from Willow's shop, he stopped to think over the encounter that had just happened with Willow . It didn't go as he'd wanted but he felt better knowing the girl was doing well. While he was stopped, he checked his slate to see if Carter had ever completed his end of their "deal". Much to his surprise, Maul was now looking at readouts being fed from the Anansi's ship systems. The hack on the fleet carrier wasn't a complete take over, he just needed access to jump log history, system diagnostics, etc. There was enough info coming through to be somewhat useful, even down to the contact history and previously targeted ship.

Maul sighed with relief and sent a message to Lambast with a screenshot of the info on his screen.

"Hope negotiations went well

Check it, I've weaseled my way into the Anansi's systems. That coupled with the COVAS jump logs should narrow our search for SOMETHING a little useful at least."
06 Jul 2024, 9:10pm
(In response to Citi Gateway)


Maul chewed at one of his fingernails as he stared at the ground. If he had a cigarette, he'd smoke it but that was just another vice he didn't need. The meeting with Willow was bothering him but he knew it was best to leave her alone. Recalling his own terrible memories, he could put himself in her place and remember what it was like. All the anger and hatred.

His slate beeped, as message from Lambast.

Lambast Mercy Very good mister Montresor, its pleasing to have the old you back in action. After a shower, I believe my business here is concluded. Do you have anything else that requires attending to?


"Ooo a shower hmm? I'm assuming things went VERY well with Vasil then, eh?

But yeah, no, things are sorted here for now. I'll meet you by the docks. We can discuss the next course of action."
06 Jul 2024, 9:21pm
After claying exactly where in the docks they were supposed to meet, Lambast found mister Montresor.

"Stop biting your nails, its a filthy habit" She said in place of a greeting "Did you find you upholstered temptation?"
06 Jul 2024, 9:30pm
Lambast had startled Maul causing him to jump, ripping that last stubborn piece from his nail.

"Fuckin' hell, you scared the shit outta me!"

He started to question how she'd found him, expecting another message from her to clarify a meeting spot but was interrupted by the second half of her "greeting".

"Upholstered...huh? I— No there's was this chick I wanted to apologize to. Did some shit that caused her to get hurt and wanted to make amends."

He left it at that, unsure in his ability to pay amends at all.
06 Jul 2024, 10:06pm
"Well fine, be a cryptic Kevin if you must"

She looked around at the newly refurbished station and read the huge letters brazenly painted on the walls making up the name of the station.

"Citi is like a nexus; if you wait around, you'll run into people long forgotten. A unique, and not entirely unwelcome anomaly given the size of the galaxy. Anything more you'd like to do here mister Montresor? This places ability to call people from all around the bubble dose make this station unusually treacherous"
06 Jul 2024, 10:34pm
Lambast Mercy"Well fine, be a cryptic Kevin if you must"


"Oh it's nothing like that. The girl's name is Willow, the owner of that repair shop." he said, pointing a thumb over his should at the establishment down the way. "I worked with her when I was at my worst. She wound up getting hurt because of me. Felt it necessary to apologize. As you said, I'm "exercising those ghosts"

Lambast MercyAnything more you'd like to do here mister Montresor? This places ability to call people from all around the bubble dose make this station unusually treacherous"


He shrugged at her question.

"Nah, I reckon I'm done here for now. Has that COVAS been sent to my ship yet?
06 Jul 2024, 10:42pm
"No, that won't be happening. There was a much better solution to my travel inconvenience than building a star port and all the support one of those require to operate"

"I suppose I got fixated on using my spaceship, forgetting there are terrestrial air craft that don't worry air traffic control, and environmental busy bodies too much"

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