Elite roleplay: The docks

THE DOCKS (Dockyards)

The Docks is where all pilots berth their ships. It is the first place that pilots find themselves upon landing their ship. Docking and launching is controlled by the Citi Gateway’s Traffic Controllers while each individual dock is controlled by a dockmaster and a team of orange clad dock crew workers.

The Docks is a sparse and desolate, 0.1G environment, littered with service vehicles, cranes and landing pads. While cool, the air is dry and lightly filled with the smell of burnt metal and ship grease. Public Service Announcements blare across the the docks reminding all pilots of station regulations. The docks contain 45 individual ship docks, several warehouses storing massive tank of hydrogen fuel, and standard shipping containers of cargo, the dock’s traffic control tower and the local pilot’s market which resides in one of the warehouses.

Ship docks
Each specific dock has a landing pad, a ship hangar and adjoining terminal. In each terminal there is a passenger waiting area, the dockmaster’s control tower and several dock crew vehicle bay.

Warehouses
If the docks were already unpopulated, warehouses would be completely vacant of anyone if not for a small handful of security staff. Warehouses are completely automated and highly guarded facilities as they contain massive amounts of valuable and flammable material.
"Loitering is a crime punishable by death" - Station Announcements

Pilot's Market
The pilot’s market is best described as a tourist trap for pilots. Every person who’s not a pilot is trying to guile a pilot to part with their credits.

"The station administrators would like to remind all pilots that transactions in the pilot’s market are not protected by Citi Gateway or The Bank of Zaonce" - station announcements

General Roleplay Etiquette:

1. Control only the actions of your own character(s). (AKA: God Mode)
This doesn't matter how small the action is, even if it is as simple as scratching their nose or a direct reaction to something else that just happened. This applies to everything from casual conversation to full blown fight scenes. If you'd like someone to do something specific, PM that person, however keep in mind they are completely within their rights to say no. Especially if said action is inappropriate to their character and/or circumstance.

2. Don't brute force your way into another persons RP.
Approaching with a conversation starter is fine, or indeed some other small action. However charging in, guns blazing and disrupting the flow of another person/pair/groups conversation/arc is about as rude as doing so in real life. If something is going on that you'd like to participate in, be subtle about it. Put out a gentle hook for someone to take, but again, be aware that said hook may not be taken. If you fear it was simply unnoticed, PM the person or people it concerns. Or even leave a message in the OOC forums.

3. Good grammar and spelling is preferred.
We're not asking you to be perfect, but please at least demonstrate willingness. no1 iz gna tak u srsly usng txt spk. There's a wide variety of people here, many who speak English as a second, or even third language. There are even some with varying degrees of dyslexia and/or likely other issues that affect spelling/grammar. We accept them all here. However, people who aren't accepted, are those unwilling to accept polite correction. Remember that even a small thing like the placement of a comma, or the wrong use of there/their/they're can completely change the definition of an entire sentence.

4. Accept constructive criticism gracefully and politely.
If someone spots an issue with your writings, they may wish to help you improve that writing. They may do this through PM or even publicly air their thoughts on the OOC forum. If they have taken the time to be polite and explain what is wrong with your writing, the best way to behave is to respond in kind, using the same manner they have approached you with. It means they have taken an active interest in what you have written and wish to see more. Basically, you have a fan!

5. Don't take the actions or opinions of things done IN RP, to be directly relevant to the writers thoughts or opinions.
Basically, if some ones character calls your character a jackass, it doesn't mean the writer thinks you are a jackass. It's a ROLE they are PLAYING. Watch a movie. The argument between the characters isn't an argument between the actors involved. The same applies here.

6. It's not a popularity contest.
Your RP might be bustling with participants. You have 3 people off station in a fire fight, while another 2 are infiltrating the darkest areas of the station, meanwhile a group of 4 others are tracking your movements in an effort to stop you. Good for you, I'm sure it will be a thrilling read! But you know what? Sometimes the absolute BEST work, comes from two RP characters having a simple heart to heart. Both are valid, both are great, but NEITHER is categorically better than the other. Period.


Inara RP Etiquette:

1. Respect the setting and rules of the universe.
Inara is an Elite: Dangerous 3rd Party Tool. The RP Forums are set in the Elite: Dangerous universe. Elite: Dangerous has rules, as any fictional universe does from Lord of the Rings to Star Wars, or Game of Thrones to Star Trek. If you intend to RP within the Elite: Dangerous universe you are bound by the history and rules of that universe. Simply put, this RP forum is bound by the same rules as the game, so if it can't be done in the game, it is not permitted here. This applies to things from a 50Ly Jump Range on a normal, unmodified Sidewinder, to the destruction of entire stations.

2. Respect the characters created by others.
We have a wide variety of characters already here. It's expected that some will be similar, just as it's expected that two characters will be vastly different. Opinions of each persons character will naturally be varied, but all are valid provided they follow the rules of the universe. You are allowed to interact with, or avoid interaction with, any character in the RP forums. But you have no right to belittle others for their creation. You are not an authority figure on writing, nor are you directly affected by another persons imagination. You might not like it, but you MUST respect it.

3. Be caught up on current events before joining in.
You need basic things like character descriptions in order to interact with them. You also need to know what's going on in the surrounding areas. This is simply because the people you are hoping to RP with, might be gearing up to something that you might not want to be part of. Or simply that the most recent post, out of context, could leave a different impression on the goings on than if you gather that context. We don't expect you to read every single post from the beginning of the forums, just enough to get that basic understanding.

4. Either subscribe to, or frequently check, the Roleplay: Q&A and OOC forum.
People may be discussing something relevant to you there, or even discussing you directly. Perhaps someone asked what the general consensus on the existence or non-existence of a certain object. Or we're just chatting about random gibberish. Either way, be aware of it and use it. If you're unsure about something, such as how guns would look and or behave, or even the music selection, use the OOC forum to ask. We don't have all of the answers, but the collective knowledge and logic usually allows us to overcome an issue and come to a decision on what should be allowed. Frontier Developments, and even David Braben himself, don't have the answers to every possible question that can be asked.

5. Large Scale events exploding out of nowhere are a complete no go.
We get it. Everyone wants their character to be noticed and for people to be tripping over themselves to interact with them. In some audiences, an introduction involving you blasting in for landing in a fiery wreckage of a ship, before cart wheeling out and sword fighting 35 Ninjas before whisking off with the local celebrity for a glorious night of passion, is in fact, cool. This is not one of those audiences. It is generally considered better to build your character up slowly over time. Eventually, you might even have a legitimate excuse to fight those Ninjas. Maybe even with other RP participants by your side.

6. Perfect characters are boring.
The point of a character arc, is that it is in fact, an arc shape. One who is morally unquestionable, fully kitted out and an infinite fountain of knowledge, cannot go through an arc. Give your character flaws. Be it a tendency towards befriending the wrong people, or a bad knee that frequently gives out at inopportune moments. It gives readers something to latch onto and empathise with. You can give your character exceptional capabilities at something, but it requires balance. She's a damn good pilot with no equal, but can't drive an SRV for peanuts. It can lead to some very interesting moments between characters, be it heartfelt or comedic.


Other Notes:
It should be noted that there can be exceptions to these points. For example, good grammar when a character is speaking is actually rare. Few people in real life actually speak with perfect eloquence after all. Or previously arranged actions during a fight scene, such as someone stumbling back after a punch. What's key to remember is context.

All in all, remember this is purely for fun. We have some seriously talented writers here, and others whose writing history starts and ends at high school. But many are willing to help out in whatever way they can. All it takes is that you ask nicely.

Also keep in mind that many people who RP here, also have logbook stories related to the character, or characters, they portray. If it looks like there's an "in joke" going on that you're unsure of, it's probably in those.

In fact, some users have even gone to the trouble of creating "alts" to RP with. If you read back far enough, it's usually pretty clear who has and hasn't, and which ones are the "alts". It's therefore not unheard of to see the apparent seizing of control of other characters. If you do spot one, point it out in the OOC section. If intervention is needed, it will be sorted quickly and (hopefully) politely.

Most, if not all RP participants here have Logbook stories pertaining to their character(s). These are for the reading pleasure of anyone who wishes to do so. While it can be useful to read them in order to gain a bit of backstory on a character you wish to interact with, it should not be assumed that your character shares that knowledge. Within the E:D Universe, these Logbooks either don't exist, or are private diaries kept by the characters. Either way, without explicit statements to say otherwise from the writer, your interactions should reflect that your character is in the dark about any information you, the writer/reader, have gained from reading the stories.
09 Sep 2016, 8:25pm
"Well, I 'spose common courtesy is a thing of the past huh? Anyway, Ya, I do have something for you and I'll give it to you for free, no strings. There was this gal, hooded thing, pretty petite. She was quite interested in the old hard drive off that salvage wreck I purchased. As you know a Federal Drop Ship." He shrugs. "I figured the thing would be wiped, in congruence with standard data deletion, and since it was old, I was just going to junk it anyway. She asked for it."

He leaned back again.

"So I just gave it to her. She went by the name of Little Crow."

He placed his left hand on top of the claw.

"So, when can I expect to be extradited?"
09 Sep 2016, 8:35pm
A fast-paced click-click-click of heeled boots and a steadier thump-thump-thump of something much heavier echoes around the sterile corridors of the med-block. A woman's voice, raised and angry, can be heard arguing with the staff.

Moments later, the doors to Stryker's room open; Marra strides in, Idris towering over the petite gangstress one step behind.

She glares at Stryker, then at the Federal officer at his bedside.

"What the fuck is going on here?"
09 Sep 2016, 8:55pm
Rebecca pressed two buttons on her comm terminal.

"Jay? Reboot and reset the vultures and get them ready to lift off. Then trace and if possible identify the hacker via the station security network. See if the following description fits on her: female, hooded, short. She's a potential leak. Also get some of the crew out of their bunks and search the pad of the Angel and the surrounding area for transmitters of any kind. We got a tipoff."

"From whom?"

"Alvadr Aune."

"The guy who failed miserably at tossing a grenade?"

"Yes the grenade guy. Call me when you're done."

She turned to Aune.

"Mr. Aune, if this helps us identifying whoever tries to hack my ship, you can consider yourself free to ..."

The door opens and a petite woman with a man even bigger than Stryker enters the room.

"What the fuck is going on here?"

Rebecca turns towards Marra, immediately takes a step back and moves one hand to her pistol.

"And you are?", she asks the two newcomers.
09 Sep 2016, 9:04pm
"His employer," states Marra boldly, nodding at Stryker and planting a hand on her hip, "what's your business with him?"
09 Sep 2016, 9:14pm
"And I'm the person who's thinking about requesting extradition for him because of assault with a deadly weapon. Also this is a military interrogation and as his employer you do not have the legal rights necessary to take part. You can wait outside and speak to your employee or to me after we're done here."
09 Sep 2016, 9:18pm
Stryker would look to Marra and Idris, "What, no balloon?"

"Allow me to explain," he would continue to speak to Marra while looking at Rebecca, "This pretty girl here has professed her undying love for me. In fact she's been unable to keep her hands off of me since I've come out of that blasted coma. It's a good thing you showed up too, because she was about to cart me off to make me into one of her love slaves...."
09 Sep 2016, 9:40pm
Marra shakes her head and waves a finger; "We all know that this isn't Federal jurisdiction and that my employee has rights. Stryker, don't say another word."

She flips open her PDA and hovers her thumb over the pad.

"I can call our lawyers and make this a very long, drawn out and ultimately embarrassing affair for you, officer. Or we can do this the easy way - he walks out with me and I'll give you something much more substantial to go on."
09 Sep 2016, 9:58pm
Rebecca looked annoyed at Stryker and her friendly mood was gone.
Then she spoke to Marra.

"While this system isn't federal jurisdiction, it cooperates with the Federation and there have been extraditions like this in the past. There's precedence for it and with all the witnesses seeing him dropping the grenade we have enough evidence to request it right now. Even your lawyers can't make this systems government go against the will of the Federation.
Anyways I, as well as the rest of my crew and my adjutants, could do without the hazzle and the bureaucracy, so I'm willing to listen to your offer."
09 Sep 2016, 10:04pm
Turns his hands up in frustration and mutters under his breath something about making that exact same point 10 minutes ago.
09 Sep 2016, 10:11pm
Marra grins.

"I knew you were a smart girl, officer. You have that look about you."

She takes a couple of slow steps forward as she continues;

"A man up in the bar area is attempting to launder stolen diamonds. Upon arrival, he bribed the barman to keep quiet, then tried to gain the favour of the other patrons by buying them all drinks. You'll easily find several witnesses to this. He tried to sell some to me and told me that he had more in his ship. Being a law abiding citizen, I refused, of course."

Marra folds her arms across her chest as she smiles at the Federal agent.

"Now, what's worth more to you, officer? Breaking up a multi-million credit diamond heist, or hauling in my dim-witted colleague here on some dubious charge?"
09 Sep 2016, 10:11pm
"The offer for a dinner for two was neither substantial nor clever, Mr. Aune."

She turned back to Marra.

"As you've already states. This isn't federal jurisdiction. I don't care about an illegal diamond hauler as much as I care about someone who tried to throw a grenade into my direction." Rebecca glances at Stryker.

"I already offered your employee a way to get out of this mess without ending up in a federal military prison. He was quite ... cooperative until you stormed in."


Last edit: 10 Sep 2016, 5:32am
09 Sep 2016, 10:59pm
Marra shakes her head in disbelief.

"So, you admit that you're out of your jurisdiction and that your harassing my employee on a personal basis?"

She looks over her shoulder; "You record that, Idris?"

The giant grunts with a nod.

Marra thumbs over the keypad on her PDA.

"Oh, my lawyer's gonna love this!"
10 Sep 2016, 5:54am
"That's an almost cute attempt of twisting my words. To begin with, I never claimed to be in federal jurisdiction. This system merely cooperates with the Federation in terms of prosecution. I have the official permission of the chief of station security to carry out an interrogation with your employee, so 'harassing' isn't quite the right word. Unlike you, I have the right to be in this room. The third is that the reasons for his arrest are nowhere near personal, there were some more people, some of them in the blast radius of the grenade your employee dropped. He is currently arrested by station security for 'assault with a deadly weapon' and not by the federal navy. Your lawyers can do whatever they want, but in the end they only delay the extradition. Now, if you would please wait outside, you're disrupting an interrogation."
10 Sep 2016, 7:05am
Marra doesn't look up from her tablet as she keys out a message.

"We're not going anywhere, officer."
10 Sep 2016, 8:08am
"Either you go voluntarily or I'll ask the armed men in front of the door to assist me."

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